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Old 04-05-2018, 01:13 AM   #1
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[CENTER]Was heavy metal until I heard Biggie & Pac-
It really thickened the pot,went from listening to kicking these rocks-
Shifting my spot,from meaningless noise to rap that twisted my knot-
Like I should give it a shot, support music that only had a great few-
Let the hate spew,from parents so it was EM whom I can relate to-
After that I realized I needed to be studying the culture-
Learned record labels can't be trusted, every ones a vulture-
Ready to assault ya, and really split the team in half-
Like the Terror Squad thats why Fat Joe was leaning back-
Jay-Z & beanie Mac, NWA & DMX plus how he fiend for crack-
Mase started preachin' while Diddy couldn't keep it rap-
But they speak the crap, While real rappers have no need for that-
Put real MC's in sleeping bags while new MC's keep it drag!-
Shit just peep the mags, lil pump, lil yahty and lil xan-
forget Big Pun, Big L & Biggie but don't realize they the lil'man!-
It went from real lyrics to shit no one even understands-
It's a gimmick with colored hair, singles in rubber bands-
One hit wonders not expecting shit when the thunder lands!-
Most likely started off with money from ya mother's hands-
Pink & blue dreads? Theres a spaceship to take you the mother land!
In 2 years I bet you fakes wont be able to fuckin' cover bands-
With Ice Cube & Ice Tea, Snoop Dogg is prolly' buggin'out-
New age bitch rappers thinking EM & JA need to hug it out-
Don't know the underground like Ill Bill & Necro being gory as hell-
They never heard of Slick Rick even tho he had a story to tell-
How do these pilled out kids think they really a part of rap-
Any day now KRS-1 is gonna have a fuckin' heart attack-
Went from real G's to dudes wearing dress's, Kanye thanks for that-
Your part of the reason kids nowadays think Drake is gangsta rap!-
What about Mob deep and making Queens a legend-
Illmatic is Stillmatic so NAS still needs a mention-
So whos next jay cole or kendrick lamar-
They need to re read this before setting the bar-
The lesson is hard, Respect ya elders before ya left in the dark-
Every 90's rap I bet I can relate and actually name that-
But I'm blinded by the pink hair and the stupid face tats-
Hip hop is dying & we really need to change that...../CENTER]

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Old 04-06-2018, 04:22 AM   #2
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This shit is dope imo. Just another tribute to hip hop but the twist on it is its always relevant with the bs of todats music and new rap. Makes it fresh as far as concept goes. Content was nice. Really started grabbing me about uarter way into it and gained momentum nicely. Good read man. Good mechanics.

I love how eminem is dead center bottom of a pic like this now. Awesome.
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Old 04-08-2018, 01:19 PM   #3
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Definitely know your artists and how to fluidly connect your inner rhymes and multis. Nice transition with the names and what related to them like the DMX on crack bit. Delivered Nicely flow stayed sharp too. Didn't see the match up but this a solid verse
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Old 04-11-2018, 12:37 PM   #4
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Talk that fuckin' shit... this line was dope. All in all, I agree with your point of view. I share the same perspective as you with this. You know I'm a heavy AOTP fan, the underground scene and the legends of the game. However, I will say like everything, change does happen. Whether we like it or not, or accept it or not. I for one, refuse to accept it. LOL... With that being said, I like music from Phora, Witt Lowery, NF, which are not your Lil Xan, Lil Pump etc. TBH I never heard any songs from them. There are new artists out there that have evolved the craft that are not the bottom of the shit barrel. There is hope!
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Not sure how this was slept on tbh...this was solid man, there's a lot of shit here that will resonate with whomever reads it...I don't listen to much ol' school stuff but obviously respect those artists as they are pioneers of the industry...this was a really nice read bro.

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My dude this shit was dope. You articulated the fuck out of your p.o.v. and I can't say there is much of anything to disagree with. You've always had a very natural/conversational like quality to your verses and this piece is proof positive of that statement. The lyrics were slick, meaningful and the gods honest truth. Whereas the rhymes were just straight buttery as fuck. None of which suprises me knowing who the author is. Illmatic. Keep em coming.
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You gotta try approaching the writing aspect instead of focusing on music text site text verses didnt enjoy how the topics of gangster rap is better than everything else cause its not its just a part of society er sumn and a lot of it isnt good so there....
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