Gateway To Glimmer

Mr. J · 06-12-2018, 02:02 AM

Stereo bump to the modern classics,
Im watchiing ESPN classic with music blasting.
dish out each hit, each twist & fadeaway.
playbacks make the tape, posters of the players play.
what you got to say to J when court in session.
I support the sport in question, I board em obsessive.
support their possessions, some say J assist.
you know how mundane J can get, some say J a kid.
J son kids and make them ride the bench.
go ahead & try for kicks...you gonna admire this.
I lay up where the center of your universe is.
up & under off that glass while you usually brick...
upsetting my finesse so now you going to learn soldier.
dropped the ball on this one, guess you a turnover.
you gotta learn order, ambidextrous with the backspin.
this play I act in got them thinking Im trapped in...
with my perfect traction I make em crossover.
Your shots over...
You gonna D J, then you better go for the record.
get them cuts & do your best for good measure...
the crowds hands start to clap like the ghetto backboard..
how you gonna handle the circle if you dont get to fast forward?

Mediocrity · 06-12-2018, 11:55 PM

This was a fun read and I liked the refreshing angle you came with good looks my man

Edit: rhymes and flow on point as always

2tripple0 · 06-13-2018, 04:56 PM

Yes this was also nice i liked this very much

Exis · 06-16-2018, 07:05 AM

Tell me you ain't a Golden State fan, for the love of God tell me!!?? Lol.

Mr. J · 07-01-2018, 05:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Exis

Tell me you ain't a Golden State fan, for the love of God tell me!!?? Lol.

Huh?

Pharaohs Army · 07-03-2018, 01:54 AM

your last cypher post was leaps and bounds better than this. It was good.

Exis · 07-03-2018, 09:26 AM

Just meant 'cause it was Basketball themed, was hopin' you wasn't a Warriors fan as I support Cleveland & look what happened there lol...shit was like 4 zip!

As for the piece...I liked it, you have a really easy to catch flow when you hit your stride...& you often find this middle ground, where it's not basic...nor complex, it's very relatable to the reader...shit resonates fam.

Stay you bro.

ACTIVATE SELF · 07-06-2018, 03:36 PM

This was clever. All the basketball references and double entandres made this an entertaining read. Your flow was also crisp and your wording was generally well articulated. Thanks for sharing.

06-12-2018, 02:02 AM	#1
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Gateway To Glimmer Stereo bump to the modern classics, Im watchiing ESPN classic with music blasting. dish out each hit, each twist & fadeaway. playbacks make the tape, posters of the players play. what you got to say to J when court in session. I support the sport in question, I board em obsessive. support their possessions, some say J assist. you know how mundane J can get, some say J a kid. J son kids and make them ride the bench. go ahead & try for kicks...you gonna admire this. I lay up where the center of your universe is. up & under off that glass while you usually brick... upsetting my finesse so now you going to learn soldier. dropped the ball on this one, guess you a turnover. you gotta learn order, ambidextrous with the backspin. this play I act in got them thinking Im trapped in... with my perfect traction I make em crossover. Your shots over... You gonna D J, then you better go for the record. get them cuts & do your best for good measure... the crowds hands start to clap like the ghetto backboard.. how you gonna handle the circle if you dont get to fast forward? __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

06-12-2018, 11:55 PM	#2
Mediocrity Brother Join Date: Apr 2018 Posts: 518 Rep Power: 4919695	This was a fun read and I liked the refreshing angle you came with good looks my man Edit: rhymes and flow on point as always __________________ I’m the true King Author, crowned or not what I release is X caliber, it’s bound to rock

06-13-2018, 04:56 PM	#3
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	Yes this was also nice i liked this very much __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

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06-16-2018, 07:05 AM	#4
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Tell me you ain't a Golden State fan, for the love of God tell me!!?? Lol.

07-03-2018, 01:54 AM	#6
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	your last cypher post was leaps and bounds better than this. It was good.

07-03-2018, 09:26 AM	#7
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Just meant 'cause it was Basketball themed, was hopin' you wasn't a Warriors fan as I support Cleveland & look what happened there lol...shit was like 4 zip! As for the piece...I liked it, you have a really easy to catch flow when you hit your stride...& you often find this middle ground, where it's not basic...nor complex, it's very relatable to the reader...shit resonates fam. Stay you bro.