Knucklehead vs Witty - Knucklehead wins

[Victor.]

NBL Season 11
Week 7

Due SUNDAY 8/26/18

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE


Don't edit after your opponent has posted.
2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle.
May God have mercy on your souls!

[~RustyGunZ~]

10 got 20 to write already this week

[Victor.]

Originally Posted by Knucklehead

10 got 20 to write already this week

Want me to take you out til next week ?

[~RustyGunZ~]

Originally Posted by Victor.

Want me to take you out til next week ?

Nah I can manage an extra 10 just not trying to go more than that

[Witty]

10's fine.

[Witty]

I won't be able to post tonight. Can post tomorrow if it's ok.
@Knucklehead @Hush

[~RustyGunZ~]

Cool with me

[Hush]

Ext is cool

[Witty]

You are extremely ugly my friend.

I spit fire, I'm a dragon with these flames that you get fried in
You're a game designer...that's ironic...cuz u look like someone created you in Skyrim
This racist fuck takes Daddy's money n thinks it makes him tough...u can lose that all in a night, coward
Cuz my boys'll put two 'Ks to K...and take all of this white's power.
Your wife's the kinda girl that ppl say is rly pretty...on the inside
And if they say that she's a princess...they mean Fiona... after midnight
You wanna be Hush sooo bad...but u ain't the main attraction...more like the secretary, bro
It's like this shit is Sonic...Knuckle's only ever the secondary role
I'm a savage still...put me with the best...I HAVE to kill
This faggot'll think it's all fun n games til that beam on his chest like Jacksonville.

[Hush]

@Knucklehead

[~RustyGunZ~]

Don't talk it if u can't walk it, cus if I check ya & ya fake you'll die
Pull up to ya crib in the forine & wave the heat out the window like grandma baked a pie
Put ya head through the coffee table, then stab ya with every shard - this shit is gory
Fam find ya in the living room droolin' w/ spikes in ya head like they turned on rick & morty
I don't do the fam dissin'. Ya gal dope, so I'mma take her if u test me
In ya own damn bed droppin' bombs w/ a fox under me, & u can't even pull that off on Netcees
Then my homies hittin' next - that bitch a party & shes in her glory, joker
This ain't the gram, but we'll have a ring around her face & keep tappin' til the stories over
Tell u to leave & ya life spared, but thats a lie cus we known to shoot
You'll step outside just to see some sticks above ya head like the patio got a pergola roof

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[Hush]

Votes

[Big Bolo]

Knuck

Don't talk it if u can't walk it, cus if I check ya & ya fake you'll die
Pull up to ya crib in the forine & wave the heat out the window like grandma baked a pie

Pretty coo, decent start

Put ya head through the coffee table, then stab ya with every shard - this shit is gory
Fam find ya in the living room droolin' w/ spikes in ya head like they turned on rick & morty

Meh this was ok

I don't do the fam dissin'. Ya gal dope, so I'mma take her if u test me
In ya own damn bed droppin' bombs w/ a fox under me, & u can't even pull that off on Netcees

Ouch

Then my homies hittin' next - that bitch a party & shes in her glory, joker
This ain't the gram, but we'll have a ring around her face & keep tappin' til the stories over

Not as good as before but pretty coo follow up

Tell u to leave & ya life spared, but thats a lie cus we known to shoot
You'll step outside just to see some sticks above ya head like the patio got a pergola roof

Pretty coo ending here

Vs,


Witty

I spit fire, I'm a dragon with these flames that you get fried in
You're a game designer...that's ironic...cuz u look like someone created you in Skyrim

Never seen a pic of this dude so that makes this less impactful

This racist fuck takes Daddy's money n thinks it makes him tough...u can lose that all in a night, coward
Cuz my boys'll put two 'Ks to K...and take all of this white's power

Not bad here, pretty coo np

Your wife's the kinda girl that ppl say is rly pretty...on the inside
And if they say that she's a princess...they mean Fiona... after midnight

Lol liked this

You wanna be Hush sooo bad...but u ain't the main attraction...more like the secretary, bro
It's like this shit is Sonic...Knuckle's only ever the secondary role

This was a coo concept, think the wording is off

I'm a savage still...put me with the best...I HAVE to kill
This faggot'll think it's all fun n games til that beam on his chest like Jacksonville.

