The Art Of Confession(Genocide, Natural, and EndSane)

Natural · 05-09-2013, 08:35 PM

Natural:
Bless me Father for i have sinned, it has been two
years since my last confession.

Priest Genocide:What sins have you committed?

My mind is morbid and a screw loose out in
orbit
I practice voodoo and summon forces of evil
Sources
I'm remorseless when i torture humans till
rigamortis
My back yard is full of buried corpses and
crosses
I worship satin and abuse all of my anti
Psychotics
I steal just about anything i can fit in my
Pocket
I'm constantly dishonest and have sex without
condoms
Father please help me im tellin ya i got real
problems

Priest Genocide:
First of all son, listen, i ain't ya typical priest
I've been through the same shit, and had to visit police
But you've got different belief's, let me examine'em closer
seems ur only sry cause the weight's to big to bear on ur shoulders
I mean -I'm terribly older, and know the different escapes
You thinking you can find forgiveness for they dig you a grave
This shit isn't a game, so think fore you become the armed robber
Go say some damn hail marries, and a couple our fathers.

EndSane:
Forgive me father for i have sinned. It has been two months since my last confession.

Priest Genocide:What sins have you committed?

See I've doubled the slaughter it was subtle no bother
When the trouble muddled I become the imposter
struggled with lager, I drank til I was in a puddle of slobber
Always finding trouble cause I was a stumbling monster
Enraged and vulgar, I was never humble or proper
The more I indulged in myself made me dumber and hotter
Stuttered my words as I past out on a motherless daughter
Took her to my room and then woke up chugging some water

Priest Genocide..
Come on young man, all this drinking's only killing ur soul
The pain dies off drunk, while the hand in hand illnesses don't
Used to share the same images though, I medicated myself
Prayed to god, and I was taught my own hatred was hell
And as I drank from the well, where all the alcohol flows
Face first, passed out from a thirst I never knew how to control
So trust me -your about to explode, its self disposal of life
Go to the pew, get on your knees, and do the rosary twice

Mr. J · 05-09-2013, 08:39 PM

This shit reminds me of that Joe Budden track
which I know Geno is an avid fan of...you two pull it off
the vibe is geniune..the flow was nice from the beginning
then it picked up from there after the switch off
both dropped some stellar verses...nice drop fella's

EndSane · 05-10-2013, 07:53 AM

Lol @Mr. J

U know I'm in this as well lol not just geno and natural???

Natural · 05-10-2013, 04:59 PM

Bump, will rtf.

Just Write · 05-10-2013, 05:19 PM

this was a dope collab. i love collabs that run off of each other, they seem to help connect the piece as a whole to me,

natural,
i found your verse to have a little humor to it, a few parts made me lop. flow was smooth and consistent and stayed right on topic through out. sex without a condom was funny to me

fav lines

My mind is morbid and a screw loose out in orbit
I practice voodoo and summon forces of evil Sources

I worship satin and abuse anti Psychotics
I steal just about anything i can fit in my Pocket

genocide the priest,

you played this role very well, i could imagine some old tore up dirty priest smokin a cigar and scratchin his nuts while he was talking in the first verse lol, second verse seems like you took a more serious approach. flow and scheme along with word choice was dope as usual.

fav lines

First of all son, listen, i ain't ya typical priest
I've been through the same shit, and had to visit police

I mean -I'm terribly older, and know the different escapes
you thinking you can find forgiveness for they dig you a grave

Used to share the same images though, I medicated myself
Prayed to god, and I was taught my own hatred was hell
And as I drank from the well, where all the alcohol flows
Face first, passed out from a thirst I never knew how to control

endsane,

really enjoyed the flow of your verse, was almost tongue twister-ish, just flowed perfectly imo. content was on point and stayed on topic as well.

fav lines,

See I've doubled the slaughter it was subtle no bother
When the trouble muddled I become the imposter
struggled with lager, I drank til I was in a puddle of slobber
Always finding trouble cause I was a stumbling monster

this was a very good collab. kinda jealous i wasnt apart of it. you all held it down proper. peace

zygote · 05-11-2013, 10:37 PM

Humorous priest section from genocide, although the penance of "couple hail mary's" was funny for the crimes of natural - murder etc. When reading the first line of Genocides first paragraph, thought the twist was going to be the priest was possessed/incarnation of satan that would have been an interesting direction. Perhaps, though this was better without that - more focused and conceptually clear. Thought the language from Natural was stronger than Endsanes in the two comparable sections. Endsane had better rhyme schemes, but the bluntness/directness of Natural created a strong writing.

Fig · 05-12-2013, 10:05 PM

Great little scene you guys depicted here. Geno worked as a great priest I think, I especially enjoyed the humour in the verse following Naturals. Natural, I think you had the best verse here. The talks of voodoo and rigamortus made it almost comical, especially when considering the fact you came to a confessional to admit to them. Endsane, your structure was the best out of everyones. Really rolled off the tongue quite nicely.

tight collab

Zen · 05-14-2013, 01:02 PM

I gotta say you three meshed together quite well. Genocide as the priest of all things had the great dark humor in his verses in that very distinct Geno style. Natural's schemes to me were simple but very direct and to the point which made me enjoy your portion of this. And EndSane's flow in his piece was pretty fuckin nice mixed with some good multis as well. Excellent collab here fellas. Nice.

