Contender Match: Aero (3-0) vs Barcotic (2-0) - Aero WINS

[Cred]

NBL Season 10
Week 4

Due SUNDAY 12/11/16

Minimum - 12 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE


Don't edit after your opponent has posted.
2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle.
May God have mercy on your souls!

[Barcotic]

dope
16

[Aero]

[Barcotic]

war paint

on my dick is where ur whore stays, actin sloppy
runnin bored game, beatin the box be foreplay.. that's Jumanji
found a weapon im certain to spark, the cal is present
metal that will have u curled in a park, no calisthenics
challenge ended. a fight? stop grinnin like u tuff
ur a Christmas tree; apply roundhouses to ur limbs n light u up
flattened tons w/ heavy beatings, wanna face me b?
just know I'd tap ur mug in any meeting, call it A.D.D
on rb I gave u the business'n u aint risen yet, lad
battle career's at such a standstill, it should be an internet fad
vs ill nik-A in BA? u neeeeeed to improve w/ the pen
his verse made u look like a bird & for no phoenix would do it again
3-0? 2 no shows is why'n only proves the shit is fake
yeah u got here on ur own, now try opponents who participate
PLZ diss my tats! I stay chin up w/ bold grins, fucker ..
ur just looking at relinquishing u could give up ur own skin colour
ur bleeding since u chirped w/ a dude lookin to throw
gone tribal; sleeping in the dirt w/ a few hooks to the nose
homicide detectives after barc, I tell em stay tuned
they searchin for more pieces of ur heart than Zelda playthroughs

20

[Aero]

How to tell Mike is getting murdered in a battle:

He starts posting upset, swaying, has no control over himself
Witty's dad thread, every post lets us know he's that much closer to death
Ghost from a tec, Desperado style, leave holes in this man
I'm bringing a guitar to open mic like musicians at a poetry slam
A pole in each hand (pause) AND liquor? I'm maiming him
I'll get drunk and draw on you, that's a wine and paint event
Even in large cities I'm noticed.. he's frail, no one's flocking to him
Last girl to spot you in a crowd raised the bar off your chest at a popular gym
You scare easily, start internet beef if you dare seeing me
I'll be at your crib from a transaction online that's Air BnB
Bad temper, when I yell hold me back I become a thug
Last time Barc yelled hold me back he gave an unwanted hug
Haven't won a tourney yet bitch, & Schad left you forever upset
Call him the Fresh Prince, gave you a Summer Classic you'll never forget
Growing old is rough, but women say I look great, toned & buff
I hear you're getting good looks too,. cuz your jumper is broke as fuck
Your girl let my sperm crust on her, you ignore, it's a shitty facade
She's trying to explain the foreign film you're hoping she means City of God
You really are odd, sniper on the roof to make you ghost partner
Get your car lit up from a block away that's a remoter starter

[Maximus]

cronus had calisthenics, Christmas tree, relinquishing, tribal and Zelda while Aero had opener, open mic, draw on you, foreign film and remoter starter.. dope ass match, equal on quotes and close to me, this will have to be decided by personal preference, both had some misses but I'll have to say i had more lol moments reading Aero's verse and I'll say he edged this one by a slim margin
v/Aero

[Cred]

1-0 Aero

[Jayson Fresh]

ok battle. I thought Aero won this easily.
better punches, better wording, creative concepts.
Barcotic's verse last week was fiire and perhaps the best verse of the season thus far so I was expecting the same level but I feel he slowed down on this match-- coulda been because he posted early who knows but I do respect it.
This match deserves a round 2.

[Cred]

on my dick is where ur whore stays, actin sloppy
runnin bored game, beatin the box be foreplay.. that's Jumanji
- I liked this. Good.
found a weapon im certain to spark, the cal is present
metal that will have u curled in a park, no calisthenics
- Dope.
challenge ended. a fight? stop grinnin like u tuff
ur a Christmas tree; apply roundhouses to ur limbs n light u up
- pretty cool xmas tree flip/punch
flattened tons w/ heavy beatings, wanna face me b?
just know I'd tap ur mug in any meeting, call it A.D.D
- Didnt like this
on rb I gave u the business'n u aint risen yet, lad
battle career's at such a standstill, it should be an internet fad
- Pretty played concept by now.
vs ill nik-A in BA? u neeeeeed to improve w/ the pen
his verse made u look like a bird & for no phoenix would do it again
- Ehhh
3-0? 2 no shows is why'n only proves the shit is fake
yeah u got here on ur own, now try opponents who participate
- Lol Good
PLZ diss my tats! I stay chin up w/ bold grins, fucker ..
ur just looking at relinquishing u could give up ur own skin colour
- Nah fam
ur bleeding since u chirped w/ a dude lookin to throw
gone tribal; sleeping in the dirt w/ a few hooks to the nose
- liked ur wording on this prior to the edit, nice concept tho.
homicide detectives after barc, I tell em stay tuned
they searchin for more pieces of ur heart than Zelda playthroughs
- Decent closer

vs

How to tell Mike is getting murdered in a battle:

