Orc (2-0) vs Sebastian Brawl (2-0) - ORC WINS

Sharp · 12-13-2013, 02:20 PM

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@Orc @Sebastian Brawl

Sharp · 12-13-2013, 02:21 PM

Both are docked 4 votes for not voting last week

Orc · 12-13-2013, 04:45 PM

j

Sebastian Brawl · 12-13-2013, 09:11 PM

yup

Orc · 12-18-2013, 06:12 PM

.

we ain't on a same tier. actin like ya shits rly dope
I shut Seth out 4 times. U barely pulled thru vs his 2 lines w/ pity votes
Shhh homie. Yappin like u wilin wen u meet chicks
Bitches dnt give u th Cold Shoulder. U cop that cryogenic treatment
Plus its funny ur whole steez is hopelessly worded
Listen. U cudn't be close to Fresh if Tic Tac ghosted ya verses
But fuckkk the Burden shit. Gods back
I'll put dude on ICE & we ain't talking Emergency Contacts
&&U been wahhhin & cryin so can't hope for clout
This mahfuckas a Fake Baby. He's like the one Strikta posts about
U ain't an undercova cop but for u this shits do r die
They call ya block Jump Street cuz ppl read ya shit n' commit suicide
&&I'll murda this league, n thats truth for the rivals
Trust if Seb's picking up Steam it's to Iron my suit for the Finals

.

Sebastian Brawl · 12-20-2013, 12:22 PM

Aliens are invading earth. Unicorn's are the defence in attack.
Flying pigs are on an murderous swarm & Orc still aint winnin this match!
You'za videogame nerd, so your skill lvl's no stressin. Nxt!
When I say "Jump." You'll say, “I'm tryin" while continuously pressin X
Let me put it out there: You're a homo & it's as plain as sin
The way you drag a 'maaaan' out you guys can duet perform “It's Raining Men"
Jab! Hook! Haymaker! w.my variety of hits, faggot you're wooze
Pssh! All of ya punches blow-> Cauz the windmill's your patented move
& this punchline might be played but idgaf while I'm merkin
^ Bitch. Your lil white ass shakin puts to shame Miley Cyrus twerkin
Runnin & gunnin at Brawl'll get ya deleted. Deaded. It's nothin..
I'll reverse that name you've built, Orc.. to give ya life The Cro Editin Button
Me?= Victorious fighter. You?= Inglorious writer/ Notorious biter
Ya lines drive's a time machine.. Stuck in the past like a broke dwn DeLorean rider

illy

CtrlF4 · 12-21-2013, 10:26 AM

Orc had

Opener, cold shoulder, jump street

Vs

Sebastian Had

Raining , closer

v/orc...i thought orc hit harder...i felt brawls aggression though lol..it was a lot of action like a old batman comic POW! lol but yeah both were cool but orc

Unfukwitable · 12-21-2013, 11:48 PM

Shhh homie. Yappin like u wilin wen u meet chicks
Bitches dnt give u th Cold Shoulder. U cop that cryogenic treatment
U ain't an undercova cop but for u this shits do r die
They call ya block Jump Street cuz ppl read ya shit n' commit suicide
&&I'll murda this league, n thats truth for the rivals
Trust if Seb's picking up Steam it's to Iron my suit for the Finals

vs

Jab! Hook! Haymaker! w.my variety of hits, faggot you're wooze
Pssh! All of ya punches blow-> Cauz the windmill's your patented move
Me?= Victorious fighter. You?= Inglorious writer/ Notorious biter
Ya lines drive's a time machine.. Stuck in the past like a broke dwn DeLorean rider

i felt one was more consistant with the lines, He had better landing punches and better misses Imo v/ORC

Alvin Karpis · 12-23-2013, 09:03 PM

sebastian had the miley cyrus and cro flip which were cool, some bad misses though
orc had a few more lines that stood out so he got this, didn't seem to put forth that much effort though
and i did like sebastian's personal approach

v/orc

Greed · 12-28-2013, 08:38 PM

Pity votes cold shoulder and fake baby

Vs

Pressin x windmill and twekin

V brawl

I thought the windmill line was cold

King Karaoke · 12-29-2013, 07:05 PM

Hi...

we ain't on a same tier. actin like ya shits rly dope
I shut Seth out 4 times. U barely pulled thru vs his 2 lines w/ pity votes
&&U been wahhhin & cryin so can't hope for clout
This mahfuckas a Fake Baby. He's like the one Strikta posts about

these were dope...
doesn't but still did enough to win...

