10-09-2020, 01:55 PM | #1 |
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WEEK 2: Blue Bayou 1-0 VS Dave 1-0 BLUE BAYOU WINS
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10-09-2020, 04:02 PM | #2 |
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10-13-2020, 03:40 AM | #3 |
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Blue verse:
i come firing out the gate, every opener my wit is just on if Dave comes firing out the gate, there’s a black kid on his lawn fuck Britain yo i’m killin this ferry told em ‘put your Dukes up’ he posted pics of William & Harry no consistency, wack concepts, just stop it dude it’s assplay after assplay, like the only reason aero lost to you i'm spiritual, love connecting w/ the dead & all the stress involved last time you saw a medium you put it back on the shelf for the extra small Nobu to me is where i eat every night cuz dammit i’m rich.. Nobu to you is another lonely night with your hand on ur dick #1 in the power rankings i’m exciting with swag only way you’ll make the list is if Zuch says “yo – i need help writing the mag” cats say there’s style preference in the league and i think that its true different strokes for different folks.. girls use a thumb & one finger for you a trendsetter?! bro everyone thinks you’re a joke yeahhh your styles distinct alright, everyone says distinct in their vote |
10-13-2020, 04:43 PM | #5 |
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Dave verse:
What I’ll do to this Canuck fairy is a touch scary You’ll see an axe and blues hopping on one leg and it isn’t Chuck Berry If this guy leaves town, his wife sleeps around; time to rethink it If that relationship was any more on the rocks then Ouch would try to drink it A man of many talents, but some hardly sound fair Ear to the ground and he can hear trains coming - mom’s getting bukkake’d downstairs My bars are looking to son, a lot of people fear when I rhyme Blue’s bars are looking to sun, probably a good idea at the time We can’t throw hands cus if it’s beef I’ll dismember this character Come through swinging cans and knocking out teeth like I’m Kevin Mcallister My idea of a date is making movies, always end with something to show His is A Few Good Men at the theatre and taking at least one of em home We all like to sleep around but this guy plays the part unusual If he go home and mull it over that’s just his trailer park booty call You can catch me dropping thousands on route to lounging out in Cali If blue ever sees five figures it just means my team have found him in an alley |
10-13-2020, 08:41 PM | #6 |
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Excited for this one...
BB: i come firing out the gate, every opener my wit is just on if Dave comes firing out the gate, there’s a black kid on his lawn fuck Britain yo i’m killin this ferry told em ‘put your Dukes up’ he posted pics of William & Harry i'm spiritual, love connecting w/ the dead & all the stress involved last time you saw a medium you put it back on the shelf for the extra small #1 in the power rankings i’m exciting with swag only way you’ll make the list is if Zuch says “yo – i need help writing the mag” a trendsetter?! bro everyone thinks you’re a joke yeahhh your styles distinct alright, everyone says distinct in their vote vs. evaD: If this guy leaves town, his wife sleeps around; time to rethink it If that relationship was any more on the rocks then Ouch would try to drink it A man of many talents, but some hardly sound fair Ear to the ground and he can hear trains coming - mom’s getting bukkake’d downstairs My bars are looking to son, a lot of people fear when I rhyme Blue’s bars are looking to sun, probably a good idea at the time My idea of a date is making movies, always end with something to show His is A Few Good Men at the theatre and taking at least one of em home Great battle guys. Bold is the lotb. I got Blue 5-4, he wins in a close one. Vote: Blue Bayou
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10-14-2020, 11:24 AM | #7 |
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What I’ll do to this Canuck fairy is a touch scary
You’ll see an axe and blues hopping on one leg and it isn’t Chuck Berry cool If this guy leaves town, his wife sleeps around; time to rethink it If that relationship was any more on the rocks then Ouch would try to drink it i like it A man of many talents, but some hardly sound fair Ear to the ground and he can hear trains coming - mom’s getting bukkake’d downstairs lollll tf My bars are looking to son, a lot of people fear when I rhyme Blue’s bars are looking to sun, probably a good idea at the time prolly over my head We can’t throw hands cus if it’s beef I’ll dismember this character Come through swinging cans and knocking out teeth like I’m Kevin Mcallister kinda corny My idea of a date is making movies, always end with something to show His is A Few Good Men at the theatre and taking at least one of em home lolll We all like to sleep around but this guy plays the part unusual If he go home and mull it over that’s just his trailer park booty call lightt You can catch me dropping thousands on route to lounging out in Cali If blue ever sees five figures it just means my team have found him in an alley niice Vs. i come firing out the gate, every opener my wit is just on if Dave comes firing out the gate, there’s a black kid on his lawn this killed me fuck Britain yo i’m killin this ferry told em ‘put your Dukes up’ he posted pics of William & Harry loll no consistency, wack concepts, just stop it dude it’s assplay after assplay, like the only reason aero lost to you hard i'm spiritual, love connecting w/ the dead & all the stress involved last time you saw a medium you put it back on the shelf for the extra small cool but it only works one way Nobu to me is where i eat every night cuz dammit i’m rich.. Nobu to you is another lonely night with your hand on ur dick loll tf #1 in the power rankings i’m exciting with swag only way you’ll make the list is if Zuch says “yo – i need help writing the mag” ouch cats say there’s style preference in the league and i think that its true different strokes for different folks.. girls use a thumb & one finger for you dead a trendsetter?! bro everyone thinks you’re a joke yeahhh your styles distinct alright, everyone says distinct in their vote eh V/blue bayou. Cool battle, i think blue edges this one for me.
