08-06-2015, 07:37 PM | #1 |
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RND2. Bust vs Lotto Smirk {Bust wins}
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08-09-2015, 07:18 AM | #2 |
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Dooooog,
I spit phrases that thrill, but it's a hobby to murder too, See i got some frazes that kill.. In fact He Constantly bodies n buries u, If u can't beat um join um, that's a bitch move n u no longer should Rap S'like fraze gets u the ball on the block n u lob it up. u gotta POST stronger than that Ur too girly man, type to self tan in early Jan., n claim to suck a dick up mean Damn, I'd love to find a reason NOT to call latte bitch but when he coffee spits up cream Always writing long as verses.. Pure trash, I'm like bitch surrender the pen I mean ull drop 20 lines to get 1 quote.. Resulting in a hit percentage of 10.. ^thsts awful taste, so get back to tossin salads n talkin fake Cuz Why worry bout lotto smirk, when baby wipes'll get that shit eating grin off ya face Last edited by Bust; 08-10-2015 at 06:24 AM. Reason: Missed a word |
08-10-2015, 10:05 AM | #3 |
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if the weapons out, I'm killing I ain't missing u TRUST
cus when I'm letting them off it's certain the shots are destined to bust I'm a Bond villain u lack vision no-ones predicting u might win u had a good run on the odd job but now ima take ur head off just like him this is easy for me, u sleazy wen u free, against u I'll waste ten cus when I write Ispaz rhymes u just looked retarded when u faced them don't give a fuck what u done on RB cus on netcees u a joker u NEED that work on rap battles cus here we still apply to u as mediocre The guns are out making sure u dead, hush featured u for to long ur lame So I'm entering the next round, emptying it N leaving u w/ just 2 mags to your name G/l Last edited by Lotto Smirk; 08-10-2015 at 10:08 AM. |
08-11-2015, 07:03 AM | #4 |
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I spit phrases that thrill, but it's a hobby to murder too,
See i got some frazes that kill.. In fact He Constantly bodies n buries u, okay If u can't beat um join um, that's a bitch move n u no longer should Rap S'like fraze gets u the ball on the block n u lob it up. u gotta POST stronger than that cool idea Ur too girly man, type to self tan in early Jan., n claim to suck a dick up mean Damn, I'd love to find a reason NOT to call latte bitch but when he coffee spits up cream cool idea but indirect? Always writing long as verses.. Pure trash, I'm like bitch surrender the pen I mean ull drop 20 lines to get 1 quote.. Resulting in a hit percentage of 10.. weak. ^thsts awful taste, so get back to tossin salads n talkin fake Cuz Why worry bout lotto smirk, when baby wipes'll get that shit eating grin off ya face second line was nice but the first ruined it a bit.. had some nice ideas - decent verse but can use work in all areas - better set ups will compliment your good ideas on the second line. v if the weapons out, I'm killing I ain't missing u TRUST cus when I'm letting them off it's certain the shots are destined to bust not really hard hitting? I'm a Bond villain u lack vision no-ones predicting u might win u had a good run on the odd job but now ima take ur head off just like him cool this is easy for me, u sleazy wen u free, against u I'll waste ten cus when I write Ispaz rhymes u just looked retarded when u faced them cool don't give a fuck what u done on RB cus on netcees u a joker u NEED that work on rap battles cus here we still apply to u as mediocre decent The guns are out making sure u dead, hush featured u for to long ur lame So I'm entering the next round, emptying it N leaving u w/ just 2 mags to your name okay solid verse - first bar was weak though but overall it was good. overall - vote - Lotto Smirk - had the better verse overall imo - both had a good showing though - stay up. |
08-11-2015, 11:47 PM | #5 |
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I spit phrases that thrill, but it's a hobby to murder too,
See i got some frazes that kill.. In fact He Constantly bodies n buries u ----aite'ish Ur too girly man, type to self tan in early Jan., n claim to suck a dick up mean Damn, I'd love to find a reason NOT to call latte bitch but when he coffee spits up cream ---not a fan of double wp's but this was aite. Shoulda left the coffee wp out tho IMO. Vs. I'm a Bond villain u lack vision no-ones predicting u might win u had a good run on the odd job but now ima take ur head off just like him this is easy for me, u sleazy wen u free, against u I'll waste ten cus when I write Ispaz rhymes u just looked retarded when u faced them ----Imma try to help u out bro. These two bars are pretty much the exact same. Shoulda picked one and trashed the other The guns are out making sure u dead, hush featured u for to long ur lame So I'm entering the next round, emptying it N leaving u w/ just 2 mags to your name ----I liked where this was going then it took a turn for the worse. Execution killed it. V. Bust |
08-12-2015, 05:03 PM | #6 |
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Dooooog,
