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Quarter O · 05-09-2018, 10:16 PM

Im lineage idiot stay in yo lane cuz my lanes the busiest
Take nine shots like 50 cent the rest will hit many men
wish death upon me and is not gonna be missing everybody
every Bone dismembered like bizzy left
they got this battle booked, I harm a knee viciously
Cuz this hammer hurt like a bitch from Misery
Thats bones in harmony… broken and numb from the pain
ya bitch broken and numb, she like to Bone thugs, I tongue twist the dame
How u look like a overweight jim jones man with biggie’s face
Would he approach me with a buzz, I’ll rob Hamm the piggybank
me and pac trade war stories ,nigga you trade toy stories
ninja turtles with your son on your couch.. enjoy shorty
iLL interrupt y’all while you bonding, grab Donatello, rip the springs from that action figure
Bloody up the spring cleaning, rip the offspring from the father figure
With the mr potato head in pieces on the sofa
Peel out on this couch potato, teeth missing with a chip on his shoulder
This nigga told me all he been doing is playing ps4
stay at home dad, whats worse? That or a deadbeat not sure
Shout to all my boss bitches wifing niggas who
Can’t update 2k rosters with out wi fi signal
Your wife eye on the dude ,stuck on the pipe, gorilla glue on her mouth
Kiss her so your cool grin got niggas pubes on your mouth
i pop big willies ,yo im meek with this Milly
Or I’ll wail on pussies who on they cycle, no cop out, free willy
your bitch motorsport
Soon as she out the car, D, B…Got that ratchet appeal…topped billboard
topped Bill bored.. got the ratchet a pill
Scope’s a pussy like a gynecologist medical bill
Seeing inside this pussy you can see the kid in him
In jump mans in the stomach even Bae be kicking him

Exis · 05-12-2018, 04:46 AM

& bitches say my structure's wack...interestin'.

Incredible · 05-12-2018, 07:38 AM

Did you actually read any of the comments in the battle I just beat you in? This may not be HOF type shit here, but his structure of the verse is right.

Nice way of trying to sneak diss though. Don't get all bent out of shape towards me because your too stupid to realize the difference between battle verse structure and open Mic structure.

Geno · 05-12-2018, 09:58 AM

This was dope imo. Good shit O

Exis · 05-12-2018, 12:51 PM

@Incredible...Well here's the thing man, I'm not a battle rapper nor have I ever claimed to be.I'll be the first to admit I've found the transition difficult...havin' to purely think about disses & punches when 95% of what I drop (unless it's a topical or pic battle) is just brag shit.But I can't begin to iron things out in that department if I'm not battlin' yeah, hence why I signed up.

05-09-2018, 10:16 PM	#1
Quarter O Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 109 Rep Power: 0	battle bars Im lineage idiot stay in yo lane cuz my lanes the busiest Take nine shots like 50 cent the rest will hit many men wish death upon me and is not gonna be missing everybody every Bone dismembered like bizzy left they got this battle booked, I harm a knee viciously Cuz this hammer hurt like a bitch from Misery Thats bones in harmony… broken and numb from the pain ya bitch broken and numb, she like to Bone thugs, I tongue twist the dame How u look like a overweight jim jones man with biggie’s face Would he approach me with a buzz, I’ll rob Hamm the piggybank me and pac trade war stories ,nigga you trade toy stories ninja turtles with your son on your couch.. enjoy shorty iLL interrupt y’all while you bonding, grab Donatello, rip the springs from that action figure Bloody up the spring cleaning, rip the offspring from the father figure With the mr potato head in pieces on the sofa Peel out on this couch potato, teeth missing with a chip on his shoulder This nigga told me all he been doing is playing ps4 stay at home dad, whats worse? That or a deadbeat not sure Shout to all my boss bitches wifing niggas who Can’t update 2k rosters with out wi fi signal Your wife eye on the dude ,stuck on the pipe, gorilla glue on her mouth Kiss her so your cool grin got niggas pubes on your mouth i pop big willies ,yo im meek with this Milly Or I’ll wail on pussies who on they cycle, no cop out, free willy your bitch motorsport Soon as she out the car, D, B…Got that ratchet appeal…topped billboard topped Bill bored.. got the ratchet a pill Scope’s a pussy like a gynecologist medical bill Seeing inside this pussy you can see the kid in him In jump mans in the stomach even Bae be kicking him

05-12-2018, 09:58 AM	#4
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	This was dope imo. Good shit O __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

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05-12-2018, 04:46 AM	#2
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	& bitches say my structure's wack...interestin'.

05-12-2018, 07:38 AM	#3
Incredible Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 1,484 Battle Record: 6-15 Rep Power: 25972895	Did you actually read any of the comments in the battle I just beat you in? This may not be HOF type shit here, but his structure of the verse is right. Nice way of trying to sneak diss though. Don't get all bent out of shape towards me because your too stupid to realize the difference between battle verse structure and open Mic structure.

05-12-2018, 12:51 PM	#5
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	@Incredible...Well here's the thing man, I'm not a battle rapper nor have I ever claimed to be.I'll be the first to admit I've found the transition difficult...havin' to purely think about disses & punches when 95% of what I drop (unless it's a topical or pic battle) is just brag shit.But I can't begin to iron things out in that department if I'm not battlin' yeah, hence why I signed up.