07-08-2014, 03:19 PM | #1 |
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namix [VS] Greed [Greed WINS]
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07-15-2014, 03:02 AM | #2 |
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so, what do we know about greed? hmmm
we know he aint rich, talks too much about green; never really ever even wondered why. and we also know he aint broke…. or he just humiliated the shit outta himself in the punch league…and was also the other guy! ‘doc, my cough’s led to a sore throat’, ‘I bet, but let’s check that tumor emerging from it too.. the way a cyst’s just poppin up like that… expect results to look like lebron & irving in the Q.’ I was already droppin heat, but now I got this deng replacement! verses a verse which is so-so shoulda tried the bron move… for future decisions v. you, I’ll just pull ‘em off with no-shows. im like a wild street fighter riding on an unleashed tiger, he dont appeal to my taste. compared to me? he's more of a middle east cease fire…… cuz Greed: Israelite wait. since i am simply sick of his persistent bitchin: ‘peeps are biased!’, ‘their feed’s dishonest!’ im gonna finish this by just admittin that im dick-ridden, and then leave havin a greed upon it.
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07-15-2014, 05:40 AM | #3 |
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I saw you beef with my brother mane, that shit was dumb and lame
If you wanna watch Aero die namix I'll toss you out a fuckin plane You confound your peers, making spreadsheets sounding queer How tf u a baller when you barely pay the bills around here? I be stackin them fat checks while namix still lack at text Ur so purposely wack @The Mind Assassinwould tip his hat in respect Step back or get slain, the only thing I feel about your style is shame I think ur concept of writing is equivalent to that of fig baby kick game Basically u dont belong in the league. Big dogs hate getting bothered by fleas Sad that the God of war gave you this battle site only to get slaughtered by me |
07-17-2014, 12:52 AM | #4 |
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Namix had nothing surpisingly.
vs I saw you beef with my brother mane, that shit was dumb and lame If you wanna watch Aero die namix I'll toss you out a fuckin plane Greed fell off after the opener, but still had LOTB. |
07-17-2014, 08:10 PM | #5 |
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so, what do we know about greed? hmmm
Lol hmmmm..stfu we know he aint rich, talks too much about green; never really ever even wondered why. and we also know he aint broke…. or he just humiliated the shit outta himself in the punch league…and was also the other guy! Dqmn this shit wordy as fuck. Not cool. Personal and concept were cool but i wouodve condensed the shit outta this.... ‘doc, my cough’s led to a sore throat’, ‘I bet, but let’s check that tumor emerging from it too.. the way a cyst’s just poppin up like that… expect results to look like lebron & irving in the Q.’ A cyst/assist is ok i guess.....the in joke is that he has a hole in his throat tho...not sure if u were trynna play off that .. or if u just reachin hard....e8ther way....nah. I was already droppin heat, but now I got this deng replacement! verses a verse which is so-so shoulda tried the bron move… for future decisions v. you, I’ll just pull ‘em off with no-shows. Alotta w9rds for nuthin im like a wild street fighter riding on an unleashed tiger, he dont appeal to my taste. compared to me? he's more of a middle east cease fire…… cuz Greed: Israelite wait. Woddplay is good enuff at the end....but the concept is forced imo since i am simply sick of his persistent bitchin: ‘peeps are biased!’, ‘their feed’s dishonest!’ im gonna finish this by just admittin that im dick-ridden, and then leave havin a greed upon it. I like this [/QUOTE] I saw you beef with my brother mane, that shit was dumb and lame If you wanna watch Aero die namix I'll toss you out a fuckin plane LOL. Greed wins the battle. You confound your peers, making spreadsheets sounding queer How tf u a baller when you barely pay the bills around here? Got em I be stackin them fat checks while namix still lack at text Ur so purposely wack @The Mind Assassinwould tip his hat in respect Meh this is light Step back or get slain, the only thing I feel about your style is shame I think ur concept of writing is equivalent to that of fig baby kick game Disc board punch...eh...didnt hit too hard imo Basically u dont belong in the league. Big dogs hate getting bothered by fleas Sad that the God of war gave you this battle site only to get slaughtered by me Eh Namix verse was way too wordy....almost as bad as veritas shit smh. His closer was ok...an the lesnar personao had potential.....greed had his 2 opening bangers that mopped up namix sloppy verse w ease if u ask me.....tho he fell off immediately after.... I get namix was pressed for time....which is understandable....but it showed. V greed
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07-18-2014, 12:35 AM | #6 |
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namix: I liked the opening line a lot, though the wording on it was stretched beyond belief. The double up on LeBron James lines seemed like a self-serving move. Obviously that's at the top of your mind right now, but one would have hammered the point home. And neither was all that great. The wording on the decisions line screwed up a good concept. I liked the light weight pun but didn't get the "Greed:" part of the wording there. Just a few instances where tightening things up could have made your clever concepts more effective. The closer was fine. This doesn't compare to your more inspired work, even the more recent stuff I've seen from you.
Greed: The opener was not only the best line of the battle, but also one of the better lines I've read on this site. It was really well-worded and effective. I didn't like much else about this verse, though. The last line had a lot of potential but was sloppily worded. The barely paying the bills line was solid enough. Outside of that opener, your mechanics and wording were pretty much mediocre and your concepts were lackluster. The Mind Assassin line only works if you misunderstand everything about him. Also, the word is "purposefully." But I think the two hits about owning the site plus the very strong opener are just enough to give you this one. Vote: Greed
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07-18-2014, 09:24 AM | #7 |
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This is not the old namix I know, I felt an overload of words with concepts that could've been done better, I wasn't digging this much, opener and closer had potential but wasn't a fan of the wording, Greeks opener was dope af, but then had nada, I mean the second bar coulda also been a killer but worded too simple
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07-18-2014, 10:57 AM | #8 |
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That areo dynamics line was animal.
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07-18-2014, 11:56 AM | #9 |
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Wow, fuckin neck gets this
WTF namix? aero line was fire, rest was ok few statements But obviously namix rusty as hell and just didn't bring it v/pryde |
07-18-2014, 12:25 PM | #10 |
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lol yea i had a new client out of nowhere, then had to pull an all nighter, so word.
i liked the aero die namix line. liked it more when blue bayou did it though heh
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07-18-2014, 07:18 PM | #11 |
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I saw you beef with my brother mane, that shit was dumb and lame If you wanna watch Aero die namix I'll toss you out a fuckin plane Namix - This battle was full of misses, Greed your verse had the better flow but light punches, it started off dope though with this bar, Namix you had maybe two bars that would have hit to me like the cyst bar and maybe the Broke bar but your wording completely destroyed them... mvgt Greed
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07-18-2014, 10:35 PM | #12 |
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sorry on my phone can expand if needed
I liked the assist idea from namix but everything was a bit to wordy to hit effectively aerodynamics line was well executed albeit probably played, but enough to take this battle IMO. not by much but v/greed |
07-19-2014, 02:50 AM | #13 |
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Greed wins 7-0.
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