12-13-2013, 05:19 AM | #1 |
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call me dark maul evil king robot feelings bling in rotted ceilings
phantasmos black glocks and c4 war mind control my heartbeat long days in the waters shark week bedbugs in the sheets of anarchy my veins never pump defeat just look low holes is deep fallen asleep caustic applause by zombie hand fans glance things get a lil warmer when the lambs stand serve a purpose and firstest to murderous worstest gray skies spin intricate webs within my 8 eyes laylines vibrate in space signs walkin out the cave blind a***ia laced the grape wines cut a angle that breaks a snake spine i make time for everything so you cant take mine Last edited by brokenhal0; 12-13-2013 at 05:30 AM. |
12-13-2013, 08:53 AM | #2 |
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Bedbugs in the sheets of anarchy was a cool touch
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12-13-2013, 10:04 PM | #3 |
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"serve a purpose and firstest to murderous worstest gray skies
spin intricate webs within my 8 eyes laylines vibrate in space signs walkin out the cave blind a***ia laced the grape wines " Yes. Always one of the more interesting reads in open mic. I prefer most of your other drops to this but still fun to read.
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12-22-2013, 11:32 PM | #4 |
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Nice stuff. Versatile wording and unconventional flow.
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