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I cruise the city in a dark knight mood
vigilante, showing no pity shit to ya'll type goons and my manic emotions triples when the dark pass thru camera believed to caught the hawk part that dude jaw stuck, then zip-line, stars struck, across the moon is a symbol like bats - I move to the signal, of bad news and the critical - conditions risen, criminal ambitions where crime pays to the predators and system the crying prey.... for the helpless? my dampened vision to take matters in my own hands and sand my prints then cannibalism, news channels with victims quicker to play God than to sit around channeling scriptures a animal stamina, handling liquor- I'm pumped up like Budden I'm like the key to success, gassed with a drive, push my buttons that's a push to start, I remember groceries, home, mom pushing carts now eating booty like groceries with fly divas with push up bras Sike, I lied, I know your face flipped like a SideKick 5 I let em read my future kids in they face like psychic minds then she kneedeep swolla's and the dark night returns and we repeat Gotham while the bad guys emerge like this DC Comics, but will justice be served fuck PG authors following Justice League terms I'm the dusted jeans, cuffed and re-worked with a sag you can trust my genes, rugged G, dirt as your sack she could prolly thug motivate when she polish what procreates her oval eggs that hatched and gave birth to a basterd that's worth a parolee's fate and was neglected, abandoned through those negative standards potential to be the best villain - Heath Ledger - Batman film and with every villain there's a hero I'm some where in between, tug-o-warrin' good and evil Conscious like You in this dark night, own it "While overlookin' my city, had a Dark Knight moment" - King Los sample Last edited by Quarter O; 05-02-2018 at 04:14 PM. |
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Kinda trash
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Thanks for checking!
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Had its moments man.
I mean some words were used very poorly as far as placemwnt and meaning imo. But it has a certain swag yo it that i dig at times. I think you should try to dumb down the vocab and make it.more simple. Not that vocab is bad. Just that ive learned over time that some of the simplest lines have the most impact. If that makes sense. Good shit man. Thanks
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