Rap Beast Scheme

[Vapeo]

I'm not sleeping but my eyes are closed, thinking about things that I know nobody can ever know.
But you never know, maybe I’ll stumble upon something out of this world, something incredible. Say Eureka!
I think enlightenment comes outside the theaters, we’re all actors at this stage of life, in poetic meter.
Wife beaters to real leaders, we’re all following a script. Our lives are poetic even when they’re nondescript.
Tragic catastrophes occurring around the world, rapidly. Because we don’t know how to live! Actually,
every time we make mistakes, we put it all at stake, cause no one knows what happens after we, die.
After we are gone, we still stick around, like dead trees falling in a forest, making echoes and sounds. Why?
Don’t know the answer to these questions, and yet most are content with leaving feeble legacies and living lies.
I get critical and start asking these questions cause I really truly want to understand why!

But drop the big picture, move into small scale. No one can answer my questions, I’m beating a dead whale.
Or is it a horse, I can’t remember well, oh well.

(EDIT)

[Split Eight]

you've posted at least six threads without feeding any other pieces. Not even a comment.

Including a thread where you literally begged for feedback.

It's time. Tag me when you've paid your debt to society. Otherwise this and future threads stay closed

[Split Eight]

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[Mr. J]

the lines were very stretched in this...
not sure how you wanted me to vibe to your flow


Wife beaters to real leaders, we’re all following a script. Our lives are poetic even when they’re nondescript.
Tragic catastrophes occurring around the world, rapidly. Because we don’t know how to live! Actually,

^^^^
this was a cool little attempt if you shortened it & twisted it
you have the whole concept of rhyming & have a decent idea on transitions...
but with some adjustments I think you will shape up to be a memorable rhymer
perhaps you will develop a flow that works with your style.
keep it up shep