07-27-2014, 05:07 PM | #1 |
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K....lemme swag on em
My verses read like movie scripts. No slackin when the pen' s moving quick. I do my duty right. Plus i do the booty right. Smoothly satisfy the Nina Hartley type from Boogie Nights. U couldn't find more heart in a warrior's chest. A coroner's best friend when i order your death bed...after i slaughter your flesh. Bustin choppers n teks at imposters who test this monster of text. A mobster exec, holding meetings in Beijing n doing great things for the Black Market like Kevin Hart is...an animal w/the proper finesse. Stop hollerin fibs. I'm the baller n pimp who doesn't bother with pricks that can't garner a bitch. Shit... I'm cranberry n Goose sippin..get buried if u slippin..shots vary from two weapons when my ire's summoned. Hired gunmen will retire ur frontin or set fire to your entire apartment 'till it expires to nothin. Yall don't warrant bluffin. I'm Warren Buffett. A chip off the old block, gettin rich off of old stocks while u pitching coke rocks. Your not gettin off ur own block, so, stop with the grown talk! Gawd'f the choppy swag....style's bitchin'n flows hot. Yah.. When i come through..dippin in the crimson SS...Imma run through...a few chickens, cuz I'm fixin to dip my tip in some wet wet. So run dude..I'm not kiddin, kid its your best bet..I'm Sun Szu...inna fitted, siftin' through texts'best. Yes... I study the art diligently. Confined in a bunker my mind ponders plunder that'll tear u apart intelligently. We're miles apart mentally. Yours plateaus off where mine begins to form thoughts n the holy ghost starts entering me. Rendering enemies hopeless. U hacks'll get whacked to a bloody pulp. I dunno what u trying to fucking pull but I'm ultra gully fool. Plus, sonny's swolle. U scummy wolves'll drop in a heap on your bloody wool. Gullible rats get clapped with promptness. Three pratts from the arm will detach your noggin. These raps r astronomic. Astronaut shit. Squeeze so many rhymes in space n time so many times...ud swear i'm Martian. I wish the harshest of deaths to u cuz anything u attempt's feudal n your intent is pseudo. U a do it for the fame type n Imma crush u cuz i love the game type......an intense sumo. The end. Punto. . Puto. Last edited by Blanco Bishop; 08-01-2014 at 05:24 PM. |
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bitch face it, i'm barbaric and you basic in these bar examinations
its no stress to flex with extra extreme since you tested my steez a veteran weaponry team stepping from netcees to sesame street fuck it, i'll go hunting for this puppet with some monsters i created blanco soft but swears he lost fucks...nah, my doctrine is mayhem i bet this square can barely draw blood, a phlebotomist in training if the contra quit my payments, get paper an ask god to be your savior i'm slick as obama before the races, your problems were never major fuck your illogical politics, they never brought us the needed changes i plotted this over big bong rips of the dalai's ghanja in the himalayan's i get so exotic and islamic when i'm raging, allah been doing me favors he dropped a bomb on venezuela til you drowned in lava from the equator if blanco mob affiliated?, it's probably some grand knight reckless shit i'm gotti wit my language, taking ya klan life wit no evidence of prejudice i escaped on the autobahn with haze lit, banging nas in my spaceship my ill will to live has no limit, bro tripping...but you're not in my lane kid apocalypse calls for my cooperation when he's got drama with a sayan i'll put a beam to vegeta face then melt all of ya comical demonstrations i'm more unbreakable than david dunn and inspired by his train wreck your an accident waiting to happen, i paid elijah price for ya grave debt.
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08-06-2014, 09:23 PM | #5 |
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Camp here Nice battle Camps verse was nice Blanco I though had a lot of cool ideas but felt like he stretched a few of them Camp came off strong and was just flowing very nicely Cool battle Guys V camp bell
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first of all let me say, this was a nice s&f battle here.
