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Old 02-26-2014, 11:48 AM   #1
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Think all these curses are rottin my throat, reciting acidic slurs that I wrote
Chaotic flows got me rockin ya boat block out the sun like fuck rays of hope
Fuck any nigga and fuck all these hoes ya it's generic I'll try not demote
Shit leave you winded like leaves in the breeze get off my clit I don't like to be teased
Not the the intention shit coulda fooled me hold ya attention while I try to think...
Ok with ease I'm back again tongue wanna lash again, with demanding force
Like to let the wound heal then scar up the track again, like branding a horse
Tragic of course I'm leavin my mark on the map I'm givin these bitches the cue to attack
Use words as bullets like rat-tat-tat-tat
These bitches all bark and no bite that's a fact
Ready or not here I come tag with meat cleaves lets have fun
Hide n seek incorporate guns breathin in heaves coughing up blood
This is medicinal call it ya clinical
Throat goin sore as I scream every syllable
Raw with emotion intentional rage
Born a mean bitch shit my crib was a cage..

My shits never typical...
But never subliminal
Shit if this hit ya conscious you weak minded bitches are pitiful



(Rough draft of something I might clean up and continue)
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Old 02-26-2014, 12:00 PM   #2
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Why black skin head tho ? Makes no sense

The verse was kind of generic or maybe seemed so cause the content didn't match the title
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Old 02-26-2014, 12:14 PM   #3
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Oh that was just the instrumental name I have no title really since it's random lol
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Old 02-27-2014, 02:18 AM   #4
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this was alright, some multies were off like "demanding force/branding a horse"



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