Keystyle Hype

Atomic · 07-01-2013, 09:37 AM

just felt like writing, 10min key.

i'm dope & potent, a bit of swag with no emotion
so bold with flowin youre dieing & i hold the potion
cold yet molten like a volcano about to burst
youre getting carried away but w/o the hearse
my bouts are work, yours are fuckin played bitch
I stay sick you lame pricks get slayed quick
reach out, grab the katana & I slice now
I'm bright clown & at the top like a lighthouse
this is typed out but the swag is limitless
fag I'll finish this ur wack & lack the penmanship
killin' it watch as the bodys are piled up
the shotty & 9 buck, it soundin like 5 trucks
die slut. now it's no surprise that ur gassed
ur dime will get thrashed i'll eye her & blast
splash. i'm nice when i rap, ur nice like polite
i'm tight when i write, who's hyping this dyke?
not me it's clear to see your writtens are sloppy
who's kidding it's choppy, prolly bitten or copied
i'm killin him softy, fuck it i'm spittin the shotty
watch it's ripping your body.. now ur smashed,
...but i'm not feelin bacardi.

pz

Rojo187 · 07-01-2013, 01:06 PM

coo lil keystyle...few things tho...I kno you using multis as ya rhyme scheme but it gets repetitive after a while and try to add a lil more personality to your content too..that would make it hot

Atomic · 07-01-2013, 01:08 PM

for sure man i know what you mean, just a lil 10 minute piece. preciate the feed tho mayne.

Coup · 07-01-2013, 08:00 PM

not multis, rather slants...

a formulaic spit in 10 mins...props on that. came in pretty hard, and left hard...

07-01-2013, 09:37 AM	#1
Atomic official hypedaddy. Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 951 Battle Record: 11-12 Champed - Sickeningly White Night VI - Longbar Heavyweight Belt (0x) - Shortbar Featherweight Belt (0x) Rep Power: 0	Keystyle Hype just felt like writing, 10min key. i'm dope & potent, a bit of swag with no emotion so bold with flowin youre dieing & i hold the potion cold yet molten like a volcano about to burst youre getting carried away but w/o the hearse my bouts are work, yours are fuckin played bitch I stay sick you lame pricks get slayed quick reach out, grab the katana & I slice now I'm bright clown & at the top like a lighthouse this is typed out but the swag is limitless fag I'll finish this ur wack & lack the penmanship killin' it watch as the bodys are piled up the shotty & 9 buck, it soundin like 5 trucks die slut. now it's no surprise that ur gassed ur dime will get thrashed i'll eye her & blast splash. i'm nice when i rap, ur nice like polite i'm tight when i write, who's hyping this dyke? not me it's clear to see your writtens are sloppy who's kidding it's choppy, prolly bitten or copied i'm killin him softy, fuck it i'm spittin the shotty watch it's ripping your body.. now ur smashed, ...but i'm not feelin bacardi. pz

07-01-2013, 08:00 PM	#4
Coup Don't believe the hype Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 572 Battle Record: 4-5 Rep Power: 0	not multis, rather slants... a formulaic spit in 10 mins...props on that. came in pretty hard, and left hard... __________________ What is public must be legit, fit for average consumption, don't forget. What is private is handled by pirates, prying loose profits from prosthetics. To tell the difference between: first remain unseen with a steady breath and hope, then listen to the cracks in the wall with a stethoscope.

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07-01-2013, 01:06 PM	#2
Rojo187 Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 208 Champed The Hunt for Cane VII Rep Power: 37	coo lil keystyle...few things tho...I kno you using multis as ya rhyme scheme but it gets repetitive after a while and try to add a lil more personality to your content too..that would make it hot

07-01-2013, 01:08 PM	#3
Atomic official hypedaddy. Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 951 Battle Record: 11-12 Champed - Sickeningly White Night VI - Longbar Heavyweight Belt (0x) - Shortbar Featherweight Belt (0x) Rep Power: 0	for sure man i know what you mean, just a lil 10 minute piece. preciate the feed tho mayne.