07-14-2018, 09:42 AM | #1 |
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TwoDrop vs. Jabari Black JB WINS
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER INCREDIBLE @Jabari Black @Twodrop |
07-14-2018, 04:26 PM | #2 |
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12 coo?
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07-14-2018, 06:03 PM | #3 |
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07-19-2018, 01:20 PM | #4 |
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10 @Jabari Black
AYO... U play ball like a girl...all FACTS. A bat to his back iffy wanna dispute it or 'BEAST out' & put the 'steel on holmes' like Benny from the sandlot shooting U put in work but hardly get respect. U need to up ur earnings fam, I'm FOCUSED. Sending Haymakers that'll light ya body up like Burning man U know I keep a tooly tucked. Fuck around n ur whole family’s fucked Long nose, diesel pump. Puttin all u niggas in Tacoma’s like Toyota trucks Practicing w/ st8 razors on yah baby while chain smokin' newports Reciting gun lines changing pampers...u even 'pullin' shit' on ya newborn I'm not wasting time w/ JB tbh, ya lines st8 but the blade leave a red floor Fuck playing games, I'm leaving holes in ya frame like I'm playing connect 4 Last edited by Twodrop; 07-19-2018 at 06:29 PM. |
07-20-2018, 10:27 PM | #5 | |
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Or the mini deuce deuce....you’ll get a ‘.22, Two’ like a Jay-Z track/ You had a “half off a vet” line vs Blue...voters thought it was hard, chief/ But watch JC vs Craig Lamar at 13:30...yep...this bitch is a bar thief/ If you start beef, I’ll rush ya quick and have you flustered, bitch/ Then a pistol whip...slap the 5 across your mouth like you let a cuss word slip/ 2 ratchets...if theses bitches start banging, you’ll need the strap, bitch/ Im savage! Pull up to this fake bitch door with MACs beside me like Nev on catfish/ I got a strap that twice ya weight...Gun so big the serial number on a license plate/ Can’t hold it straight...so ‘I slide the arm over the shoulder’ like a high school date/ |
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07-20-2018, 11:35 PM | #8 |
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I got JB pretty comfortably here,
That bar stealer line won it for me, plus I might be underrating that ender, V/JB |
07-21-2018, 07:39 AM | #9 | |
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U play ball like a girl...all FACTS. A bat to his back iffy wanna dispute it
or 'BEAST out' & put the 'steel on holmes' like Benny from the sandlot shooting this is pretty cool U put in work but hardly get respect. U need to up ur earnings fam, I'm FOCUSED. Sending Haymakers that'll light ya body up like Burning man alright not bad U know I keep a tooly tucked. Fuck around n ur whole family’s fucked Long nose, diesel pump. Puttin all u niggas in Tacoma’s like Toyota trucks bar a tad bit played but good flip, wording and execution really nice Practicing w/ st8 razors on yah baby while chain smokin' newports Reciting gun lines changing pampers...u even 'pullin' shit' on ya newborn nah lol I'm not wasting time w/ JB tbh, ya lines st8 but the blade leave a red floor Fuck playing games, I'm leaving holes in ya frame like I'm playing connect 4 this is Decent. Connect 4 concepts pretty played by now Vs I let the semi shoot you. I’ll knock plenty screws loose when I wave the strap/ Or the mini deuce deuce....you’ll get a ‘.22, Two’ like a Jay-Z track/ decent You had a “half off a vet” line vs Blue...voters thought it was hard, chief/ But watch JC vs Craig Lamar at 13:30...yep...this bitch is a bar thief/ lol damn. Nice personal here If you start beef, I’ll rush ya quick and have you flustered, bitch/ Then a pistol whip...slap the 5 across your mouth like you let a cuss word slip/ lmao if you had said “slap the fifth” I would have died. Good bar though 2 ratchets...if theses bitches start banging, you’ll need the strap, bitch/ Im savage! Pull up to this fake bitch door with MACs beside me like Nev on catfish/ ok lol I got a strap that twice ya weight...Gun so big the serial number on a license plate/ Can’t hold it straight...so ‘I slide the arm over the shoulder’ like a high school date/ gun so big lollllll. I love this. Swaggy and creative This battle was a lot closer than I had expected. I didn’t think twodrop was gonna bring bars this good. Twodrop had 1 Miss, 1 Decent, and the rest were cool. Jabari had no clear misses and the biting personal against twodrop definitely helped seal the deal. Good battle here and props to both. Vote Jabari Black
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07-24-2018, 04:24 PM | #10 |
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U play ball like a girl...all FACTS. A bat to his back iffy wanna dispute it
or 'BEAST out' & put the 'steel on holmes' like Benny from the sandlot shooting cool, steel a pretty old and basic wp but won't lie I enjoy the flip here U put in work but hardly get respect. U need to up ur earnings fam, I'm FOCUSED. Sending Haymakers that'll light ya body up like Burning man hell ya, dig this U know I keep a tooly tucked. Fuck around n ur whole family’s fucked Long nose, diesel pump. Puttin all u niggas in Tacoma’s like Toyota trucks throwbackkk, cant lie I did this exact wordplay years back (long bar days) so this was played to me Practicing w/ st8 razors on yah baby while chain smokin' newports Reciting gun lines changing pampers...u even 'pullin' shit' on ya newborn nah felt corny and lame tbh I'm not wasting time w/ JB tbh, ya lines st8 but the blade leave a red floor Fuck playing games, I'm leaving holes in ya frame like I'm playing connect 4 holes / frame / connect 4 a dece meta, seen a lot of similar connect 4 bars tho Vs I let the semi shoot you. I’ll knock plenty screws loose when I wave the strap/ Or the mini deuce deuce....you’ll get a ‘.22, Two’ like a Jay-Z track/ solid nameplay open and attack line You had a “half off a vet” line vs Blue...voters thought it was hard, chief/ But watch JC vs Craig Lamar at 13:30...yep...this bitch is a bar thief/ LoL, good personal hit If you start beef, I’ll rush ya quick and have you flustered, bitch/ Then a pistol whip...slap the 5 across your mouth like you let a cuss word slip/ cool 2 ratchets...if theses bitches start banging, you’ll need the strap, bitch/ Im savage! Pull up to this fake bitch door with MACs beside me like Nev on catfish/ lol, fresh concept this is tight I got a strap that twice ya weight...Gun so big the serial number on a license plate/ Can’t hold it straight...so ‘I slide the arm over the shoulder’ like a high school date/ lol cool meta, punch a bit light but the concept was dope and this was worded well Cool battle here, Twodrop def really liked your first two bars u were rolling... then I feel like you got a tad played after that (Tacoma, connect 4 line) but on the whole pretty solid verse with some cool concepts.. Jabari... really solid 10 line verse, good consistency throughout and some dope concepts.. the gun bars got a bit repetitive but they were all solid and the personal was hard hitting I've got JB here... props to both |
07-24-2018, 07:27 PM | #11 |
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im fine w/ closing this... JB got it.
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