Textual Chocolate vs Crimson - CRIMSON WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Alias Tourney

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Monday,
  October 20th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
• Check Ins are due by message to Sharp by Friday, October 17th 2014
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

First to 7, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

[Sharp]

Crimson has checked in

[Sharp]

Textual Chocolate is in

[Sharp]

Ext

[Sharp]

Crimson sent 10

[Sharp]

Textual Chocolate

Youre never reaching top 5 heights, so il stab u with a knife in time
W/ any top list only time criminal, is if he turns to a life of crime
You ain't got a shot, luck w/ this fools thin
Anaconda only chance you got, because being a snakes the way you win
When I proceed to the face, the punches have his pleas hot
When he proceeds to the face, he'll let any guy here giv him the money shot
Il fight u alone, I bet it's true you'll run
So if there's safety in numbers, ur the opposite when everyone'll kill u for fun
Throw you in the ocean cause I think your pure bland
N prove only time Crimson tide w/ u, is if u got a cover of the DVD in your hand


Crimson

Dude is flamboyant, it’s no secret he’s flagrantly gay
We knew Choc full of Nuts wayyyyy before that brand label was made
You're Pathetic. It's Sad you'll never make it you're hopeless slut
But if Misery loves Company, then explain to me why you're broke as fuck
I come out swingin so if I connect w/ one fist then you'll hurl
And when this Quick Key is done it'll beat a Pussy worse than I did to ya girl
Take all the shots you want, you're missin it dude
All it takes is one punch to put Chalk in a box like kids on the stoop
You ain't makin a move, you'll be at the bottom of the lake if you do
When I put the Tool to TC quicker than a Scion maintenance crew

[Mercules]

Nothing

vs.


Dude is flamboyant, it’s no secret he’s flagrantly gay
We knew Choc full of Nuts wayyyyy before that brand label was made
I come out swingin so if I connect w/ one fist then you'll hurl
And when this Quick Key is done it'll beat a Pussy worse than I did to ya girl
take all the shots you want, you're missin it dude
All it takes is one punch to put Chalk in a box like kids on the stoop


CLEAR CUT WHO THE WINNER IS IN THIS LOP SIDED BATTLE. CRIMSON HAD NICE FLOW, SWAG WORDPLAIZ ETC. TC'S VERSE WAS VERY WEAK. DIDNT LIKE ANYTHING IN IT
VOTE = CRIMSON

[Allen Knight]

Throw you in the ocean cause I think your pure bland
N prove only time Crimson tide w/ u, is if u got a cover of the DVD in your hand


Vs

Dude is flamboyant, it’s no secret he’s flagrantly gay
We knew Choc full of Nuts wayyyyy before that brand label was made
Take all the shots you want, you're missin it dude
All it takes is one punch to put Chalk in a box like kids on the stoop

V/crimson, text didnt have anything strong here tbh nothing crim had a decent
verse it was alot more consistent that text,. choc full of nuts was a decent bar

[Ghost1]

Anaconda

Vs

Chalk
Misery


I got crimson....tc had too much forced shit

[El Muffin]

Text had
Safety in numbers


Crimson had chalk. I like that

Misery is barellly passable

I got crimson by a smidgen

Iono bout some of 1st guys wp

[BROKE LESNAR]

Originally Posted by Sharp

Textual Chocolate

Youre never reaching top 5 heights, so il stab u with a knife in time
W/ any top list only time criminal, is if he turns to a life of crime

☆☆

You ain't got a shot, luck w/ this fools thin
Anaconda only chance you got, because being a snakes the way you win

☆☆☆☆

When I proceed to the face, the punches have his pleas hot
When he proceeds to the face, he'll let any guy here giv him the money shot

☆☆

Il fight u alone, I bet it's true you'll run
So if there's safety in numbers, ur the opposite when everyone'll kill u for fun

☆☆

Throw you in the ocean cause I think your pure bland
N prove only time Crimson tide w/ u, is if u got a cover of the DVD in your hand

☆☆


Crimson

Dude is flamboyant, it’s no secret he’s flagrantly gay
We knew Choc full of Nuts wayyyyy before that brand label was made

☆☆☆☆☆

You're Pathetic. It's Sad you'll never make it you're hopeless slut
But if Misery loves Company, then explain to me why you're broke as fuck

☆☆☆

I come out swingin so if I connect w/ one fist then you'll hurl
And when this Quick Key is done it'll beat a Pussy worse than I did to ya girl

☆☆

Take all the shots you want, you're missin it dude
All it takes is one punch to put Chalk in a box like kids on the stoop

☆☆

You ain't makin a move, you'll be at the bottom of the lake if you do
When I put the Tool to TC quicker than a Scion maintenance crew

☆☆☆☆☆

I have Crimson taking this based on his ability to recover from his misses with a cpl of outstanding bars while Choc couldn't seem to develop any rhythm.

v-Crimson

[Swerve]

Textual Chocolate has some idea, but so much wordplay was forced. Criminal and Anaconda could have been solid...the DVD line was okay.

vs.

Dude is flamboyant, it’s no secret he’s flagrantly gay
We knew Choc full of Nuts wayyyyy before that brand label was made
Take all the shots you want, you're missin it dude
All it takes is one punch to put Chalk in a box like kids on the stoop


Thought this was pretty one-sided. Chocolate didn't do much and Crimson had a lot more.

V/ Crimson

[Beyond]

Youre never reaching top 5 heights, so il stab u with a knife in time
W/ any top list only time criminal, is if he turns to a life of crime
Forced as fuck.
You ain't got a shot, luck w/ this fools thin
Anaconda only chance you got, because being a snakes the way you win
This is put together awful.
When I proceed to the face, the punches have his pleas hot
When he proceeds to the face, he'll let any guy here giv him the money shot
Pro seeds to the face? da fuck? Forced.
Il fight u alone, I bet it's true you'll run
So if there's safety in numbers, ur the opposite when everyone'll kill u for fun
Don't get it.
Throw you in the ocean cause I think your pure bland
N prove only time Crimson tide w/ u, is if u got a cover of the DVD in your hand
Good concept, shit direction

vs

Dude is flamboyant, it’s no secret he’s flagrantly gay
We knew Choc full of Nuts wayyyyy before that brand label was made
Good opener.
You're Pathetic. It's Sad you'll never make it you're hopeless slut
But if Misery loves Company, then explain to me why you're broke as fuck
Nah.
I come out swingin so if I connect w/ one fist then you'll hurl
And when this Quick Key is done it'll beat a Pussy worse than I did to ya girl
Played wordplay, good flip.
Take all the shots you want, you're missin it dude
All it takes is one punch to put Chalk in a box like kids on the stoop
Decent.
You ain't makin a move, you'll be at the bottom of the lake if you do
When I put the Tool to TC quicker than a Scion maintenance crew
Don't get it.


Overall alright battle. First guy was forced and executed poorly. If he is who I think he is, he has an okay rep, but he thinks he's a lot better than he is. This will hopefully be a reality check for him. Second guy pretty sure I know who they are, too. My nigga. Verse was just better, cleaner.

/v crim

[Destroyer]

Crimson tide almost worked

but the other dude killed it
chock full o nuts was hilarious
chalk in a box was decent

v/crimson