ROUND 1 - Vainglorious vs. Karaoke/mael - AERO/DOM WIN

[PancakeBrah]

Due Date: Monday, 8/26, Midnight.
Line Limit: 16 Mininum/24 Max.
Extensions by Request

@Aero
@Dominate
@Karaoke
@Mael

[StarFaggot]

Light work.

16.

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

In...

Bye...

[Dominate]

Yessir

[StarFaggot]

@Mael

[Mael]

Check.

[StarFaggot]

Ext?

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

ok...

Bye...

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

I can't stop laughing at all the played shit this guy drops
The way Aero abuses 10 year old concepts has TYSON setting up his tripod
Karaoke and I share a passion to spit bars & clown for fun
As for what gloryhole heartedly loves.. it's Aero using Dom's mouth as 1
Dom, you're a disgrace to your fam. Keep slitting ya wrist
Talking about hypothetical relatives while ya parents deny you even exist
You're both gay as fuck, I don't get why this fag's cocky
Naming yourselves Vein proves you'd run through every inch of a man's body
I'll tie them up and throw the both of these fags in ditches
Empty the clip in them then leave their team missing like Madden glitches
Dom, u should stick to teaching, battling isn't your forte
Cuz your recipe for success got Strikta's shit looking gourmet
I'm a pimp, I'd put Aero's chick on the strip if she needs bread
The way I got that pussy on lock, she could pass for the bitch in Reed's thread
Even ur girl doesn't call u the goat, u'll never hear that around your lover
His head's been in the clouds so long, u'd think he inspired Drake's album cover

Bye...

[StarFaggot]

Step & be served. No question Aero & Dom'll sever these herbs
‘specially when Karaoke lives up to his name & Drops the Ball on Every Word
Mael your house is depressing you aint convincing no girls to stay
Anyone living in that Paddlebawl & better get used to playing 1 person games
I'm getting my rocks off in your girl's house by sexing her fam
you're getting your rocks off at her window singing with a live Mexican band
You think of an Aero a Dom you'll think these dudes is manly
When you think of a Kare a Mael you think of sweet little chewy candies
Mael your parents were on drugs creating you lacking sense
had an admin's experience the way meth was involved in the accident
I seduce women with humor that's how I end up fucking with chicks
if your seduction game's tongue in cheek it's when you mimic sucking a dick
Kare's mom is the sluttiest bitch with no class and a peasant
Introducing that Horticulture's like doing that to nomads in the desert
I paid her to keep the sex a secret, loved drinking jizz in a bottle
even before I gave her the hush money she felt like she was hitting the lotto

[Sho Money EMG]

Goddamn total merkage here.

Okay, aero & Dom had
Candy (leaned me)
Hush money
Paddle ball
Drops the ball

Karaoke & mael had
Cloud line

Pretty one sided IMO

Vote - aero & dom

[Plot]

Paddlebawl, horticulture, caramel

Aero Dom killed it.

Drake line was ok

[Hush]

Going to feed this old school style


Kar
I can't stop laughing at all the played shit this guy drops
The way Aero abuses 10 year old concepts has TYSON setting up his tripod
ok its cool.. not that good tho. forgetable. I enjoyed it cuz I do know Tyson is a pedo for a fact. but as far as a punchline goes.. its a jab at best
Karaoke and I share a passion to spit bars & clown for fun
As for what gloryhole heartedly loves.. it's Aero using Dom's mouth as 1
thats a pretty intricate wp and np so I dug this. big points for creativity. worded fairly well as well. so I can say I am impressed by this line
Dom, you're a disgrace to your fam. Keep slitting ya wrist
Talking about hypothetical relatives while ya parents deny you even exist
I'll be honest. I don't get it.
You're both gay as fuck, I don't get why this fag's cocky
Naming yourselves Vein proves you'd run through every inch of a man's body
lmao aight man, thats cool
I'll tie them up and throw the both of these fags in ditches
Empty the clip in them then leave their team missing like Madden glitches
FIRE. relevant. fresh. creative. worded precise. I liked this.
Dom, u should stick to teaching, battling isn't your forte
Cuz your recipe for success got Strikta's shit looking gourmet
eh, always hate these name dropping kinda lines.
I'm a pimp, I'd put Aero's chick on the strip if she needs bread
The way I got that pussy on lock, she could pass for the bitch in Reed's thread
lol. I didn't open the thread because he got me once before. I can imagine. Good line.
Even ur girl doesn't call u the goat, u'll never hear that around your lover
His head's been in the clouds so long, u'd think he inspired Drake's album cover
concept is nice. line has no sting tho. didnt really leave an impact. left me more thinking like, damn this could of been dope


all an all it was a cool verse, not unbeatable by any stretch, but still impressive and highly competitive. I think all newer battlers should take into consideration a verse like this, as it displays quality over quantity and makes for a smoother and more enjoyable read. imho

