Keystyle dudes

CopyPat · 05-23-2013, 04:37 AM

seriously wtf
listen to these actors
wimpy lil rappers aint lyrically tough enough
appear to be up on stuff, lie through they teeth
the beer in me musters up rhymes to the beat
im tryin to speak.. the truth and hurts you
thats why these emcees could use a rehearsal
im usually worth full price when i spit rounds
dudes is reversal. they writes is a discount
im typin this shit down carelessly breezin
mic get a zit how im blarin this grease in
embarrass emcees when they step to the god
i cherish the feeling of vengeance alot
the pen is the law and im pressin a charge
i'm sheriff this evening so get in dem bars
can't mess with the sarge, u gettin discharged
you catch an assault whenever i talk
im heaviest hard, u regular soft
and ready or not im getting involved
detectives get called and guess what they saw?
the death of you all. a plethora of bodies
lined up in a row, it mighta been the flow
rhymes was overdosed cause i kinda spit it dope
hymen was exposed, little rappers gettin popped
grimey plus its so sick cause Patrick is the boss.

Geno · 05-23-2013, 08:57 PM

Dope flex
Easily read with a couple slick lines. The spit rounds discount transition was cool. Good shit cp. Stay up

Zen · 05-24-2013, 01:17 PM

Dope key. And welcome back Pat ain't seen you in a minute. We still gotta get that collab going. Keep droppin man.

Dove Dozer · 05-26-2013, 02:35 PM

Sick little flex pat. Feelin the vibes bruh.

Holler.

Mr. J · 05-26-2013, 03:12 PM

This was pretty dope, you still have that edge
nice little flow to it, you had some nice lines scattered throughout
cool to see more people dropping though...

im usually worth full price when i spit rounds
dudes is reversal. they writes is a discount
^^^^^

that was nice, I feel like you could have set it up better
but the way it came out was pretty sick regardless nice drop bro

05-23-2013, 04:37 AM	#1
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	Keystyle dudes seriously wtf listen to these actors wimpy lil rappers aint lyrically tough enough appear to be up on stuff, lie through they teeth the beer in me musters up rhymes to the beat im tryin to speak.. the truth and hurts you thats why these emcees could use a rehearsal im usually worth full price when i spit rounds dudes is reversal. they writes is a discount im typin this shit down carelessly breezin mic get a zit how im blarin this grease in embarrass emcees when they step to the god i cherish the feeling of vengeance alot the pen is the law and im pressin a charge i'm sheriff this evening so get in dem bars can't mess with the sarge, u gettin discharged you catch an assault whenever i talk im heaviest hard, u regular soft and ready or not im getting involved detectives get called and guess what they saw? the death of you all. a plethora of bodies lined up in a row, it mighta been the flow rhymes was overdosed cause i kinda spit it dope hymen was exposed, little rappers gettin popped grimey plus its so sick cause Patrick is the boss. Last edited by CopyPat; 05-23-2013 at 05:04 AM.

05-23-2013, 08:57 PM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Dope flex Easily read with a couple slick lines. The spit rounds discount transition was cool. Good shit cp. Stay up __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

05-26-2013, 02:35 PM	#4
Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,077 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853216	Sick little flex pat. Feelin the vibes bruh. Holler. __________________

05-26-2013, 03:12 PM	#5
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	This was pretty dope, you still have that edge nice little flow to it, you had some nice lines scattered throughout cool to see more people dropping though... im usually worth full price when i spit rounds dudes is reversal. they writes is a discount ^^^^^ that was nice, I feel like you could have set it up better but the way it came out was pretty sick regardless nice drop bro __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

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05-24-2013, 01:17 PM	#3
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Dope key. And welcome back Pat ain't seen you in a minute. We still gotta get that collab going. Keep droppin man.