so i copied & pasted both verses, then deleted what i deemed as filler. this is the final result.. Bishop.. My verses read like movie scripts. No slackin when the pen' s moving quick. I do my duty right. Plus i do the booty right. Smoothly satisfy the Nina Hartley type from Boogie Nights. U couldn't find more heart in a warrior's chest. A coroner's best friend when i order your death bed...after i slaughter your flesh. Bustin choppers n teks at imposters who test this monster of text. A mobster exec, I'm cranberry n Goose sippin..get buried if u slippin..shots vary from two weapons when my ire's summoned. Hired gunmen will retire ur frontin or set fire to your entire apartment 'till it expires to nothin. When i come through..dippin in the crimson SS...Imma run through...a few chickens, cuz I'm fixin to dip my tip in some wet wet. So run dude..I'm not kiddin, kid its your best bet..I'm Sun Szu...inna fitted, siftin' through texts'best. Yes... I study the art diligently. Confined in a bunker my mind ponders plunder that'll tear u apart intelligently. We're miles apart mentally. Yours plateaus off where mine begins to form thoughts n the holy ghost starts entering me. Rendering enemies hopeless. U hacks'll get whacked to a bloody pulp. I dunno what u trying to fucking pull but I'm ultra gully fool. Plus, sonny's swolle. U scummy wolves'll drop in a heap on your bloody wool. Gullible rats get clapped with promptness. Three pratts from the arm will detach your noggin. These raps r astronomic. Astronaut shit. Squeeze so many rhymes in space n time so many times...ud swear i'm Martian. Blanco dope multis throughout, flow was on point. Like to see less guntalk and more swag but if thats ur style thats ur style. the nina hartley/boogie nights, apartment, and holy ghosts entering me lines were fire. Camp Bell.. its no stress to flex with extra extreme since you tested my steez a veteran weaponry team stepping from netcees to sesame street blanco soft but swears he lost fucks...nah, my doctrine is mayhem i bet this square can barely draw blood, a phlebotomist in training i'm more unbreakable than david dunn and inspired by his train wreck your an accident waiting to happen, i paid elijah price for ya grave debt. Camp ur first four lines didnt quite match up rhyme wise. idk if a line was misplaced or something, but i edited down to my favorite lines anyways. the best was the draw blood/phlebotomist line. Vote-Bishop Last edited by jilti; 08-19-2014 at 02:41 PM. |
08-25-2014, 08:28 PM | #7 |
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both verses had some excellent strong points, and also some weaker areas which were quite surprising based on the aforementioned strengths.
it feels like both competitors here were running either hot or cold during their verses, without much in between. campbell started weak, in particular the 2nd line does not appear to flow well with the rest of it. but really the first half is average--nowhere near as good as the very strong second half. in the second half it appears a fire is lit. it starts to flow big-time, as well as some very impressive content. ...allah been doing me favors he dropped a bomb on venezuela til you drowned in lava from the equator best line i thought. great. ----- blanco's knack for rhymes stood out... i felt like it hit hard early.. on more than one occasion i noted a "sick" phrase.. but a few lines were less than impressive, When i come through..dippin in the crimson SS...Imma run through...a few chickens, cuz I'm fixin to dip my tip in some wet wet. So run dude..I'm not kiddin, kid its your best bet..I'm Sun Szu...inna fitted, siftin' through texts'best. i felt this was a bit lame, compared to the rest of it. I study the art diligently. Confined in a bunker my mind ponders plunder that'll tear u apart intelligently. We're miles apart mentally. Yours plateaus off where mine begins to form thoughts n the holy ghost starts entering me. then we are back to very strong, just like the beginning. the end was somewhere in between. ---- despite my nitpicking i really did enjoy much of these verses, just not in their entirety. i've got Blanco in a close one. i felt the bulk of his verse was strong whereas only the 2nd half of campbell's was strong. |
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Blanco had schemes but had no content or metaphors to back up them. Also your bars were mad stretched. Camp had some cool ideas i like the two quoted above especially the closer. Camp got this easily in the end though with more polished verse. Vote - Camp Bell |
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I feel Camp had a solid verse, the flow was different, wasn't as strong as it should have been in the beginning, but toward the end it picked up steam. As far as entertainment there wasn't really too much for me, due to some overly used lines and poorly executed concepts. It was a mediocre verse but was strengthened toward the end. The Nas spaceship line flow was decent however.
Blanco had a very entertaining verse that was fun to read. Felt his concepts were fresher and executed better as well as the flow being very good all the way through just about. The swag part def goes to blanc to cuz he seemed more confident or arrogant with his verse. I didn't like the numerous ellipsis instances his verse contained and I hated the closer lol! For a strong verse, it should have ended better. Still very good entertaining verse. V/Blanco |
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My verses read like movie scripts. No slackin when the pen' s moving quick. I do my duty right.
