Boredom vs. Vinzr {Boredom wins}

[Sn00p]

AOBL
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  March 7th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
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@Boredom @Vinzr

[Vinzr]

In

[Boredom]

check.

10-12

[Boredom]

Prolly need the ext working late, il try n write tonight if not I'll post tomorrow after work

[Vinzr]

Same here man

[Vinzr]

cant drop tmrw so i'll just drop a quick one now

You making a bold prediction thinkin your gonna win, you’re wrong this time
Boredom lines are dropped on u plenty, but we can’t help but speak what’s on our mind
I hear whispers, everybody on this forum reckons ya stink
If anyone asked bout your talent, I won’t needa second to think, I’ll tell em by the first one
I’ll be your worst nightmare, don’t even think about dreamin about ending me
I don’t wanna treat ya like a 10 year old, but you need to watch out for that spelling B
You might have a Cinderella story but I’m the type known to burn fables
Scratch my back, I’ll scratch yours, while I’m hitting the 1, 2 like a DJ does on turntables
We’re raise the stakes, I’ll throw heavy haymakers…leave you seein’ stars
Even if we put you on a pedal stool… you’d still have trouble tryna reach the bar

[Boredom]

yup...


i got naked hoes in tropical spots, where we cliff jump n they slob on my cock
if they ever told u to dive in it's w/ the hopes that your body splatters on the rocks
this faggot should die, i'll quickly leave em w/ a severed head
actually just an ironic statment..ur from rapisalive n the reason why text is dead
V an easy mark, a quick kill so i won't leave the lead pumped in this homo
i'll just beat ur skull till the splatter of brains on the wall resemble the punisher logo
lars was talkin bout u in his thread title, u'd get slumped tryna play w/ his reach
ur vagina is ssoooooooooo shook by him the sand that fell out could layer a beach
i can dick ur wifey in a second, and after i shove my cock up in ya queens mouth
u can find vineer a pool o' blood begging for those cuz i knocked his fucking teeth out

[RPK]

I’ll be your worst nightmare, don’t even think about dreamin about ending me
I don’t wanna treat ya like a 10 year old, but you need to watch out for that spelling B
(Barely)

Vs

lars was talkin bout u in his thread title, u'd get slumped tryna play w/ his reach
ur vagina is ssoooooooooo shook by him the sand that fell out could layer a beach
i can dick ur wifey in a second, and after i shove my cock up in ya queens mouth
u can find vineer a pool o' blood begging for those cuz i knocked his fucking teeth out

This was pretty onesided. Vins drop felt rushed. boredom had an ok verse.
V/Boredom

[Sharp]

Spelling B

v

Vineer


I feel like Boredom's only miss was the RIA line, while Vinzr had a few more that took away from his verse. Had 1 quote each, but I have to give it to boredom with a few more hits overall.

V/ Boredom

[~RustyGunZ~]

Mediocre verse okay attempts


Vs

Vineer and sand shook was cool, the rest wasn't bad

V/boredom

[Maximus]

Vinz had some decent attempts but overall it was a pretty weak verse. Boredom took this with ease with his last two bars.
V/bore

[Dominate]

Vinzr: some OK attempts but nothing that really came together and did any damage... look at vets verses to see how they turn a concept into something good with wording and creativity

Boredom:I liked text is dead and vineers... rest was OKish...


Fairly one sided


v/ Boredom

[Hollywood]

Boredom's sooo shook & vineer lines were both dope

the sooo shook line deserves more props IMO, good stuff

that's all I was feelin though, V/Boredom

[Dope girl]

Both of you came out Dope & creative, I'm going with B I like his verse more.