He starts posting upset, swaying, has no control over himself
Witty's dad thread, every post lets us know he's that much closer to death
- Decent opener
Ghost from a tec, Desperado style, leave holes in this man
I'm bringing a guitar to open mic like musicians at a poetry slam
- Dope, so far lotb tbh.
A pole in each hand (pause) AND liquor? I'm maiming him
I'll get drunk and draw on you, that's a wine and paint event
- this was nice
Even in large cities I'm noticed.. he's frail, no one's flocking to him
Last girl to spot you in a crowd raised the bar off your chest at a popular gym
- ehh
You scare easily, start internet beef if you dare seeing me
I'll be at your crib from a transaction online that's Air BnB
- dope again
Bad temper, when I yell hold me back I become a thug
Last time Barc yelled hold me back he gave an unwanted hug
- Nahh
Haven't won a tourney yet bitch, & Schad left you forever upset
Call him the Fresh Prince, gave you a Summer Classic you'll never forget
- lol ok
Growing old is rough, but women say I look great, toned & buff
I hear you're getting good looks too,. cuz your jumper is broke as fuck
- lol decent
Your girl let my sperm crust on her, you ignore, it's a shitty facade
She's trying to explain the foreign film you're hoping she means City of God
- Pretty good
You really are odd, sniper on the roof to make you ghost partner
Get your car lit up from a block away that's a remoter starter
- nah bro

Botw here forsure. I honestly thought both had some shit. Barc came out the gates swingin but his verse simmered down to me at the end. Aero surprisingly had numerous punches I liked. Definitely a nice match but I have Aero taking this though with a bit more of better verse.

Vote - Aero

[Destroyer]

Aero came hard here, I came in to specifically hate vote him and I can't even do it
So props for a solid showing
I lold more than once at some of those lines
Bar was decent but this was on point aero which admittedly I have never really seen before

V/aero

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Barcotic

on my dick is where ur whore stays, actin sloppy
runnin bored game, beatin the box be foreplay.. that's Jumanji
Good concept, but the wording gave little impact
found a weapon im certain to spark, the cal is present
metal that will have u curled in a park, no calisthenics
Lol..dope
challenge ended. a fight? stop grinnin like u tuff
ur a Christmas tree; apply roundhouses to ur limbs n light u up
Again different wording would've brought this concept over
flattened tons w/ heavy beatings, wanna face me b?
just know I'd tap ur mug in any meeting, call it A.D.D
Decent
on rb I gave u the business'n u aint risen yet, lad
battle career's at such a standstill, it should be an internet fad
Basic
vs ill nik-A in BA? u neeeeeed to improve w/ the pen
his verse made u look like a bird & for no phoenix would do it again
Weak
3-0? 2 no shows is why'n only proves the shit is fake
yeah u got here on ur own, now try opponents who participate
Lol..good personal
PLZ diss my tats! I stay chin up w/ bold grins, fucker ..
ur just looking at relinquishing u could give up ur own skin colour
Bad wording cost u again
ur bleeding since u chirped w/ a dude lookin to throw
gone tribal; sleeping in the dirt w/ a few hooks to the nose
Decent
homicide detectives after barc, I tell em stay tuned
they searchin for more pieces of ur heart than Zelda playthroughs
Good closer

VERSUS

Originally Posted by Aero

He starts posting upset, swaying, has no control over himself
Witty's dad thread, every post lets us know he's that much closer to death
Good opener
Ghost from a tec, Desperado style, leave holes in this man
I'm bringing a guitar to open mic like musicians at a poetry slam
Decent
A pole in each hand (pause) AND liquor? I'm maiming him
I'll get drunk and draw on you, that's a wine and paint event
Pretty good
Even in large cities I'm noticed.. he's frail, no one's flocking to him
Last girl to spot you in a crowd raised the bar off your chest at a popular gym
Lol..nice
You scare easily, start internet beef if you dare seeing me
I'll be at your crib from a transaction online that's Air BnB
Very clever
Bad temper, when I yell hold me back I become a thug
Last time Barc yelled hold me back he gave an unwanted hug
Lol..another good one
Haven't won a tourney yet bitch, & Schad left you forever upset
Call him the Fresh Prince, gave you a Summer Classic you'll never forget
Dope personal
Growing old is rough, but women say I look great, toned & buff
I hear you're getting good looks too,. cuz your jumper is broke as fuck
Lol..best bar, so far
Your girl let my sperm crust on her, you ignore, it's a shitty facade
She's trying to explain the foreign film you're hoping she means City of God
Oh SHIT, LOTB
You really are odd, sniper on the roof to make you ghost partner
Get your car lit up from a block away that's a remoter starter
Nice closer

AERO..lil asian fool bodied shit tbh, I've said he'd be beastly if he took shit serious, instead of trolling all the fucking time. But yea, Barc was decent, had great concepts as usual, it's just too many wording issues took away a lot of the impact.

[Legion Of Cocks in my mouth]

Barc - jumanji, Christmas tree, a.d.d, participate, relinquishing, tribal

Aero - opener, open mic, popular gym, air bnb, hold me back, foreign film, closer

V aero