Contenders Match: Maximus 3-0 Vs Tic 5-4 - TIC WINS

[Allen Knight]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, July 9th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 12, maximum of 18
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Maximus @Tic

[Maximus]

12brooo

[Tic]

Word.

[Maximus]

Hey ext please

[Maximus]

@Tic
Forget ur last win, u're still a hoe with no confidence. I'll end this whore quick
Cos it's really ironic.. you handled Infiltration yet you're an insecure bitch
U really need help from Sharp's clique cos I bruise phonies & chumps
But I don't care who the Pharmacist, I just know u'll need codeine from one
This ugly dweeb got ridiculed by the dime he got a crush on
Tried to ask my girlfriend out but my Buddhist Hymn like a monk's song
This fake vet just goes up and down while I keep riding to victory
Ur style is old, u don't belong in this ErraTic & that describes ur consistency
I'm straight killing shit, my Last Two Foes died & now u'll get ur throat sliced
U're faker than hoes with Artificial Bust, plus u're getting ripped like both guys
You've already gotten buried, I'm through with this dork's case
So fuck carved idols, the only Graven Image here is a tomb with ur portrait

[Tic]

Maximus aka Rayge

My life’s been boring lately, I need a day to remember…
Maybe I’ll Rayge…aka win by no show, beat scrubs & make it all the way to Contenders
Fuck ya Refreshed Style, I’m the one makin money, thick green
‘N I’ve been meaning to Whip this New Max - & I ain’t talkin bout the 2016
I can rearrange limbs but you can’t change, you’ll always be lame kid
Look..I Constituent to a Whole new body, and you’d STILL be the same bitch
I never quit, so I’ll fire close range at body parts when I find ya…
& put bullets Interagency Breakdown that’d rival stock markets in China
I’m on top when I slay. W/ the blade I frolic & play
I’ll stick it deeeeep and watch ya Internals Split like you promised him pay
Congrats on getting Around Bust. 2nd base feels good but you won't get to touch thrones
Think of me as the 3rd base coach. Whether it's close or not you're gettin sent the fuck home

[Orc]

Originally Posted by Maximus

@Tic
Forget ur last win, u're still a hoe with no confidence. I'll end this whore quick
Cos it's really ironic.. you handled Infiltration yet you're an insecure bitch
coulda flipped infiltration another way. This was light flipped like this
U really need help from Sharp's clique cos I bruise phonies & chumps
But I don't care who the Pharmacist, I just know u'll need codeine from one
this was dopeee. Well done
This ugly dweeb got ridiculed by the dime he got a crush on
Tried to ask my girlfriend out but my Buddhist Hymn like a monk's song
Too old to salvage
This fake vet just goes up and down while I keep riding to victory
Ur style is old, u don't belong in this ErraTic & that describes ur consistency
Semi forced but ill rock with it. Creative
I'm straight killing shit, my Last Two Foes died & now u'll get ur throat sliced
U're faker than hoes with Artificial Bust, plus u're getting ripped like both guys
these lines take no creativity to write
You've already gotten buried, I'm through with this dork's case
So fuck carved idols, the only Graven Image here is a tomb with ur portrait
Connection is weak to me

Originally Posted by Tic

Maximus aka Rayge

My life’s been boring lately, I need a day to remember…
Maybe I’ll Rayge…aka win by no show, beat scrubs & make it all the way to Contenders
it's light but probably true
Fuck ya Refreshed Style, I’m the one makin money, thick green
‘N I’ve been meaning to Whip this New Max - & I ain’t talkin bout the 2016
Yep cool
I can rearrange limbs but you can’t change, you’ll always be lame kid
Look..I Constituent to a Whole new body, and you’d STILL be the same bitch
too much going on man. Long bar tendency
I never quit, so I’ll fire close range at body parts when I find ya…
& put bullets Interagency Breakdown that’d rival stock markets in China
this is sick
I’m on top when I slay. W/ the blade I frolic & play
I’ll stick it deeeeep and watch ya Internals Split like you promised him pay
ok Jab
Congrats on getting Around Bust. 2nd base feels good but you won't get to touch thrones
Think of me as the 3rd base coach. Whether it's close or not you're gettin sent the fuck home
Creative but wordy

Tic had fresher lines. A little better. Just edged it out. Both had bad misses with weak connections. Both are improving

[Bust]

Max

I liked the opener
Farm assist was flames tho
I actually did a boo dissed play few months ago, lil dif but still ok
Erratic didn't work for me
Artificial bust was cool but fuck u, nah it's cool tho
Closer was an almost

Over solid verse dog, felt like ur execution was on point just a few forced plays but I enjoyed it

Tic

Opener was cool but fuck u too,
Whip this new max was hot
Forced af to me
My god, fire, in ta Rayge n see, while bar was nasty
Internals split was nice
Closer was doooope

Yes yes yall this was a hot bout no doubt, props to both fa sure, I felt like max a two bad misses with plays n tic had one, plus I felt tic's solid hits were more harsh than max but I'm sayin yall this was entertaining.. lil more consistent was tic n think he gets this one.. Dope battle

Vote tic

[Mr. J]

U really need help from Sharp's clique cos I bruise phonies & chumps
But I don't care who the Pharmacist, I just know u'll need codeine from one

This fake vet just goes up and down while I keep riding to victory
Ur style is old, u don't belong in this ErraTic & that describes ur consistency
^^^
these lines were the ones that stuck out to me..
I thought that opener could have a better hit to work
that closer was an almost, but to connect it you should have used 'poor trait'
you had image & idol working for you, maybe mess with the wording
decent verse though..