Plus i do the booty right. Smoothly satisfy the Nina Hartley type from Boogie Nights. (5/10) -- good intro, boosting yourself but no attack made yet U couldn't find more heart in a warrior's chest. A coroner's best friend when i order your death bed...after i slaughter your flesh. Bustin choppers n teks at imposters who test this monster of text. A mobster exec, (8/10) very good, even though the lines were hard to match up within a 4.4 beat holding meetings in Beijing n doing great things for the Black Market like Kevin Hart is...an animal w/the proper finesse. Stop hollerin fibs. I'm the baller n pimp who doesn't bother with pricks that can't garner a bitch. (3/10) Good first line, a bit drawn out… 2nd line was good but didn't really follow the 1st line. Shit... (not counting this as a line) I'm cranberry n Goose sippin..get buried if u slippin..shots vary from two weapons when my ire's summoned. Hired gunmen will retire ur frontin or set fire to your entire apartment 'till it expires to nothin. (9/10) these lines were good. Threatening, and kept to the same subject matter. Yall don't warrant bluffin. I'm Warren Buffett. A chip off the old block, gettin rich off of old stocks while u pitching coke rocks. Your not gettin off ur own block, so, stop with the grown talk! Gawd'f the choppy swag....style's bitchin'n flows hot. (4/10) I was impressed with the 1st line, but the 2nd seemed forced and did not rhyme 100% Yah.. (not a line again, deserves negative points the more this happens) When i come through..dippin in the crimson SS...Imma run through...a few chickens, cuz I'm fixin to dip my tip in some wet wet. So run dude..I'm not kiddin, kid its your best bet..I'm Sun Szu...inna fitted, siftin' through texts'best. (5/10) Sun Szu is spelled Sun Tzu. The first line was okay. THe second ling could have been much better. Yes... (not a line === -1 points for 3rd occurrence) I study the art diligently. Confined in a bunker my mind ponders plunder that'll tear u apart intelligently. We're miles apart mentally. Yours plateaus off where mine begins to form thoughts n the holy ghost starts entering me. (10/10) This one struck me as golden. Rendering enemies hopeless. U hacks'll get whacked to a bloody pulp. I dunno what u trying to fucking pull but I'm ultra gully fool. Plus, sonny's swolle. U scummy wolves'll drop in a heap on your bloody wool. (7/10 Average, even though swolle=swole Gullible rats get clapped with promptness. Three pratts from the arm will detach your noggin. These raps r astronomic. Astronaut shit. Squeeze so many rhymes in space n time so many times...ud swear i'm Martian. (7/10) Astronomic was too close to astronaut shit IMO. But this was good. I wish the harshest of deaths to u cuz anything u attempt's feudal n your intent is pseudo. U a do it for the fame type n Imma crush u cuz i love the game type......an intense sumo. (8/10) not the best closer, but good enough to score above average. I liked the 1st line a lot. The end. Punto. . (not a line, already gave you a - point) score 65 vs. bitch face it, i'm barbaric and you basic in these bar examinations its no stress to flex with extra extreme since you tested my steez (6//10) Las word did not rhyme, but I liked the words. a veteran weaponry team stepping from netcees to sesame street fuck it, i'll go hunting for this puppet with some monsters i created (7/10) Creative, but didn't rhyme ending words. Dropped it from a 10. blanco soft but swears he lost fucks...nah, my doctrine is mayhem i bet this square can barely draw blood, a phlebotomist in training (4/10) lines matched up well, did not rhyme, and line 1&2 didn't have too much to do with each other. if the contra quit my payments, get paper an ask god to be your savior i'm slick as obama before the races, your problems were never major (4/10) not offending, but good lyrics. fuck your illogical politics, they never brought us the needed changes i plotted this over big bong rips of the dalai's ghanja in the himalayan's (9/10) this line struck me well. It rhymed enough to carry over the message from line 1 to 2… and be a good read. i get so exotic and islamic when i'm raging, allah been doing me favors he dropped a bomb on venezuela til you drowned in lava from the equator (6/10) Not sure I got the point of this, but it flowed well. if blanco mob affiliated?, it's probably some grand knight reckless shit i'm gotti wit my language, taking ya klan life wit no evidence of prejudice (6/10) This was a better punch line. Insulted, and shit rhymed with prejudice enough to keep it at a 6 i escaped on the autobahn with haze lit, banging nas in my spaceship my ill will to live has no limit, bro tripping...but you're not in my lane kid (8/10) The 1st line was my preference of creativity -- the 2nd line brought it together. apocalypse calls for my cooperation when he's got drama with a sayan i'll put a beam to vegeta face then melt all of ya comical demonstrations (7/10) sayan=saiyan or = saying. Despite that, I think these two lines came together fairly well. i'm more unbreakable than david dunn and inspired by his train wreck your an accident waiting to happen, i paid elijah price for ya grave debt. (9/10) -- Good closer. score 66 In conclusion Blanco had 21 lines and could be disqualified, if you don't count the "Shit…", "Yah…", "Yes…", and :The end. Punto:. Camp Bell's lines were all lined up perfectly and flowed very well. Camp Bell obviously has some religious points of view that are recognized in his writing… but I like it. This was close as fuck after I added up the scores, but I still probably would have voted Camp Bell for over-all structure… even though many lines ended with words that did not rhyme. Also, I think Blanco should take a page out of "why everybody hates theMuzzl3" and shorten his lines; and try to add more structure. /v Camp Bell
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Umm camp murdered this
Specially towards the end
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i voted on this before but the breakdown was erased when i accidentally went back a page so im not going to go through all that again
both verses had alot going for them, camp had his first 3 and last 2 bars, the middle section wasnt that inspirational to me but he opened and closed rather nicely. blanco had his opener through texts best/yes, that was an immensely entertaining stretch to go on and i felt that won him the battle MVGT blanco |
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Camp held the fllow down for this battle and came to win
Blanco had flow as well but at some parts it got choppy for me and lines weren't hitting as hard tight battle either way vote: Camp.
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i liked blanco more
neither had wow bars, but his was cooler I guess? don't think swag n flow should be a thing |
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