Fake News

Introvert · 05-24-2018, 02:41 PM

The American audience comes to expect
graphic depictions of death
as long as the victim is part of a system
that they have come to reject.
Then conform their identity,
pundits and pageantry,
rally behind all the partisan lies—
Use constant conjecture to lay out and measure
the reason their “enemy” deserved to die.
We show footage of tragedy
mindlessly counting the money we make
then sermonize happily behind a camera
right before taking a commercial break
Companies dictate the words that we say
writing the script from behind the scenes
laughing at people who really believe
this is only a problem since 2016.
Build ads into stories
next to the thoughts and prayers that we offer
selling you products during our broadcast.
Here’s another word from our sponsors.

Mediocrity · 05-24-2018, 09:32 PM

Really digging this yo, flow was decent with good content and vocabulary. Looking forward to reading more from you

Exis · 05-24-2018, 09:40 PM

The American audience comes to expect
graphic depictions of death
as long as the victim is part of a system
that they have come to reject.
Then conform their identity,
pundits and pageantry,
rally behind all the partisan lies—
Use constant conjecture to lay out and measure
the reason their “enemy” deserved to die.

^^Nice...

Good shit fam, liked it all just thought the first half was tight as fuck...

Stay upwards.

Mr. J · 06-04-2018, 03:06 AM

You ever watch that movie Christine?

not the 80s film..

in some sort of twisted world such as mine I see that as this
I see a frustration that burns deep within that needs an outlet
the idea & wording stick to the concept throughout the whole piece

I cant really pick out my favorite line but it picked up halfway through
dope shit man.

Pharaohs Army · 06-08-2018, 07:23 PM

the rhymes and flow of this were pretty good.

looked like the second half was a critique of commercialism but I'm not quite sure what the first half was saying.

05-24-2018, 02:41 PM	#1
Introvert Junior Member Join Date: May 2018 Posts: 9 Rep Power: 106116	Fake News The American audience comes to expect graphic depictions of death as long as the victim is part of a system that they have come to reject. Then conform their identity, pundits and pageantry, rally behind all the partisan lies— Use constant conjecture to lay out and measure the reason their “enemy” deserved to die. We show footage of tragedy mindlessly counting the money we make then sermonize happily behind a camera right before taking a commercial break Companies dictate the words that we say writing the script from behind the scenes laughing at people who really believe this is only a problem since 2016. Build ads into stories next to the thoughts and prayers that we offer selling you products during our broadcast. Here’s another word from our sponsors. __________________ Formerly Indangered/Dreams of Mercy on PR. Listen to my debut album “A Graveyard, A Garden” at https://introvert.bandcamp.com Last edited by Introvert; 05-24-2018 at 02:57 PM.

05-24-2018, 09:32 PM	#2
Mediocrity Brother Join Date: Apr 2018 Posts: 518 Rep Power: 4919695	Really digging this yo, flow was decent with good content and vocabulary. Looking forward to reading more from you __________________ I’m the true King Author, crowned or not what I release is X caliber, it’s bound to rock

06-04-2018, 03:06 AM	#4
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	You ever watch that movie Christine? not the 80s film.. in some sort of twisted world such as mine I see that as this I see a frustration that burns deep within that needs an outlet the idea & wording stick to the concept throughout the whole piece I cant really pick out my favorite line but it picked up halfway through dope shit man. __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

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05-24-2018, 09:40 PM	#3
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	The American audience comes to expect graphic depictions of death as long as the victim is part of a system that they have come to reject. Then conform their identity, pundits and pageantry, rally behind all the partisan lies— Use constant conjecture to lay out and measure the reason their “enemy” deserved to die. ^^Nice... Good shit fam, liked it all just thought the first half was tight as fuck... Stay upwards.

06-08-2018, 07:23 PM	#5
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	the rhymes and flow of this were pretty good. looked like the second half was a critique of commercialism but I'm not quite sure what the first half was saying.