Me?= Victorious fighter. You?= Inglorious writer/ Notorious biter
Ya lines drive's a time machine.. Stuck in the past like a broke dwn DeLorean rider

this was cool...
windmill could've been worded better...
overall your verse was not fresh...
concepts were old to me...

I think Orc got this with better concepts and wording...
vote- Orc...

Bye...

Plot · 12-30-2013, 05:52 AM

Orc
we ain't on a same tier. actin like ya shits rly dope
I shut Seth out 4 times. U barely pulled thru vs his 2 lines w/ pity votes
..okay pers I guess,
Shhh homie. Yappin like u wilin wen u meet chicks
Bitches dnt give u th Cold Shoulder. U cop that cryogenic treatment
..I think the rhymes off, but punch is good
Plus its funny ur whole steez is hopelessly worded
Listen. U cudn't be close to Fresh if Tic Tac ghosted ya verses
..nice
But fuckkk the Burden shit. Gods back
I'll put dude on ICE & we ain't talking Emergency Contacts
..I like this, fresh concept but set up is shit
&&U been wahhhin & cryin. so can't hope for clout
This mahfuckas a Fake Baby. He's like the one Strikta posts about
..meh
U ain't an undercova cop but for u this shits do r die
They call ya block Jump Street cuz ppl read ya shit n' commit suicide
..Meh, I was thinking bout 21 when I read it, its okay I guess
&&I'll murda this league, n thats truth for the rivals
Trust if Seb's picking up Steam it's to Iron my suit for the Finals
..Liked this

Seb
Aliens are invading earth. Unicorn's are the defence in attack.
Flying pigs are on an murderous swarm & Orc still aint winnin this match!
..funny but not punching
You'za videogame nerd, so your skill lvl's no stressin. Nxt!
When I say "Jump." You'll say, “I'm tryin" while continuously pressin X
..don't like this much
Let me put it out there: You're a homo & it's as plain as sin
The way you drag a 'maaaan' out you guys can duet perform “It's Raining Men"
..nuh
Jab! Hook! Haymaker! w.my variety of hits, faggot you're wooze
Pssh! All of ya punches blow-> Cauz the windmill's your patented move
..weird, Like the wp but punch and set up seem strange
& this punchline might be played but idgaf while I'm merkin
^ Bitch. Your lil white ass shakin puts to shame Miley Cyrus twerkin
..nah without a good twist Mileys played
Runnin & gunnin at Brawl'll get ya deleted. Deaded. It's nothin..
I'll reverse that name you've built, Orc.. to give ya life The Cro Editin Button
..this is good, prolly been done before tho
Me?= Victorious fighter. You?= Inglorious writer/ Notorious biter
Ya lines drive's a time machine.. Stuck in the past like a broke dwn DeLorean rider
..rider? sholuda been driver, wasn't that good.

I like Sebs swagger, hes got that but kinda lacks with pushing concepts to work.
Orc got this

Tic · 12-30-2013, 09:32 AM

we ain't on a same tier. actin like ya shits rly dope
I shut Seth out 4 times. U barely pulled thru vs his 2 lines w/ pity votes
Shhh homie. Yappin like u wilin wen u meet chicks
Bitches dnt give u th Cold Shoulder. U cop that cryogenic treatment
But fuckkk the Burden shit. Gods back
I'll put dude on ICE & we ain't talking Emergency Contacts

Vs.

Jab! Hook! Haymaker! w.my variety of hits, faggot you're wooze
Pssh! All of ya punches blow-> Cauz the windmill's your patented move

V/Orc - better lines and misses. Brawl had ok ideas I guess, but the wording was really off.

