Serious vs. Meth {Meth wins}

[~RustyGunZ~]

NBL
Netcees Text Battle League

@Serious @Meth @i am meth wtf

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Tuesday,
  June 11th, 2013 at 11:59 PM PST.
• Voting ends Friday June 14th at 11:59 PM PST.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are normally 24 hours
  (unless requested otherwise, that is),
  can be no longer than 36 hours
  and have to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limit:

• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 16 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.

Voting:

• Must vote on 5 battles and post your links.
• Post the links in the thread titled "Week 7 Voting Links".
• You will be punished if you don't post all 5 voting links.
  You will not like the punishment, so just vote so you
  don't have to cry later. Details about this are to be
  found in the "Week 7 Voting Links" thread.

General Rules:

• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
  linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
  means you will disqualified.
• A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
• If your opponent doesn't check in,
  you still have to post a verse.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
  must match the 1st person's line amount.

Haven't battled since December. Keep it at 10.

[Spoken]

Sure thing

Got 10 when you are ready.

[Spoken]

@Meth

This one is for the records... were both rusty in text,
difference between us though as im an emotion...
...your emotionally drawn to that mess.
bucks shot?!.. never! he wont let the chrome bang on a mission
only time we catch him droppin' mags...
... is putting out the next issue along with chat and predictions.
word is you try too much to fit in.. it goes well with you duke,
You've had your TIME TO KILL<-- but even at that there questioning truth.
your a sad excuse for a breath i see no value in winning,
they say you got style?... its only cause its been fighting to be relevant from the beginning.
This battle defines your future admit it<-- thats how you feel,
but i mean your the one whose to be METH... bodybag..
..no discomfort since your used to being bagged and concealed.

Let's Dance

My punches replacing your mouth w/ so much metal you'll cry hoe
When I'm done w/ Seri you'll be sounding so robotic you could be the voice of the iPhone
I'm accurate w/ any weapon, i don't need any whistles or bells bruh
I shoot w/ such precision of Buffalo Bill, he just fires and misses his shots like 12 does
This dude's not on his A-game. no bitches are trying to sext him
Only women getting turned on by Sirius just love the voice of Howard Stern on the XM
I'm a fucking king. People admire me but you're just a stupid cunt
And you ain't Roy'll, knock this bitch out with my famous Jones Junior punch
You ain't a lady killer either, it's obvious you're just a bum dude
Because you don't get it NSA, <-- and they're the only ones who want a call from you

[Sharp]

word is you try too much to fit in.. it goes well with you duke,
You've had your TIME TO KILL<-- but even at that there questioning truth.


opener coulda been done way better. droppin mags was done okay but pretty stretched and the idea's played to hell. time to kill coulda been done a lot better, quoted as your best attempt



My punches replacing your mouth w/ so much metal you'll cry hoe
When I'm done w/ Seri you'll be sounding so robotic you could be the voice of the iPhone
This dude's not on his A-game. no bitches are trying to sext him
Only women getting turned on by Sirius just love the voice of Howard Stern on the XM
You ain't a lady killer either, it's obvious you're just a bum dude
Because you don't get it NSA, <-- and they're the only ones who want a call from you

jim kelly line was pretty cool too, good showing


v/ meth

[Allen Knight]

bucks shot?!.. never! he wont let the chrome bang on a mission
only time we catch him droppin' mags...
... is putting out the next issue along with chat and predictions.

Vs

My punches replacing your mouth w/ so much metal you'll cry hoe
When I'm done w/ Seri you'll be sounding so robotic you could be the voice of the iPhone
I'm accurate w/ any weapon, i don't need any whistles or bells bruh
I shoot w/ such precision of Buffalo Bill, he just fires and misses his shots like 12 does
This dude's not on his A-game. no bitches are trying to sext him
Only women getting turned on by Sirius just love the voice of Howard Stern on the XM

V/Meth, serious has potential but alot of old concepts work on being fresh wording is decent, meth took this wit a solid verse i liked the iphone bar consistent drop. props yah'll

[Boredom]

bucks shot?!.. never! he wont let the chrome bang on a mission
only time we catch him droppin' mags...
... is putting out the next issue along with chat and predictions.

Vs

My punches replacing your mouth w/ so much metal you'll cry hoe
When I'm done w/ Seri you'll be sounding so robotic you could be the voice of the iPhone
I'm accurate w/ any weapon, i don't need any whistles or bells bruh
I shoot w/ such precision of Buffalo Bill, he just fires and misses his shots like 12 does'

mvgt meth with the harder hitters, more consistent all around

[Dominate]

bucks shot?!.. never! he wont let the chrome bang on a mission
only time we catch him droppin' mags...
... is putting out the next issue along with chat and predictions.
concept is very played but your wording is good here
word is you try too much to fit in.. it goes well with you duke,
You've had your TIME TO KILL<-- but even at that there questioning truth.
wp idea is OK but it's not worded cleanly. Connections are vague
This battle defines your future admit it<-- thats how you feel,
but i mean your the one whose to be METH... bodybag..
..no discomfort since your used to being bagged and concealed.
wording here is terrible. barely makes sense. It's an OK concept for a nameflip but you gotta put some more thought into delivery [/QUOTE]

the other two I don't have anything to say about besides that I didn't like them

Originally Posted by Meth

Let's Dance

My punches replacing your mouth w/ so much metal you'll cry hoe
When I'm done w/ Seri you'll be sounding so robotic you could be the voice of the iPhone
dope np, good flip
I'm accurate w/ any weapon, i don't need any whistles or bells bruh
I shoot w/ such precision of Buffalo Bill, he just fires and misses his shots like 12 does
i don't get the fires & misses shots/12 connection
This dude's not on his A-game. no bitches are trying to sext him
Only women getting turned on by Sirius just love the voice of Howard Stern on the XM
cool. had to look up the reference
I'm a fucking king. People admire me but you're just a stupid cunt
And you ain't Roy'll, knock this bitch out with my famous Jones Junior punch
royal/roy-i'll? not forced phonetically but just don't like how you have to word it to make it work
You ain't a lady killer either, it's obvious you're just a bum dude
Because you don't get it NSA, <-- and they're the only ones who want a call from you
I don't get this either :(
I know NSA national security agency, don't know what the other side of it is

Serious didn't have anything I'd really quote. Closest was time to kill but that was worded weird... or the mag line but that's played af... Meth had the opener that was dope. He wins just off of that... Howard stern was cool... roy jones I didnt like... other 2 I didn't get but it wont affect the outcome of my vote, so



v/ Meth