Contendership Match: murda sho vs. Certain [murda sho Wins]

BROKE LESNAR · 10-08-2014, 09:08 AM

Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST

murda sho · 10-08-2014, 10:47 AM

Check Going 2 lines

Certain · 10-08-2014, 03:27 PM

I'M HELPING THE HOMELESS, READY TO START A CAMPAIGN WORTH BELIEVING.
SO LET'S GET THIS SHO ON THE ROAD, INSTEAD OF THE TATTOO PARLOR DUMPSTER YOU SLEEP IN.

murda sho · 10-14-2014, 12:47 AM

This fool will be dead & gone for that gold if he ever step or walks between
So if the next to off is Cer then he'll need those & paramedics on the scene

Zip Him Up!

Packed Graves · 10-14-2014, 12:52 AM

Cert came played, Sho came witty with the name play, chalk the scene would have been more your style.

Vote sho

Blanco Bishop · 10-14-2014, 10:20 AM

Valiant wp for cert.
Punch was slightly stretched at the end imo.

Sho killed this tho.
No way u can say that wp is forced. Crispy as fuck.

Vsho

El Muffin · 10-14-2014, 10:28 AM

Iono. I think certain took this

It fkn made me lol irl

Whiles sho wp was drawn out to me

So if the next to officer

Ipno very dope idea. It just rubbed ME the wrong way personally

Sho kno I dnt bs when I vote.

I think lol

But v/certain bcox it wsd harsh n sligjtly personal because sho tatted up like a mf

I was hype on certain bar ever since he dropped it tbh

BROKE LESNAR · 10-14-2014, 10:52 AM

I had to think ab Certain's for a while. Not bc it was difficult to grasp but bc how I wanted to approach the "sho on the road" np. I understand it was wrapped in a personal, but that cliche is wildly redundant. Dope bar nontheless. Cool concept. MS had a pretty original np and used a solid concept to deliver it.

v-MS

jilti · 10-14-2014, 03:23 PM

botw

Sho had a dope nameplay. Certain made me lol irl, cant recall last time a punch made me literally laugh
Close but mvgt- Certain

Red Soldier · 10-14-2014, 06:19 PM

Vote hoes to Sho. That np was fire. Certains could have been worded better but even still wouldn't have been as good

Tic · 10-15-2014, 05:13 PM

Not a big fan of the wording Certain used. Murda's was a nice NP that ended clean.

V/ Sho

Kin · 10-15-2014, 05:29 PM

This was dope....both pretty nice....

But sho had that nameplay like uggghhhh!

Rocked that

Vote sho fa sho

theMuzzl3 · 10-15-2014, 06:07 PM

Certain:

I like how your 1st line built you up positively (I was like WTF), and then the second line was a knockout punch.

murda_sho:

Not great structure on the first line. I understand the concept, but I feel Certain's structure and grammar was much better. Walks between what? Step or Walks? Thats like Certain being plural and singular.

If I was voting on straight up mean lines and attacking, I'd vote MS... but the lack of ability to put a sentence together made me shake my head. Plus, I've never seen a battle go from a positive line of building oneself up, and then knocking the contender down.

/v Certain

Destroyer · 10-15-2014, 06:27 PM

I think I think Murda's nameplay, while more complex, was not as effective as certain's, whereas while sho on the road has probably been used a lot, he flipped it cool and it was ultimately hilarious

v/certain

both were dope tho

YDK · 10-15-2014, 06:29 PM

Sho got this with a fresher nameplay an concept
Certs was dope but had a played phrase that held it back slightly

Unfukwitable · 10-16-2014, 07:10 AM

this was cool right here i think one edge it lightly ... v/Sho

10-08-2014, 09:08 AM	#1
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	Contendership Match: murda sho vs. Certain [murda sho Wins] Rebuttal Option ▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in ▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar) Due Monday 12am PST

10-08-2014, 10:47 AM	#2
murda sho Shonami Surf Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,069 Battle Record: 24-16 Champed - Bad Blood II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV - 1-2 Punch League - Shadow Boxing Rep Power: 42758479	Check Going 2 lines __________________ "aim impeccable if I miss somebody I aint seen em in a while"

10-14-2014, 12:47 AM	#4
murda sho Shonami Surf Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,069 Battle Record: 24-16 Champed - Bad Blood II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV - 1-2 Punch League - Shadow Boxing Rep Power: 42758479	This fool will be dead & gone for that gold if he ever step or walks between So if the next to off is Cer then he'll need those & paramedics on the scene Zip Him Up! __________________ "aim impeccable if I miss somebody I aint seen em in a while"

10-14-2014, 12:52 AM	#5
Packed Graves Name Flips Are Clever Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 9-10 Champed - Alias Tourney '14 Rep Power: 777844	Cert came played, Sho came witty with the name play, chalk the scene would have been more your style. Vote sho __________________ back

10-14-2014, 10:28 AM	#7
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,693 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230532	Iono. I think certain took this It fkn made me lol irl Whiles sho wp was drawn out to me So if the next to officer Ipno very dope idea. It just rubbed ME the wrong way personally Sho kno I dnt bs when I vote. I think lol But v/certain bcox it wsd harsh n sligjtly personal because sho tatted up like a mf I was hype on certain bar ever since he dropped it tbh __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by El Muffin; 10-14-2014 at 10:31 AM.

10-08-2014, 03:27 PM	#3
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899403	I'M HELPING THE HOMELESS, READY TO START A CAMPAIGN WORTH BELIEVING. SO LET'S GET THIS SHO ON THE ROAD, INSTEAD OF THE TATTOO PARLOR DUMPSTER YOU SLEEP IN.

10-14-2014, 10:20 AM	#6
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150482	Valiant wp for cert. Punch was slightly stretched at the end imo. Sho killed this tho. No way u can say that wp is forced. Crispy as fuck. Vsho

10-14-2014, 10:52 AM	#8
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	I had to think ab Certain's for a while. Not bc it was difficult to grasp but bc how I wanted to approach the "sho on the road" np. I understand it was wrapped in a personal, but that cliche is wildly redundant. Dope bar nontheless. Cool concept. MS had a pretty original np and used a solid concept to deliver it. v-MS

10-14-2014, 03:23 PM	#9
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816225	botw Sho had a dope nameplay. Certain made me lol irl, cant recall last time a punch made me literally laugh Close but mvgt- Certain

10-14-2014, 06:19 PM	#10
Red Soldier T.Guerrero Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 96 Battle Record: 3-2 Rep Power: 0	Vote hoes to Sho. That np was fire. Certains could have been worded better but even still wouldn't have been as good

10-15-2014, 05:13 PM	#11
Tic Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 1,509 Battle Record: 51-29 Champed - Newbie Tourney VII - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 20137906	Not a big fan of the wording Certain used. Murda's was a nice NP that ended clean. V/ Sho

10-15-2014, 05:29 PM	#12
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662198	This was dope....both pretty nice.... But sho had that nameplay like uggghhhh! Rocked that Vote sho fa sho

10-15-2014, 06:29 PM	#15
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,564 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181109	Sho got this with a fresher nameplay an concept Certs was dope but had a played phrase that held it back slightly __________________

10-16-2014, 07:10 AM	#16
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,628 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460385	this was cool right here i think one edge it lightly ... v/Sho __________________ WICKeD