04-16-2015, 12:53 AM | #1 |
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Mutilate 0-0 vs Allen Knight 0-0 - ALLEN WINS
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04-16-2015, 03:19 AM | #2 |
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Let's go 16 and squash beef fam, you down? @Allen Knight
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04-16-2015, 12:26 PM | #3 |
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Check, an 16 is cool.
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04-17-2015, 11:30 PM | #4 |
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u suck wit bitches - awkward when it comes to bone
So if Allen taking a girl out.. It's her comfort zone Fkn alcoholic, wallow in sorrows cuz you assed out Get jackdenyou'll licka shot till you pass out I admit. he did get a girl. But I'm not the one to tattle. She had Knight in shining armor.. cuz he ain't never fought a battle Heard he banged a girl named November.. He was on his grind Till 6 seconds in knight came sooner like ending daylight savings time After the same chick? No comp here, she said no.. Told em twice Then chose to stay at my crib over knight We both got perfect records, but not after the votes in tonight Cuz imma hand you ur first L like u neva smoked in ya life This tug of war, Sharp set you up I'll kill this pussy.. Bang a kitten But i should give you some slack..... Then fuck around and hang you with it! I see u with a throat tat.. some boring lyrics at best You claim Alpha? Bet. I'm in wolf mode.. Coming to take a bite out ya neck A bullet'll leave you sitting in a wheelchair, fractured skull You riding with ya woes... I gotta clear shot from Da grassi knoll Last edited by Mutilate; 04-18-2015 at 12:25 AM. |
04-18-2015, 12:13 AM | #5 |
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wtf u said 16 the fuck is that 32 lines LOL
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im bringin an aluminum bat to ur house & knock
i'll give Mewtwo swings to the skull & leave his cranium pokin out his top i stay beatin ur moms vag, ur a fuckin loser chump that bitch Levitt wen my dick disappears in her pussy like a Looper jump my fists'll destroy ur grill faggot, i'll toss ur best after these uppercuts Lanyard jaw's gonna be hanging off ur neck ur sluts a fat piece of shit & eatin's wreckin her bones Cuz your Dollhouse cheeseburgers the size of fuckin replica homes my goons ready to kidnap muthafuckas, i'll phone my zone one Culkin make u go MIA, u wont be leaving ur fuckin Home Alone i listen to illmatic before wars, then rip my targets flaws talkin shit about Nozzle geta hose tapped from ur mouth to a car exhaust ur ho's a virgin but i'll fuck her, ur to much of a coward too shit i told that stupid whore Eucalyptus dick & then i'll de-flower you the moment u joined NBL it crashed, i'll smoke u fast Mutated the league w/ his wackness n transformed it from dope to trash ICE.
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Definitely had AK taking this one w/ more creative bars and universally better execution.
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Meh
Ak one of the few whose consistent but the wordplay here was kinda weak but expected after reading the first verse, mutilates best attempt was the opener which we've seen many times before, I saw a armor shining knight vs AK, wow not good, bad verse Ak had dollhouse which was better than anything in verse one AK wins easily
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04-19-2015, 10:03 AM | #9 |
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u suck wit bitches - awkward when it comes to bone
So if Allen taking a girl out.. It's her comfort zone not bad Fkn alcoholic, wallow in sorrows cuz you assed out Get jackdenyou'll licka shot till you pass out ok idea but kinda convoluted delivery I admit. he did get a girl. But I'm not the one to tattle. She had Knight in shining armor.. cuz he ain't never fought a battle played Heard he banged a girl named November.. He was on his grind Till 6 seconds in knight came sooner like ending daylight savings time better but still played After the same chick? No comp here, she said no.. Told em twice Then chose to stay at my crib over knight I know it's played but I like this flip. the problem with this is that it's after 2 other knight flips We both got perfect records, but not after the votes in tonight Cuz imma hand you ur first L like u neva smoked in ya life good wording but played This tug of war, Sharp set you up I'll kill this pussy.. Bang a kitten But i should give you some slack..... Then fuck around and hang you with it! not feeling as much I see u with a throat tat.. some boring lyrics at best You claim Alpha? Bet. I'm in wolf mode.. Coming to take a bite out ya neck okay but more swagging than a punch. would be cool in a flex verse but meh here A bullet'll leave you sitting in a wheelchair, fractured skull You riding with ya woes... I gotta clear shot from Da grassi knoll kinda stretched im bringin an aluminum bat to ur house & knock i'll give Mewtwo swings to the skull & leave his cranium pokin out his top ok i stay beatin ur moms vag, ur a fuckin loser chump that bitch Levitt wen my dick disappears in her pussy like a Looper jump not feeling the levitt/loveit my fists'll destroy ur grill faggot, i'll toss ur best after these uppercuts Lanyard jaw's gonna be hanging off ur neck solid ur sluts a fat piece of shit & eatin's wreckin her bones Cuz your Dollhouse cheeseburgers the size of fuckin replica homes nice my goons ready to kidnap muthafuckas, i'll phone my zone one Culkin make u go MIA, u wont be leaving ur fuckin Home Alone nice i listen to illmatic before wars, then rip my targets flaws talkin shit about Nozzle geta hose tapped from ur mouth to a car exhaust ok ur ho's a virgin but i'll fuck her, ur to much of a coward too shit i told that stupid whore Eucalyptus dick & then i'll de-flower you kind of works, nothing major tho the moment u joined NBL it crashed, i'll smoke u fast Mutated the league w/ his wackness n transformed it from dope to trash ok but not feeling the wordplay cool tbh, shame mutilate had those 3 knight bars that were played otherwise it coulda been closer but I got allen comfortably v/ak |
04-20-2015, 05:43 PM | #10 |
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Ak was consistent. dollhouse was lolz. wasn't feeling as much from mutilate, those name lines are mad played. Alright verses though
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04-20-2015, 09:03 PM | #11 |
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Mutilate had the opener it was ok worded nic but your shit was to basic just gotta try and drop a bit more complex, like if your battling a dude whos been around forever dont use the first nameplays u can think of. Did u think knight in shining armor was not gonna be used before. Ak came decent more than enough for the win liked the levitt and dollhouse shit
Nice battle vote ak |
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