Take your meds.

[veritas]

Yo GABA GABA! Lemme tinker off in your neurotransmitters
And bomb on phony devils and some Euro bland spitters
You love your mental prisons, shit you built them all yourselves
And I can tell a lot about a human by whatever lines their shelves
My character is well defined and I love the freedom of the certainty
I love to see other’s insecurities try to prove my rhymes absurdity
“YOUR DAD.” Maybe you have heard of me?
Who cares about this world’s stuff, I got a mansion in Eternity
I bruise ovaries when I am smashing, giving cervix surgery
I aint gotta be the best, I am actually the worst perfectly
My advice is their atoning. I am toting, spitting hot, spitting dope I mean
Microexpressions behind the pharmaceutical culture’s known to dream
The difference between resources and resourcefulness
The therapy age forgot decisions shape destiny’s course for us
So zombie out son…pop dem meds and then makes some tweets about it….
I laugh at psychological defenses, I chuckle at masked deceptions
The lies we tell ourselves are truly our most dangerous weapons
No man has all the answers, no man has it figured all out
The man that says that he has, is truthfully riddled with doubt
This planet’s leaders are ridiculous. Arm chair quarterbacks are even worse
GOD aint gotta have called for people to speak for hours un rehearsed
The doctor talks more than listens. The politician listens to the lobbyists
Show me what a man does when he is all alone, and I will show u what his hobby is
Show me how he handles NO and I will show you who he really is
u have not started to live until u face death, would u be willing to kill to save a life?
I will be free with my every breath, and every day I am blessed with is gave to fight

[Split]

The doctor talks more than listens. The politician listens to the lobbyists
Show me what a man does when he is all alone, and I will show u what his hobby is

best line

pretty good stuff. was a weird hybrid flex that combined braggadocio w/ topical elements, but it worked altogether cause it transitioned really well conceptually. keep keyin

[Vulgar]

I aint gotta be the best, I am actually the worst perfectly
My advice is their atoning. I am toting, spitting hot, spitting dope I mean
Microexpressions behind the pharmaceutical culture’s known to dream
The difference between resources and resourcefulness
The therapy age forgot decisions shape destiny’s course for us
^You really stepped it up here with these bars. Those are nicely communicated. First line of the bunch is particularly witty.

Makes me curious about my own book collection...I've a lot of books I haven't read yet in my small book collection. No doubt I will collect more of the years (that I probably won't read but just look at until they collect dust.) Bad habit of mine.

Anyway, solid drop.

[Eŋg]

Veritas is the truth.

[Rojo187]

Good shyt...that shyt had a mean ass flow to it....almost too perfect...I would say add more personality to it..if you gon bag about smashing ovaries..add some swag...juss more emotion....other than that...the shyt is hot...

[Coup]

The lies we tell ourselves are truly our most dangerous weapons
No man has all the answers, no man has it figured all out
The man that says that he has, is truthfully riddled with doubt

quoted for truth.


Strong voice in this, this was busting' form its seems.

Schemes were lose, unpolished...gave it an angry tone.


good drop

@VERITAS peep out my crucible peice...some similar themes bro

[veritas]

My advice is their atoning. I am toting, spitting hot, spitting dope I mean

seratonin, dopamine...

surprised no one caught that...

[Objective]

@VERITAS: Perhaps it wasn't obvious enough, but it's clear as the sky when you mention it tho'. Either way, I enjoyed the read. It'd be cool to do a collabo with you on a similar topic sometime if you're up for it.

I laugh at psychological defenses, I chuckle at masked deceptions
The lies we tell ourselves are truly our most dangerous weapons
No man has all the answers, no man has it figured all out
The man that says that he has, is truthfully riddled with doubt

^This stuff is on some profound shit. Truer words have never been spoken on these boards.

Keep postin'.

[CopyPat]

sick man. this was really solid. first off i liked the content and message/realness behind this. was interesting to me, u had some really good ideas about how the world works, enjoyed it. u also brought everything together with a smooth flow and some good scheming so it worked really well. just a nice overall good drop dude. proppers, you should post more in this section

[dead man]

I am toting, spitting hot, spitting dope I mean

i see what you did there..

this was pretty interesting coming from you in that i have never really read you flex-rhyming, all the verses i have read from you have been more directional

I aint gotta be the best, I am actually the worst perfectly

ha

The lies we tell ourselves are truly our most dangerous weapons

Show me what a man does when he is all alone, and I will show u what his hobby is

u have not started to live until u face death

its as if you are wrapping rhyme around nuggets of insight you were intent on telling us anyway. i feel like you are trying to shake us awake. knowing you're not responsible if we keep sleeping anyway.

i like a lot of what you have to say man. it seems as though you're coming from an honest place, and are not intending on being preachy or trying to indoctrinate anybody. just throw a few rhymes up that actually are saying something.

as a literary hip-hop work i was not a fan of it's execution. there was no rhythm to this that i was catching on to. but as a piece of writing, it was something worth reading if only because you have many of the thought provoking statements mentioned above.

i hope you continue to drop OM's brother..




thanks

[Darth Yoda]

just let go.

[Geno]

veritas pisses me off when he writes this well in OM and not in leagues. wtf man, your a beast when your toying around... or is the league when your really toying around?

i.e.
My character is well defined and I love the freedom of the certainty
I love to see other’s insecurities try to prove my rhymes absurdity


hmmmmm..

[veritas]

did you see what i did with seratonin dead man?

[veritas]

Originally Posted by Darth Yoda

just let go.

of?

[Flow]

@VERITAS lol just read this for my writers challenge - the serotonin an dope I mean lines were very obvious and very cool. Dunno how it went unnoticed - nice shit

[veritas]