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10-17-2013, 06:38 PM
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10-17-2013, 07:38 PM
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I think you should add the lyrics to this..
other then that I think it was pretty good your flow seems to work pretty well with the beat voice is weird, but this is a weird world...keep it up
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10-22-2013, 11:26 AM
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lmao this was dope dude.
you should definitely keep posting this kinda material over here. the tell me a story / acid bar had me laughing. you have a great energy when you rhyme. vibing. it's black btw
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10-22-2013, 11:45 AM
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This was awesome. Very laidback. I didn't like that vocal sample at the start of your first verse, I thought it made the track too busy and its place in the mix distracted me from the lyrics. That's my only complaint. I liked the first verse but the second verse was great, I listened to it a couple times through. Unique voice and delivery. It was almost staccato, at some points not. The rhyming and flow in the second verse was top notch. Glad I listened to this, will check out your other stuff if its at this level.
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10-22-2013, 11:56 AM
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Same thing as pancake, the beginning was odd, but that was part of it I guess. So I liked it. The lyrics were cool. Obviously this isnt made in a million dollar studio, and we all know this. That'd be my only complaint. I don't want to make suggestions because you seem very well cemented in your style. Thanks
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10-22-2013, 12:04 PM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
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It reminded me of Gravediggaz with how you overstressed your rhymes at times and stopped and started a lot. Sometimes it seemed like you were stretching just to reach the beat, though. Mix your vocals to the front more.
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10-22-2013, 07:36 PM
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