I can rearrange limbs but you can’t change, you’ll always be lame kid
Look..I Constituent to a Whole new body, and you’d STILL be the same bitch
I never quit, so I’ll fire close range at body parts when I find ya…
& put bullets Interagency Breakdown that’d rival stock markets in China
^^^
I'm going to do the opposite of your verse & say there is too much happening here
the punches work, but these just felt a tad overdone to me, otherwise your verse was slick
after that waving max line I was like ok, and I realized you brought thatwork

v/Tic

I feel like he came with a hotter verse compared to Max's
Max brought some smooth ideas but didn't hit as hard as Tic had the stronger verse here
dope battle fella's

[Junto]

U really need help from Sharp's clique cos I bruise phonies & chumps
But I don't care who the Pharmacist, I just know u'll need codeine from one
This ugly dweeb got ridiculed by the dime he got a crush on
Tried to ask my girlfriend out but my Buddhist Hymn like a monk's song

vs.

Fuck ya Refreshed Style, I’m the one makin money, thick green
‘N I’ve been meaning to Whip this New Max - & I ain’t talkin bout the 2016
I never quit, so I’ll fire close range at body parts when I find ya…
& put bullets Interagency Breakdown that’d rival stock markets in China
Congrats on getting Around Bust. 2nd base feels good but you won't get to touch thrones
Think of me as the 3rd base coach. Whether it's close or not you're gettin sent the fuck home

Nice match-up here...
Apparently boo-dissed-him is old but I've never seen it, thought that was cool
And damn Farm assist / codeine was heat. I got that as LOTB.
Max you were hit or miss tho... Era-tic didn't work at all for me, big stretch in my accent
Artificial bust just didn't have the sting or complexity. Closer eh... Opener was cool tho.
Tic on the other hand had a steady dose of hits. Interagency breakdown was creative as hell.
Whip this new max I liked, 3rd base coach solid. Can-stitch-u-into was cool, just not my taste

If Max woulda thrown one more haymaker like pharmacist I think he coulda got this one...
As it is though Tic was more consistent throughout, gotta edge it to him here for a solid verse

V/ tic

[Ronin]

rget ur last win, u're still a hoe with no confidence. I'll end this whore quick
Cos it's really ironic.. you handled Infiltration yet you're an insecure bitch
good concept bad wording. I wanna like it
U really need help from Sharp's clique cos I bruise phonies & chumps
But I don't care who the Pharmacist, I just know u'll need codeine from one
this is fuckn dope
This ugly dweeb got ridiculed by the dime he got a crush on
Tried to ask my girlfriend out but my Buddhist Hymn like a monk's song
seen this before so that takes a lot away from it
This fake vet just goes up and down while I keep riding to victory
Ur style is old, u don't belong in this ErraTic & that describes ur consistency
just too forced for me to say its nice. Still OK tho
I'm straight killing shit, my Last Two Foes died & now u'll get ur throat sliced
U're faker than hoes with Artificial Bust, plus u're getting ripped like both guys
fuck urself fgt. But this was OK, I'm not real big of anything that has to do with u...ur verse is supposed to be about him.
You've already gotten buried, I'm through with this dork's case
So fuck carved idols, the only Graven Image here is a tomb with ur portrait
this didn't rhyme n I wasn't feeling it. I see what u were going for but I think the wording killed it


My life’s been boring lately, I need a day to remember…
Maybe I’ll Rayge…aka win by no show, beat scrubs & make it all the way to Contenders
this is OK...but...I'm not a scrub so fuck u fgt
Fuck ya Refreshed Style, I’m the one makin money, thick green
‘N I’ve been meaning to Whip this New Max - & I ain’t talkin bout the 2016
cool
I can rearrange limbs but you can’t change, you’ll always be lame kid
Look..I Constituent to a Whole new body, and you’d STILL be the same bitch
nah this is forced af
I never quit, so I’ll fire close range at body parts when I find ya…
& put bullets Interagency Breakdown that’d rival stock markets in China
nice
I’m on top when I slay. W/ the blade I frolic & play
I’ll stick it deeeeep and watch ya Internals Split like you promised him pay
ok'ish
Congrats on getting Around Bust. 2nd base feels good but you won't get to touch thrones
Think of me as the 3rd base coach. Whether it's close or not you're gettin sent the fuck home
wasn't really feeling this cause I played baseball n if its close the third base coach isn't gonna wave u home. Soooo not feeling this

