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07-14-2014, 11:10 PM
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Psichocys (Freestyle Audio)
The final installment in my Psilocybin Trilogy.
- I think I almost perfected the style I was going for with this one. - Tell me what you think. Did I finally fix that delivery? - Instrumental is Portishead - Over
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07-15-2014, 11:13 AM
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this is rough man....Wish you would at least attempt to ride the beat...
to be honest I only made it through 1:10 then I had to stop it I get the whole point of wha' you tryna do...But why Hide from the camera if it's a video...Why talk with no rhythm when you have a beat on....Juz not a style I think really exists...at least you puttin' ya self out there an lettin' ya voice be heard... But please next time ride a beat an actually rap...I can tell you creative enough to come up with somethin' besides this HoLLa |
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07-15-2014, 01:40 PM
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do you hear the drums in that song, im on beat 100%...
i respect ur opinion tho
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07-15-2014, 07:31 PM
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dude, you are an embarrassment to Canada
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07-15-2014, 07:58 PM
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I feel like I understand what you're trying to do.
Ever heard El-P - The Overly Dramatic Truth? Gottta put some more flavor and passion into what you're spitting bro.
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07-17-2014, 03:36 PM
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lol not my cup of tea at all but hey, do you...
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07-17-2014, 03:52 PM
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laughing so fucking hard rn
Abandon this style & never look back, sounded like a particularly badly scripted Voiceover from Dragon Age Origins or something lmaoo
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