Round 1: Nice vs Zenland {ZenLand wins}

[God Of War]

House Rules Apply


Minimum of 10 Lines, No More than 16


Round 1 Battles are Due on Sunday at Midnight Pacific


Explained Votes Only!


Good' Luck

[Zen]

Check I'll drop 12

[Nice]

Checkity

[Zen]

Decided to drop 10. Mad busy this week so here's some quick shit.


Let's put this game to rest, as you get whip lash from bein diminished fast
Because as your name suggests, Nice guys always finish last
I don't even have to try to blast on by, But nice needs a little help
Because judgin from his open mics he'll prolly kill his self
Your drops are always morbid with gore shit like you're controlled by evil forces
I'd tell you to prove it and record this, but you probably couldn't afford it

Originally Posted by Nice

Kid i got my own place on the beach, got my own whip and a motorcycle.. My lifes pretty fuckin good. How bout yours?

I'm fine thanks for askin, but to you, I don't think that's happenin you're actin
Because if that's true, then why does your self portrait make it tragic?
Either way one's false, Seems its a collection of gone soft and gore crossed
Shit you need directions, take I-1, You lost.

[Nice]

Luck has run its course, who said you could fuck with a demon?
On my dick about my spits, like you in love with my semen
Ya'll know what I’m meanin. ill snatch zens light from his verse
Meditate on his moms tongue while she drivin the hearse
You wanna talk about my lifestyle? Shit, Ive paid for my past
I talk about struggles... he just struggles With this pain in his ass
See everyone knows u on my dick, lets scope some of the reasons
First you shout out my self portrait, next you'll be quotin my pieces
Fuckin with nice, you'll be hurt like some blue balls
You couldnt pass me up if you threw your verse in a u-haul

[Geno]

Zen had a couple ok ideas, but weak dellivery killed his impact. His opener was prolly the best chance he had at a serious punch if he had used it better

Nice had a ok verse, I think his struggles line made the decision easy for me. By then it was plain to see he hat the better lines. Could still use a lot of work conceptually though.

Cool battle,,
V-Nice

[GR8 Genital]

V/ zen

not by much but had better lines IMO

Nice i liked the quoting versus line towards the end but i Honestly think zen took this one

[Boredom]

Nice had the harsher concepts/ideas and would've copped the w buuut he flipped that self portrait line IMO.. Not sure how @God Of War wants to handle that.. But nice gmv if he doesn't get dqd

[2tripple0]

vote nice thought he came a little smoother both were good but zen was a little bland at times compared to nice im pretty sure i would have voted for u if it was anyone else

[SiK]

I thought Zen started off decent....the wording made the punches flop tho imo....some decent ideas but nothing hit because your wording was plain as hell

Nice...lmao every verse you have is full of dick/seamen/balls....not really feeling that but you had the harder verse....lines that actually hit like the struggles line...

V/Nice

[Sn00p]

Upping over noshows.

[Zen]

Appreciate the votes guys and yeah I honestly hate battling but I figured I'd do it anyway haha. And isn't that a TKO for nice?

[ill nik-A]

nice guys finish last was Zen's best attempt imo
nice hadthe struggles line which was eh o i guess... best bar of the battle

i got nice in a lackluster battle tbh

[Zen]

5-1 Nice. Ycan close this now. I would say Nice moves on but he's probably bout to be banned. At least everyone knows for sure I actually wrote mine

[Hush]

Isn't Nice a biter?

@godofwar

Should be DQ'd

v/Zen

[~RustyGunZ~]

pretty weak battle overall, seems like both are just starting out, but nice hasa better idea of what he's doing, actially attempted punches

v/nice

[Obey]

close ass battle zen had his nice guy punch which stood out more than any of nices punches, I just wasnt feeling both verses guys your content was weak

vote- zen

[Strikta]

I got Zen here.. this battle wasn't good.

Nice is a biter tho so whenever I read his verse it's like staring at nothingness & I'm forced to turn away.

Step it up.

Vote- Zen