12-18-2013, 06:12 PM	#5
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	. we ain't on a same tier. actin like ya shits rly dope I shut Seth out 4 times. U barely pulled thru vs his 2 lines w/ pity votes Shhh homie. Yappin like u wilin wen u meet chicks Bitches dnt give u th Cold Shoulder. U cop that cryogenic treatment Plus its funny ur whole steez is hopelessly worded Listen. U cudn't be close to Fresh if Tic Tac ghosted ya verses But fuckkk the Burden shit. Gods back I'll put dude on ICE & we ain't talking Emergency Contacts &&U been wahhhin & cryin so can't hope for clout This mahfuckas a Fake Baby. He's like the one Strikta posts about U ain't an undercova cop but for u this shits do r die They call ya block Jump Street cuz ppl read ya shit n' commit suicide &&I'll murda this league, n thats truth for the rivals Trust if Seb's picking up Steam it's to Iron my suit for the Finals . Last edited by Orc; 12-18-2013 at 06:16 PM.

12-20-2013, 12:22 PM	#6
Sebastian Brawl Hit me, I dare you. Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 31 Battle Record: 2-2 Rep Power: 0	Aliens are invading earth. Unicorn's are the defence in attack. Flying pigs are on an murderous swarm & Orc still aint winnin this match! You'za videogame nerd, so your skill lvl's no stressin. Nxt! When I say "Jump." You'll say, “I'm tryin" while continuously pressin X Let me put it out there: You're a homo & it's as plain as sin The way you drag a 'maaaan' out you guys can duet perform “It's Raining Men" Jab! Hook! Haymaker! w.my variety of hits, faggot you're wooze Pssh! All of ya punches blow-> Cauz the windmill's your patented move & this punchline might be played but idgaf while I'm merkin ^ Bitch. Your lil white ass shakin puts to shame Miley Cyrus twerkin Runnin & gunnin at Brawl'll get ya deleted. Deaded. It's nothin.. I'll reverse that name you've built, Orc.. to give ya life The Cro Editin Button Me?= Victorious fighter. You?= Inglorious writer/ Notorious biter Ya lines drive's a time machine.. Stuck in the past like a broke dwn DeLorean rider illy Last edited by Sebastian Brawl; 12-21-2013 at 07:55 AM.

12-29-2013, 07:05 PM	#11
King Karaoke Stackin' wins... Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,515 Battle Record: 61-20 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - Survivor Tournament - Netcees Battle League (6x) - Netcees Gimmick Tournament Rep Power: 10353697	Hi... we ain't on a same tier. actin like ya shits rly dope I shut Seth out 4 times. U barely pulled thru vs his 2 lines w/ pity votes &&U been wahhhin & cryin so can't hope for clout This mahfuckas a Fake Baby. He's like the one Strikta posts about these were dope... doesn't but still did enough to win... Me?= Victorious fighter. You?= Inglorious writer/ Notorious biter Ya lines drive's a time machine.. Stuck in the past like a broke dwn DeLorean rider this was cool... windmill could've been worded better... overall your verse was not fresh... concepts were old to me... I think Orc got this with better concepts and wording... vote- Orc... Bye... __________________ the Outsiders Orc \| ill nik-A \| Sn00p \| King Karaoke

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12-13-2013, 04:45 PM	#3
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	j

12-13-2013, 09:11 PM	#4
Sebastian Brawl Hit me, I dare you. Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 31 Battle Record: 2-2 Rep Power: 0	yup

12-21-2013, 10:26 AM	#7
CtrlF4 ....Hakuna Matata.... Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 770 Battle Record: 11-11 Rep Power: 3351062	Orc had Opener, cold shoulder, jump street Vs Sebastian Had Raining , closer v/orc...i thought orc hit harder...i felt brawls aggression though lol..it was a lot of action like a old batman comic POW! lol but yeah both were cool but orc

12-21-2013, 11:48 PM	#8
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,643 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460388	Shhh homie. Yappin like u wilin wen u meet chicks Bitches dnt give u th Cold Shoulder. U cop that cryogenic treatment U ain't an undercova cop but for u this shits do r die They call ya block Jump Street cuz ppl read ya shit n' commit suicide &&I'll murda this league, n thats truth for the rivals Trust if Seb's picking up Steam it's to Iron my suit for the Finals vs Jab! Hook! Haymaker! w.my variety of hits, faggot you're wooze Pssh! All of ya punches blow-> Cauz the windmill's your patented move Me?= Victorious fighter. You?= Inglorious writer/ Notorious biter Ya lines drive's a time machine.. Stuck in the past like a broke dwn DeLorean rider i felt one was more consistant with the lines, He had better landing punches and better misses Imo v/ORC