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10-14-2020, 11:58 AM | #8 |
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i come firing out the gate, every opener my wit is just on
if Dave comes firing out the gate, there’s a black kid on his lawn fuck Britain yo i’m killin this ferry told em ‘put your Dukes up’ he posted pics of William & Harry no consistency, wack concepts, just stop it dude it’s assplay after assplay, like the only reason aero lost to you Nobu to me is where i eat every night cuz dammit i’m rich.. Nobu to you is another lonely night with your hand on ur dick Dukes up was fireee, opener was cool would have been better on Cashius, assplay was dope I tried to do something similar this week yours was much better, Nobu was fire with nice swag. Didn’t like: different strokes didn’t land, distinct not my style, make the list too straightforward Vs What I’ll do to this Canuck fairy is a touch scary You’ll see an axe and blues hopping on one leg and it isn’t Chuck Berry A man of many talents, but some hardly sound fair Ear to the ground and he can hear trains coming - mom’s getting bukkake’d downstairs We can’t throw hands cus if it’s beef I’ll dismember this character Come through swinging cans and knocking out teeth like I’m Kevin Mcallister You can catch me dropping thousands on route to lounging out in Cali If blue ever sees five figures it just means my team have found him in an alley Had to google the chuck berry line but I liked it. Train line was the best in the battle. Swinging cans was a cool visual. Closer was a nice flip. Didn’t like: The son line, should’ve dropped it. Mullet a little light. Ouch line was a bit straightforward imo Close battle, Dave had lotb but Dukes up was a close second. It’s a hard one to vote on but I think maybe Blue was a little more consistent even in the ones I didn’t like they were a bit better then the ones I didn’t like from Dave. For that reason I’m going with Blue, barely |
10-14-2020, 04:33 PM | #9 |
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This is the best battle I've read so far. Both were consistently well worded and witty with very similar styles. Neither verse had many ehh lines/ideas, so it came down to who had the higher notes consistently.
This was incredibly close, and I honestly think I could choose either one, depending on the day. I'd probably vote tie if that was an option. As I can't do that.... I think Dave's opener was the line of the battle (executed really well with great wording). But, I think the second half of his verse fell off slightly, at least compared to Blue's. Blue takes it in a close, but really solid, one.