Ok ending here


Pretty coo little read here you guys both did good, enjoyed both for sure. I don't have much to say against either verse, both went straight through with some nice punches, witty had a couple more personals but even with that I think knuck got this one, that fox line was real nice imo, vote knuck

[Blue Bayou]

Don't talk it if u can't walk it, cus if I check ya & ya fake you'll die
Pull up to ya crib in the forine & wave the heat out the window like grandma baked a pie
lol, cool meta... like this
Put ya head through the coffee table, then stab ya with every shard - this shit is gory
Fam find ya in the living room droolin' w/ spikes in ya head like they turned on rick & morty
looked it up, creative enough but not loving it..
I don't do the fam dissin'. Ya gal dope, so I'mma take her if u test me
In ya own damn bed droppin' bombs w/ a fox under me, & u can't even pull that off on Netcees
pretty solid, good hit
Then my homies hittin' next - that bitch a party & shes in her glory, joker
This ain't the gram, but we'll have a ring around her face & keep tappin' til the stories over
hahaha nice, this is dope
Tell u to leave & ya life spared, but thats a lie cus we known to shoot
You'll step outside just to see some sticks above ya head like the patio got a pergola roof
bit obscure but in a cool way, dece attack line


vs



I spit fire, I'm a dragon with these flames that you get fried in
You're a game designer...that's ironic...cuz u look like someone created you in Skyrim
lol, funny jab
This racist fuck takes Daddy's money n thinks it makes him tough...u can lose that all in a night, coward
Cuz my boys'll put two 'Ks to K...and take all of this white's power
I don't love "all of this white's" ... but tbh I think this is a cool nameplay and angle on the KKK meta .. dig it
Your wife's the kinda girl that ppl say is rly pretty...on the inside
And if they say that she's a princess...they mean Fiona... after midnight
idgi.. ohh okay shrek, assuming she gets mad ugly after midnight lol? if so it's cool
You wanna be Hush sooo bad...but u ain't the main attraction...more like the secretary, bro
It's like this shit is Sonic...Knuckle's only ever the secondary role
sorry man saw too many knuckles/sonic bars over the years, flips okay but this is still dated to me personally
I'm a savage still...put me with the best...I HAVE to kill
This faggot'll think it's all fun n games til that beam on his chest like Jacksonville.
cool attack line, pretty good


Nice battle fella's this was a good read... both were pretty consistent throughout, I've got Knuck edging it with slightly more enjoyable concepts ... thought instagram stories was fire and LOTB, pretty close tho good drop both

Vote - Knuck

[Flow]

Originally Posted by Witty

You are extremely ugly my friend.

I spit fire, I'm a dragon with these flames that you get fried in
You're a game designer...that's ironic...cuz u look like someone created you in Skyrim
set up should have tied his looks as opposed to the weak Skyrim link. Also think added insult would of been oblivion. But yeah this was funny. Nice personal tie in also
This racist fuck takes Daddy's money n thinks it makes him tough...u can lose that all in a night, coward
Cuz my boys'll put two 'Ks to K...and take all of this white's power.
clever idea but set up was way too meaty wasn't a fan of execution
Your wife's the kinda girl that ppl say is rly pretty...on the inside
And if they say that she's a princess...they mean Fiona... after midnight
lmao this is your style bro. Just do ten of these a match an you winning every time. Shit was lolz
You wanna be Hush sooo bad...but u ain't the main attraction...more like the secretary, bro
It's like this shit is Sonic...Knuckle's only ever the secondary role
sonic bars so played and I'd be amazed I'd this isn't on knucklehead. But.. it's fresh to me so gets a pass as I ain't seen it used on him. Bit predictable though
I'm a savage still...put me with the best...I HAVE to kill
This faggot'll think it's all fun n games til that beam on his chest like Jacksonville.
Ok closer

