09-24-2016, 02:40 PM | #1 |
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Slecht Vs Silver - OPEN FOR VOTES
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09-24-2016, 08:19 PM | #3 |
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Ok
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09-25-2016, 07:29 PM | #4 |
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dropping tomorrow
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09-27-2016, 06:37 PM | #5 |
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She's think she attractive & wants to get stuffed like a build a bear.
I wouldn't spoon her though, it doesn't matter what silveware. I'll go super cred on this bitch, she better expect these heavy arms. one for this whore, leave her eyes popped out more ...than they already are. it looks like she celebrate halloween all year, with that scary head. and if she put anything on wax...shit I'd recommend those hairy legs. her facial features look like she's allergic to seafood,.now im gone to killer she get beat to death with my cock....that's a long john,...silver. if she think she in the race,.. watch my guns wreck her face. when im giving silver medal, that's an automatic second place
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09-28-2016, 01:41 AM | #6 |
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It late the war begun
I'll leave ya crippled and serve ya on hamburger bun better strap up next time ya come out or the next round is gonna a win for me by tech knockout! I'll give ya the bad eye so recognize ya not nice This not queer for the straight guy ya not trice YOU'LL never get the ability to spit You dropped a album still couldn't Make a hit Get in a rap battle with 50 Tyson and still get ya ass kicked But ALEAST I can while ya at Beyonce concert asking her she wants her pussy licked I'LL BURY YA and encased ya body in bricks Look like ya stuck in a chimney Call ya thick Nick Spray my name with a fatcap and I'll be there in a sec I'll cut ya straight up the neck |
09-28-2016, 09:10 AM | #7 |
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Sle - silverware lol, set up was nice too... Eyes popped out is true could've been worded better... Wax, ok... Long john didn't have a good tie in though, allergic to seafood wasn't enough... Ooooo I would've gone a dif way with this something like "heavens her other home, give her that silver metal she'll be gone to her second place."
Cool verse. First bar was lulz.... Silver - battle with 50 Tyson is lulz..., rest not so good. Vote - Slecht
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09-29-2016, 10:42 AM | #8 |
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Yeaup i also had slecht first bar kinda killed it solver was a bit too simple some of her punches werent self explanatory and yeah slecht just had better read still not a bad effort by silver just thought like i said before it was easier to understand slecths verse pretty much so yeah.....vote.....slecth
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10-07-2016, 02:46 PM | #9 |
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Vote: Slecto
The punches had a bit more intelligence behind them, like there was more relevance between the set up and punch and just made a lot more sense. |
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