05-09-2013, 08:35 PM	#1
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 659 Rep Power: 0	The Art Of Confession(Genocide, Natural, and EndSane) Natural: Bless me Father for i have sinned, it has been two years since my last confession. Priest Genocide:What sins have you committed? My mind is morbid and a screw loose out in orbit I practice voodoo and summon forces of evil Sources I'm remorseless when i torture humans till rigamortis My back yard is full of buried corpses and crosses I worship satin and abuse all of my anti Psychotics I steal just about anything i can fit in my Pocket I'm constantly dishonest and have sex without condoms Father please help me im tellin ya i got real problems Priest Genocide: First of all son, listen, i ain't ya typical priest I've been through the same shit, and had to visit police But you've got different belief's, let me examine'em closer seems ur only sry cause the weight's to big to bear on ur shoulders I mean -I'm terribly older, and know the different escapes You thinking you can find forgiveness for they dig you a grave This shit isn't a game, so think fore you become the armed robber Go say some damn hail marries, and a couple our fathers. EndSane: Forgive me father for i have sinned. It has been two months since my last confession. Priest Genocide:What sins have you committed? See I've doubled the slaughter it was subtle no bother When the trouble muddled I become the imposter struggled with lager, I drank til I was in a puddle of slobber Always finding trouble cause I was a stumbling monster Enraged and vulgar, I was never humble or proper The more I indulged in myself made me dumber and hotter Stuttered my words as I past out on a motherless daughter Took her to my room and then woke up chugging some water Priest Genocide.. Come on young man, all this drinking's only killing ur soul The pain dies off drunk, while the hand in hand illnesses don't Used to share the same images though, I medicated myself Prayed to god, and I was taught my own hatred was hell And as I drank from the well, where all the alcohol flows Face first, passed out from a thirst I never knew how to control So trust me -your about to explode, its self disposal of life Go to the pew, get on your knees, and do the rosary twice Last edited by Natural; 10-25-2013 at 05:06 PM.

05-10-2013, 07:53 AM	#3
EndSane Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 88 Battle Record: 0-1 Champed Challenge Week I Challenge Week II Challenge Week III Challenge Week IV Challenge Week V Challenge Week VI Challenge Week VII Challenge Week VIII Challenge Week IX Challenge Week X Rep Power: 38	Lol @Mr. J U know I'm in this as well lol not just geno and natural??? __________________ Delirious Nomads

05-10-2013, 05:19 PM	#5
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	this was a dope collab. i love collabs that run off of each other, they seem to help connect the piece as a whole to me, natural, i found your verse to have a little humor to it, a few parts made me lop. flow was smooth and consistent and stayed right on topic through out. sex without a condom was funny to me fav lines My mind is morbid and a screw loose out in orbit I practice voodoo and summon forces of evil Sources I worship satin and abuse anti Psychotics I steal just about anything i can fit in my Pocket genocide the priest, you played this role very well, i could imagine some old tore up dirty priest smokin a cigar and scratchin his nuts while he was talking in the first verse lol, second verse seems like you took a more serious approach. flow and scheme along with word choice was dope as usual. fav lines First of all son, listen, i ain't ya typical priest I've been through the same shit, and had to visit police I mean -I'm terribly older, and know the different escapes you thinking you can find forgiveness for they dig you a grave Used to share the same images though, I medicated myself Prayed to god, and I was taught my own hatred was hell And as I drank from the well, where all the alcohol flows Face first, passed out from a thirst I never knew how to control endsane, really enjoyed the flow of your verse, was almost tongue twister-ish, just flowed perfectly imo. content was on point and stayed on topic as well. fav lines, See I've doubled the slaughter it was subtle no bother When the trouble muddled I become the imposter struggled with lager, I drank til I was in a puddle of slobber Always finding trouble cause I was a stumbling monster this was a very good collab. kinda jealous i wasnt apart of it. you all held it down proper. peace __________________

05-12-2013, 10:05 PM	#7
Fig Om Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6,461 Battle Record: 8-16 Rep Power: 84181562	Great little scene you guys depicted here. Geno worked as a great priest I think, I especially enjoyed the humour in the verse following Naturals. Natural, I think you had the best verse here. The talks of voodoo and rigamortus made it almost comical, especially when considering the fact you came to a confessional to admit to them. Endsane, your structure was the best out of everyones. Really rolled off the tongue quite nicely. tight collab __________________ BIRDHORSE 8-15

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05-09-2013, 08:39 PM	#2
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	This shit reminds me of that Joe Budden track which I know Geno is an avid fan of...you two pull it off the vibe is geniune..the flow was nice from the beginning then it picked up from there after the switch off both dropped some stellar verses...nice drop fella's

05-10-2013, 04:59 PM	#4
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 659 Rep Power: 0	Bump, will rtf.

05-11-2013, 10:37 PM	#6
zygote Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 501 Battle Record: 33-12 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Art of Writing League (3x) Rep Power: 737828	Humorous priest section from genocide, although the penance of "couple hail mary's" was funny for the crimes of natural - murder etc. When reading the first line of Genocides first paragraph, thought the twist was going to be the priest was possessed/incarnation of satan that would have been an interesting direction. Perhaps, though this was better without that - more focused and conceptually clear. Thought the language from Natural was stronger than Endsanes in the two comparable sections. Endsane had better rhyme schemes, but the bluntness/directness of Natural created a strong writing.

05-14-2013, 01:02 PM	#8
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	I gotta say you three meshed together quite well. Genocide as the priest of all things had the great dark humor in his verses in that very distinct Geno style. Natural's schemes to me were simple but very direct and to the point which made me enjoy your portion of this. And EndSane's flow in his piece was pretty fuckin nice mixed with some good multis as well. Excellent collab here fellas. Nice.