I think this is closer than the votes indicate. Both had good verses with only a couple misses. Max had lotb with that pharmacist line and both had some lines I didn't really like, but I feel like tic had more that i did like. If max would've worded a couple of his concepts differently he would of def got this...but he didn't soooooo

Vote tic

[Hush]

Originally Posted by Maximus

@Tic
Forget ur last win, u're still a hoe with no confidence. I'll end this whore quick
Cos it's really ironic.. you handled Infiltration yet you're an insecure bitch
old wp but u flipped it dope and made it relevant. props.
U really need help from Sharp's clique cos I bruise phonies & chumps
But I don't care who the Pharmacist, I just know u'll need codeine from one
same as above. i really like ur style and execution style. Im fucking w this
This ugly dweeb got ridiculed by the dime he got a crush on
Tried to ask my girlfriend out but my Buddhist Hymn like a monk's song
wow. this nigga on some young Namix shit. wp heavy as fuck. maybe best wp bar I read in a long time
This fake vet just goes up and down while I keep riding to victory
Ur style is old, u don't belong in this ErraTic & that describes ur consistency
hmm another wp. this one is a visual wp as opposed to a acoustic one. I like u maximus. ur in ur own lane doing ur own thing. repp
I'm straight killing shit, my Last Two Foes died & now u'll get ur throat sliced
U're faker than hoes with Artificial Bust, plus u're getting ripped like both guys
double nameplay flip ok. good variety now bro
You've already gotten buried, I'm through with this dork's case
So fuck carved idols, the only Graven Image here is a tomb with ur portrait
eh, this was just wack to me due to subject matter, only miss u had.

Originally Posted by Tic

Maximus aka Rayge

My life’s been boring lately, I need a day to remember…
Maybe I’ll Rayge…aka win by no show, beat scrubs & make it all the way to Contenders
dope
Fuck ya Refreshed Style, I’m the one makin money, thick green
‘N I’ve been meaning to Whip this New Max - & I ain’t talkin bout the 2016
this light but ok
I can rearrange limbs but you can’t change, you’ll always be lame kid
Look..I Constituent to a Whole new body, and you’d STILL be the same bitch
dont really make sense, can stitch u into a new body right? i get it but nah, max was wp'ing at a much higher lvl so it made this look weak
I never quit, so I’ll fire close range at body parts when I find ya…
& put bullets Interagency Breakdown that’d rival stock markets in China
no
I’m on top when I slay. W/ the blade I frolic & play
I’ll stick it deeeeep and watch ya Internals Split like you promised him pay
wordin was off bro
Congrats on getting Around Bust. 2nd base feels good but you won't get to touch thrones
Think of me as the 3rd base coach. Whether it's close or not you're gettin sent the fuck home
firrrrre dope shit bro

damn this battle sick
i love the new breed
these niggas killin shit

but max got this yo
them wps was nutty

v maximus

repp to both

[Cred]

Pharmacist, buddhist, erratic

vs

First two & ur closer

This match was dope af. Best match ive read so far. Both came wit fire imo. Both had the same amount of quotables & made dis a tough one. Max came heavy on the wordplays but showed out cuz dey all hit. Honestly dis jus gnna come down to preference. I got max here.

Vote Maximus

[murda sho]

Tic

My life’s been boring lately, I need a day to remember…
Maybe I’ll Rayge…aka win by no show, beat scrubs & make it all the way to Contenders

I can rearrange limbs but you can’t change, you’ll always be lame kid
Look..I Constituent to a Whole new body, and you’d STILL be the same bitch
I never quit, so I’ll fire close range at body parts when I find ya…
& put bullets Interagency Breakdown that’d rival stock markets in China

Congrats on getting Around Bust. 2nd base feels good but you won't get to touch thrones
Think of me as the 3rd base coach. Whether it's close or not you're gettin sent the fuck home


Max

U really need help from Sharp's clique cos I bruise phonies & chumps
But I don't care who the Pharmacist, I just know u'll need codeine from one
This ugly dweeb got ridiculed by the dime he got a crush on
Tried to ask my girlfriend out but my Buddhist Hymn like a monk's song


This was a dope battle Max had a couple concepts that if flipped better could have worked... Like the erratic bar coulda been mean but its pronounce E-RAT-TIC not Era-Tic so it didnt work... Good try though... Tic's wordplay was fuckin crazy... That damn intp rage and see breakdown was very good and compicated to pull off... Ima go with v/Tic with the more polished verse well done yall

[Destroyer]

I got tic here
max had some ok shit but some of it was a bit forced like erratic. the word is pronounced like air at ic, not era, tic so that came off forced to me
pharmacist was decent, possibly played, but I haven't seen it
tic just had a lot more hits, maybe one bar that didn't in his whole verse

v/tic