Doog? I spit phrases that thrill, but it's a hobby to murder too, See i got some frazes that kill.. In fact He Constantly bodies n buries u, Meh If u can't beat um join um, that's a bitch move n u no longer should Rap S'like fraze gets u the ball on the block n u lob it up. u gotta POST stronger than that Played Ur too girly man, type to self tan in early Jan., n claim to suck a dick up mean Damn, I'd love to find a reason NOT to call latte bitch but when he coffee spits up cream Fire....kinda gay tho man lol Always writing long as verses.. Pure trash, I'm like bitch surrender the pen I mean ull drop 20 lines to get 1 quote.. Resulting in a hit percentage of 10.. Eh ^thsts awful taste, so get back to tossin salads n talkin fake Cuz Why worry bout lotto smirk, when baby wipes'll get that shit eating grin off ya face This is ok I guess....weird tho if the weapons out, I'm killing I ain't missing u TRUST cus when I'm letting them off it's certain the shots are destined to bust Ok I'm a Bond villain u lack vision no-ones predicting u might win u had a good run on the odd job but now ima take ur head off just like him Eh this is easy for me, u sleazy wen u free, against u I'll waste ten cus when I write Ispaz rhymes u just looked retarded when u faced them Seen too many Ispaz flips lately an this wasn't a good one NE ways don't give a fuck what u done on RB cus on netcees u a joker u NEED that work on rap battles cus here we still apply to u as mediocre This was cool The guns are out making sure u dead, hush featured u for to long ur lame So I'm entering the next round, emptying it N leaving u w/ just 2 mags to your name Played G/l Pussy^ Didn't love this battle. Niether really blew me away.....lotto was a bit too simple an bust was trynna do some weird shit w his verse.......bust still had the lotb for me w his latte line tho so I'll edge it to him V bust |
08-12-2015, 07:59 PM | #7 |
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I spit phrases that thrill, but it's a hobby to murder too,
See i got some frazes that kill.. In fact He Constantly bodies n buries u, predictable and done a lot but relevant If u can't beat um join um, that's a bitch move n u no longer should Rap S'like fraze gets u the ball on the block n u lob it up. u gotta POST stronger than that post flips are pretty done at this point. appreciate the connections you're trying to make but not hugely feeling it Ur too girly man, type to self tan in early Jan., n claim to suck a dick up mean Damn, I'd love to find a reason NOT to call latte bitch but when he coffee spits up cream la-te and lot-a don't quite work for me cause i'd say 'lot-uh'. but this makes sense and is cool imo Always writing long as verses.. Pure trash, I'm like bitch surrender the pen I mean ull drop 20 lines to get 1 quote.. Resulting in a hit percentage of 10.. I think I'm misisng something with this? or you just did simple bar division? ^thsts awful taste, so get back to tossin salads n talkin fake Cuz Why worry bout lotto smirk, when baby wipes'll get that shit eating grin off ya face smirk lines are done a lot on him. this is ok if the weapons out, I'm killing I ain't missing u TRUST cus when I'm letting them off it's certain the shots are destined to bust cool I'm a Bond villain u lack vision no-ones predicting u might win u had a good run on the odd job but now ima take ur head off just like him did he beat odd? idk but if he did this is ok this is easy for me, u sleazy wen u free, against u I'll waste ten cus when I write Ispaz rhymes u just looked retarded when u faced them kinda predictable, I spaz flips are frequent enough where I'd shy away from just using those wihtout any other ltayesr don't give a fuck what u done on RB cus on netcees u a joker u NEED that work on rap battles cus here we still apply to u as mediocre what does 'apply to u as mediocre' mean? I get what you're going for but that doesn't make sense to me The guns are out making sure u dead, hush featured u for to long ur lame So I'm entering the next round, emptying it N leaving u w/ just 2 mags to your name mag lines are dead to me. Maybe its because I write them on the reg but they're done to death man close but I got bust with slihglty better misses and thats' really all. tight battle, props to both. v/bust |
08-12-2015, 09:36 PM | #8 |
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I'm not trying to go all crazy with the breakdowns
I got lotto here tho was t feeling much of busts verse, didn't understand all the fraze references thought odd job was pretty dope, mediocre was ok too v/lotto |
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08-13-2015, 11:16 AM | #10 |
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If u can't beat um join um, that's a bitch move n u no longer should Rap
S'like fraze gets u the ball on the block n u lob it up. u gotta POST stronger than that Always writing long as verses.. Pure trash, I'm like bitch surrender the pen I mean ull drop 20 lines to get 1 quote.. Resulting in a hit percentage of 10.. vs if the weapons out, I'm killing I ain't missing u TRUST cus when I'm letting them off it's certain the shots are destined to bust One had the more clever ideas and the stronger execution, the other one just came w/ a dry drop no lines wowed me or anything, 100. v/Bust
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08-13-2015, 01:38 PM | #11 |
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