12-23-2013, 09:03 PM	#9
Alvin Karpis 2020 Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 647 Battle Record: 34-12 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Summer Classic V - Summer Classic IV - NBL Season 7 - BA Swag and Flow - BA Swag & Flow Tournament II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV Rep Power: 4052847	sebastian had the miley cyrus and cro flip which were cool, some bad misses though orc had a few more lines that stood out so he got this, didn't seem to put forth that much effort though and i did like sebastian's personal approach v/orc

12-28-2013, 08:38 PM	#10
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,721 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975687	Pity votes cold shoulder and fake baby Vs Pressin x windmill and twekin V brawl I thought the windmill line was cold

12-30-2013, 05:52 AM	#12
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,374 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309744	Orc we ain't on a same tier. actin like ya shits rly dope I shut Seth out 4 times. U barely pulled thru vs his 2 lines w/ pity votes ..okay pers I guess, Shhh homie. Yappin like u wilin wen u meet chicks Bitches dnt give u th Cold Shoulder. U cop that cryogenic treatment ..I think the rhymes off, but punch is good Plus its funny ur whole steez is hopelessly worded Listen. U cudn't be close to Fresh if Tic Tac ghosted ya verses ..nice But fuckkk the Burden shit. Gods back I'll put dude on ICE & we ain't talking Emergency Contacts ..I like this, fresh concept but set up is shit &&U been wahhhin & cryin. so can't hope for clout This mahfuckas a Fake Baby. He's like the one Strikta posts about ..meh U ain't an undercova cop but for u this shits do r die They call ya block Jump Street cuz ppl read ya shit n' commit suicide ..Meh, I was thinking bout 21 when I read it, its okay I guess &&I'll murda this league, n thats truth for the rivals Trust if Seb's picking up Steam it's to Iron my suit for the Finals ..Liked this Seb Aliens are invading earth. Unicorn's are the defence in attack. Flying pigs are on an murderous swarm & Orc still aint winnin this match! ..funny but not punching You'za videogame nerd, so your skill lvl's no stressin. Nxt! When I say "Jump." You'll say, “I'm tryin" while continuously pressin X ..don't like this much Let me put it out there: You're a homo & it's as plain as sin The way you drag a 'maaaan' out you guys can duet perform “It's Raining Men" ..nuh Jab! Hook! Haymaker! w.my variety of hits, faggot you're wooze Pssh! All of ya punches blow-> Cauz the windmill's your patented move ..weird, Like the wp but punch and set up seem strange & this punchline might be played but idgaf while I'm merkin ^ Bitch. Your lil white ass shakin puts to shame Miley Cyrus twerkin ..nah without a good twist Mileys played Runnin & gunnin at Brawl'll get ya deleted. Deaded. It's nothin.. I'll reverse that name you've built, Orc.. to give ya life The Cro Editin Button ..this is good, prolly been done before tho Me?= Victorious fighter. You?= Inglorious writer/ Notorious biter Ya lines drive's a time machine.. Stuck in the past like a broke dwn DeLorean rider ..rider? sholuda been driver, wasn't that good. I like Sebs swagger, hes got that but kinda lacks with pushing concepts to work. Orc got this

12-30-2013, 09:32 AM	#13
Tic Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 1,509 Battle Record: 51-29 Champed - Newbie Tourney VII - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 20137909	we ain't on a same tier. actin like ya shits rly dope I shut Seth out 4 times. U barely pulled thru vs his 2 lines w/ pity votes Shhh homie. Yappin like u wilin wen u meet chicks Bitches dnt give u th Cold Shoulder. U cop that cryogenic treatment But fuckkk the Burden shit. Gods back I'll put dude on ICE & we ain't talking Emergency Contacts Vs. Jab! Hook! Haymaker! w.my variety of hits, faggot you're wooze Pssh! All of ya punches blow-> Cauz the windmill's your patented move V/Orc - better lines and misses. Brawl had ok ideas I guess, but the wording was really off.