Aer
Step & be served. No question Aero & Dom'll sever these herbs
‘specially when Karaoke lives up to his name & Drops the Ball on Every Word
cot damn. DON DEMARCO. BANG< BANG<BANG. Say it again. Freshest Kare nameplay I ever seen, and to have it be done on him this late in his tenure here. Very impressive.
Mael your house is depressing you aint convincing no girls to stay
Anyone living in that Paddlebawl & better get used to playing 1 person games
wp is good on one hand, but forced as fuck in my personal opinion. I imagine some ppl would like it, I dont. Not wack tho, just not my personal preference.
I'm getting my rocks off in your girl's house by sexing her fam
you're getting your rocks off at her window singing with a live Mexican band
the throwing rocks at the window concept is dope, but how you ended the line felt anti-climactic and didnt hit hard at all. barely a diss. didnt feel any sting.
You think of an Aero a Dom you'll think these dudes is manly
When you think of a Kare a Mael you think of sweet little chewy candies
Ok, this is really creative. Not my style again cuz its that long bar esque wp. But it sure is clever. so points for that
Mael your parents were on drugs creating you lacking sense
had an admin's experience the way meth was involved in the accident
dislike name dropping bars for the most part. this one isnt spectacular.
I seduce women with humor that's how I end up fucking with chicks
if your seduction game's tongue in cheek it's when you mimic sucking a dick
lol aight cool. this is way better and landed cleanly to me.
Kare's mom is the sluttiest bitch with no class and a peasant
Introducing that Horticulture's like doing that to nomads in the desert
lmao. Dope. I had thought of this before but couldnt word it. dunno if its been done. but this wp was way nicer than the caramel one
I paid her to keep the sex a secret, loved drinking jizz in a bottle
even before I gave her the hush money she felt like she was hitting the lotto
ok cool. Figured I'd see a few of these. this was nice tho.


damn alot of name dropping by both parties in here
thats my main gripe on alot of ppl. mainly Alvin Karpis and Destroyer

I just hate that style of punchline its lazy to me. but whatever.

Aero had a nice verse, just some bigger misses than Kare/Mael. but debate ably the harder haymakers were on Aer/Doms side cuz when it hit, it was a KO punch

the opener alone could of won the battle imho

and I hate judging battles off one line, but sometimes that one line can be the decisive factor

I would love to see both these times go foward
but its not possible.


reread it twice

it comes down to the kare line vs the madden line

the np was hotter to me, but damn

hard to call

in all honesty

props to all yall

v/aerdom

[Swerve]

Karaoke and I share a passion to spit bars & clown for fun
As for what gloryhole heartedly loves.. it's Aero using Dom's mouth as 1
Dom, you're a disgrace to your fam. Keep slitting ya wrist
Talking about hypothetical relatives while ya parents deny you even exist
I'll tie them up and throw the both of these fags in ditches
Empty the clip in them then leave their team missing like Madden glitches

vs.

Step & be served. No question Aero & Dom'll sever these herbs
‘specially when Karaoke lives up to his name & Drops the Ball on Every Word
Mael your house is depressing you aint convincing no girls to stay
Anyone living in that Paddlebawl & better get used to playing 1 person games
I'm getting my rocks off in your girl's house by sexing her fam
you're getting your rocks off at her window singing with a live Mexican band
I seduce women with humor that's how I end up fucking with chicks
if your seduction game's tongue in cheek it's when you mimic sucking a dick
I paid her to keep the sex a secret, loved drinking jizz in a bottle
even before I gave her the hush money she felt like she was hitting the lotto


Kar and Mael were okay, but cotdamn at the fire aero and dom dropped. I literally was feeling that I was about to quote the whole verse up till that middle section that was kinda weak. In most circumstances, Kar and Mael prolly woulda got it with a solid verse, but Dom and Aero went in.

Vote - Dom and Aero

[Orc]

Step & be served. No question Aero & Dom'll sever these herbs
‘specially when Karaoke lives up to his name & Drops the Ball on Every Word
Kare's mom is the sluttiest bitch with no class and a peasant
Introducing that Horticulture's like doing that to nomads in the desert
I paid her to keep the sex a secret, loved drinking jizz in a bottle
even before I gave her the hush money she felt like she was hitting the lotto



Dom, you're a disgrace to your fam. Keep slitting ya wrist
Talking about hypothetical relatives while ya parents deny you even exist
You're both gay as fuck, I don't get why this fag's cocky
Naming yourselves Vein proves you'd run through every inch of a man's body
I'll tie them up and throw the both of these fags in ditches
Empty the clip in them then leave their team missing like Madden glitches


dont think it's really onesided at all. very close. aero's paddlebawl & kare a mael wp's were forced. i hate that shit nt working both ways. horticulture was better. madden glitches line was fire from karaoke. the other 2 quotes were close but i think Aero just about edges it

v/aero

[Alvin Karpis]

Karaoke and I share a passion to spit bars & clown for fun
As for what gloryhole heartedly loves.. it's Aero using Dom's mouth as 1
You're both gay as fuck, I don't get why this fag's cocky
Naming yourselves Vein proves you'd run through every inch of a man's body
I'll tie them up and throw the both of these fags in ditches
Empty the clip in them then leave their team missing like Madden glitches
Dom, u should stick to teaching, battling isn't your forte
Cuz your recipe for success got Strikta's shit looking gourmet
I'm a pimp, I'd put Aero's chick on the strip if she needs bread
The way I got that pussy on lock, she could pass for the bitch in Reed's thread


vs

Step & be served. No question Aero & Dom'll sever these herbs
‘specially when Karaoke lives up to his name & Drops the Ball on Every Word
I'm getting my rocks off in your girl's house by sexing her fam
you're getting your rocks off at her window singing with a live Mexican band
You think of an Aero a Dom you'll think these dudes is manly
When you think of a Kare a Mael you think of sweet little chewy candies
I seduce women with humor that's how I end up fucking with chicks
if your seduction game's tongue in cheek it's when you mimic sucking a dick
Kare's mom is the sluttiest bitch with no class and a peasant
Introducing that Horticulture's like doing that to nomads in the desert
I paid her to keep the sex a secret, loved drinking jizz in a bottle
even before I gave her the hush money she felt like she was hitting the lotto


nice battle, a lot of dope lines. overall i felt aero/dom had lines that hit harder which takes nothing away from kar/mael because they went in

v/dom/aero