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10-15-2020, 12:16 AM | #10 |
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Blue:
i come firing out the gate, every opener my wit is just on if Dave comes firing out the gate, there’s a black kid on his lawn fuck Britain yo i’m killin this ferry told em ‘put your Dukes up’ he posted pics of William & Harry no consistency, wack concepts, just stop it dude it’s assplay after assplay, like the only reason aero lost to you Nobu to me is where i eat every night cuz dammit i’m rich.. Nobu to you is another lonely night with your hand on ur dick cats say there’s style preference in the league and i think that its true different strokes for different folks.. girls use a thumb & one finger for you Dave: What I’ll do to this Canuck fairy is a touch scary You’ll see an axe and blues hopping on one leg and it isn’t Chuck Berry A man of many talents, but some hardly sound fair Ear to the ground and he can hear trains coming - mom’s getting bukkake’d downstairs We can’t throw hands cus if it’s beef I’ll dismember this character Come through swinging cans and knocking out teeth like I’m Kevin Mcallister My idea of a date is making movies, always end with something to show His is A Few Good Men at the theatre and taking at least one of em home Fuck, this was a good ass battle. Dave, you really kicked it into high gear here man. Chuck Berry might be LOTB, bukkake might be #2. Blue, Nobu was dope, dukes was dope, different stokes was dope. You're my guy, but this was way closer than I imagined before actually reading it, and I hope nobody takes that as a diss or me being an asshole lol. Completely complimentary. You both dropped verses that I'd feel confident giving verse of the week to. Blue gets the vote. I had to re-read this like 12 times, but Blue gets it on crisper wording and consistency. V - Blue
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10-15-2020, 05:39 PM | #11 |
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My vote got lost in the reply button not cooperating (bad connection really) but I had dave in a close one. Good wording from both but I was not in the mood for some of the premises for the bars. I was equal in quotes, and blue's wording was betterbut Dave's opener did just enough for me
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10-15-2020, 05:45 PM | #12 |
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i come firing out the gate, every opener my wit is just on
if Dave comes firing out the gate, there’s a black kid on his lawn loool fuck Britain yo i’m killin this ferry told em ‘put your Dukes up’ he posted pics of William & Harry lmao no consistency, wack concepts, just stop it dude it’s assplay after assplay, like the only reason aero lost to you ok i'm spiritual, love connecting w/ the dead & all the stress involved last time you saw a medium you put it back on the shelf for the extra small ehh Nobu to me is where i eat every night cuz dammit i’m rich.. Nobu to you is another lonely night with your hand on ur dick not feeling this #1 in the power rankings i’m exciting with swag only way you’ll make the list is if Zuch says “yo – i need help writing the mag” okk cats say there’s style preference in the league and i think that its true different strokes for different folks.. girls use a thumb & one finger for you cool a trendsetter?! bro everyone thinks you’re a joke yeahhh your styles distinct alright, everyone says distinct in their vote ok vs.. What I’ll do to this Canuck fairy is a touch scary You’ll see an axe and blues hopping on one leg and it isn’t Chuck Berry lmaooo this is fire If this guy leaves town, his wife sleeps around; time to rethink it If that relationship was any more on the rocks then Ouch would try to drink it ok.. ouch bars not fan A man of many talents, but some hardly sound fair Ear to the ground and he can hear trains coming - mom’s getting bukkake’d downstairs deadd dude My bars are looking to son, a lot of people fear when I rhyme Blue’s bars are looking to sun, probably a good idea at the time ehh We can’t throw hands cus if it’s beef I’ll dismember this character Come through swinging cans and knocking out teeth like I’m Kevin Mcallister decent My idea of a date is making movies, always end with something to show His is A Few Good Men at the theatre and taking at least one of em home cool We all like to sleep around but this guy plays the part unusual If he go home and mull it over that’s just his trailer park booty call not feeling this much but ok You can catch me dropping thousands on route to lounging out in Cali If blue ever sees five figures it just means my team have found him in an alley coool dope ass battle.. dave put some fire here.. chuck berry was creative af and the train coming was smooth as butter.. blue had some good lines, the black kid was hilarious for some reason & dukes too but dave was out of the box here, so i v / for eVad |
10-15-2020, 06:40 PM | #13 |
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This was fire
I got blue here Put ur dukes up is the kind of bar that makes me wish I wrote it . Amazing Five fingers was cool. Hear a train coming was insane lol that’s a crazy line Dave had references I didn’t get sadly Blues opener was dope I didn’t know dave was a racist tho That’s fucked up Vote blue
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Out the gate is dope Dukes up is dope Assplay lol dopest aero ref. thus far Nobu is disappointing bc I had a nobu bar on the ready. Dope tho Make the list is cleeean, clever i like it a lot Dave Opener is nasty On the rocks is dope Ear to the ground omg fire Swinging cans is aight Five figures is fucking fire, wow Mannnnnn this is a dope battle Very fucking close I just found Dave's standouts to be more impactful The concepts were better when comparing, IMO (minus swinging cans). Bangers Dave gmv
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