vs

Originally Posted by Knucklehead

Don't talk it if u can't walk it, cus if I check ya & ya fake you'll die
Pull up to ya crib in the forine & wave the heat out the window like grandma baked a pie
like
Put ya head through the coffee table, then stab ya with every shard - this shit is gory
Fam find ya in the living room droolin' w/ spikes in ya head like they turned on rick & morty
clever. Good imagery.
I don't do the fam dissin'. Ya gal dope, so I'mma take her if u test me
In ya own damn bed droppin' bombs w/ a fox under me, & u can't even pull that off on Netcees
ok but really stretched. I'd have liked it more precise etc
Then my homies hittin' next - that bitch a party & shes in her glory, joker
This ain't the gram, but we'll have a ring around her face & keep tappin' til the stories over
fire concept an fire execution
Tell u to leave & ya life spared, but thats a lie cus we known to shoot
You'll step outside just to see some sticks above ya head like the patio got a pergola roof
don't get it sorry family an no time to google

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Solid battle. Witty needs to stick to that style he excels at. The clowning funny shit. The Shrek line was by far funniest bar in the match. Pretty consistent still an the opener was solid. Sounds like I was hating on it I really wasn't man just think a better set up an a tweak an it could of won you the match. Knuckle head doesn't always come with the style I prefer but not going to take it away from him cus I can respect his bars here. He had some nice creativity I was digging and that one bar was total flames.
Had you guys with one miss each but edging to knucks

Vote knuck

[Jabari Black]

I spit fire, I'm a dragon with these flames that you get fried in
You're a game designer...that's ironic...cuz u look like someone created you in Skyrim

(I liked the dragon scheme in the set up. Tied to the punch nicely. The punch was kinda funny but wasn’t crazy funny. Set up def helped this)

This racist fuck takes Daddy's money n thinks it makes him tough...u can lose that all in a night, coward
Cuz my boys'll put two 'Ks to K...and take all of this white's power.

(This was okay. The one letter name plays feel a bit cheap to me because it’s really basic. Execution was good though. Take all this whites power was pretty good way to end the punch)

Your wife's the kinda girl that ppl say is rly pretty...on the inside
And if they say that she's a princess...they mean Fiona... after midnight

(Lmao good angle. This is funny. Pretty on the inside is hilarious. Good bar)

You wanna be Hush sooo bad...but u ain't the main attraction...more like the secretary, bro
It's like this shit is Sonic...Knuckle's only ever the secondary role

(Not bad. Wording was crisp. I liked the angle but the flip felt a bit basic)

I'm a savage still...put me with the best...I HAVE to kill
This faggot'll think it's all fun n games til that beam on his chest like Jacksonville.

(My word. No crazy wp - or no witty flip this is just savage af. This a good closer to me)




Don't talk it if u can't walk it, cus if I check ya & ya fake you'll die
Pull up to ya crib in the forine & wave the heat out the window like grandma baked a pie

(Lol I follow you. The reference was funny. Feels a bit forced though because you wouldn’t refer to it as “waving the beat”. Solid opener though)

Put ya head through the coffee table, then stab ya with every shard - this shit is gory
Fam find ya in the living room droolin' w/ spikes in ya head like they turned on rick & morty

(Good imagery - you really set this up up well. I will say, similar issue as above in that caking shards spikes feels forced. The concept and imagery carried this though. This is pretty good)

I don't do the fam dissin'. Ya gal dope, so I'mma take her if u test me
In ya own damn bed droppin' bombs w/ a fox under me, & u can't even pull that off on Netcees

(Lol this is good. Wording doesn’t work perfect both ways (specifically the dropping bombs part) but this was creative)

Then my homies hittin' next - that bitch a party & shes in her glory, joker
This ain't the gram, but we'll have a ring around her face & keep tappin' til the stories over

(This is creative. The ring around her face and keep tapping is a good flip. The imagery is....weird....lol but this is clever)

Tell u to leave & ya life spared, but thats a lie cus we known to shoot
You'll step outside just to see some sticks above ya head like the patio got a pergola roof

(Had no idea what a pergola roof was before this bar. This was just okay to me. Creative. ‘See sticks above ya head’ just ain’t doing it for me. Might have seen the wrong pic but I wouldn’t call that a stick so felt a tad forced)


Enjoyed both verses a lot. Dope stuff from both but I think Knuck has a few more standout lines and a more consistent verse overall.

Mvgt Knuck