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HE / HIM / FRAC
Join Date: Jan 2013
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![]() NBL Season 9 @Blam Newton @Cred
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The Biggest
Join Date: Jan 2015
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This faggot's got tough skin but doesn't know we see his mom when we be clubbin'.
If I made it rain, that old bitch would be all over the money like Harriet Tubman. When it's time for war, you get as quiet as a fucking mouse. I'll run up in ur crib and have that Lil Uzi blastin' everywhere like it's Hush's house. If I spend a couple of minutes with your wifey, her toes might curl. I'll let off a few shots and have this pussy covered in maggots like the blow fly girl. How the fuck did u get out of jail so fast? You've been locked up a hundred times. You're like Kevin Love in "Meet the Hoopers", just dropping a bunch of dimes. I've been the gun bar king, leave Cred in a box like some new kicks. U'd think I was trying to earn a merit badge when u see the fire come from 2 sticks. |
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The Biggest
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U've been deemed a liar. Glocks wit drums; aim squeeze n fire
U on the corner? get Sprayed on dem Bricks. I'm a graffiti writer Wait for 'em in his car, machete to his throat n drag bck I'll Off the Head in the Whip just like a @Bags mag n ur bitch dnt like fuckin cus I always Kill it wen I give her mine Dog I put that Birds V in the sky like it's about to be winter time U'll get beat wit da Grip while takin Shots. Wat'chu actin hard for? That Metal & Wood touch u at the same time jus like a Dartboard This is premeditated murder. U better duck wen I flame dat gun My thoughts are Off the Wall.. Urs'll have to be scrapped off one |
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Make my day
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This faggot's got tough skin but doesn't know we see his mom when we be clubbin'. If I made it rain, that old bitch would be all over the money like Harriet Tubman. -lite.. Coulda done more with this When it's time for war, you get as quiet as a fucking mouse. I'll run up in ur crib and have that Lil Uzi blastin' everywhere like it's Hush's house. -personal aspect that im missin here but the quiet/hushs house correlation was decent. If I spend a couple of minutes with your wifey, her toes might curl. I'll let off a few shots and have this pussy covered in maggots like the blow fly girl. -every single one of ur bars is "like this like that" comparisons u need to have some different executions so it ain't bland. Wasn't a fan of this either How the fuck did u get out of jail so fast? You've been locked up a hundred times. You're like Kevin Love in "Meet the Hoopers", just dropping a bunch of dimes. -yeah this is cool I've been the gun bar king, leave Cred in a box like some new kicks. U'd think I was trying to earn a merit badge when u see the fire come from 2 sticks. -lite cred U've been deemed a liar. Glocks wit drums; aim squeeze n fire U on the corner? get Sprayed on dem Bricks. I'm a graffiti writer -dope Wait for 'em in his car, machete to his throat n drag bck I'll Off the Head in the Whip just like a @Bags mag -cool n ur bitch dnt like fuckin cus I always Kill it wen I give her mine Dog I put that Birds V in the sky like it's about to be winter time -not a fan U'll get beat wit da Grip while takin Shots. Wat'chu actin hard for? That Metal & Wood touch u at the same time jus like a Dartboard -not a fan of this either This is premeditated murder. U better duck wen I flame dat gun My thoughts are Off the Wall.. Urs'll have to be scrapped off one -cool I got Cred here. Sort of close but Creds quotables were better and he had 1 more as well. v - cred |
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Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!!
Join Date: Sep 2015
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Decnt verse, some nice bars & a couple of duds, yo wording could've done crisper overall, but 'Lil Uzi' & ya closer were the highlights.
versus Good shit, nothing crazy, your closer was the weak link, but the overall verse was solid & consistent from start to finish. CRED took it, Blam just need to work on the execution, get the point of the punch quicker & heavier. |
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Seen current Harriet Tubman wasnt feeling how you displayed the punch as a metaphorical comparison couldve been more creative with it. Hush reference was pretty cool. Blow fly girl was dope but shit the setup no way correlated with the finisher. Kevin Love was cool. Closer was nice. Cred Sorry but the sprayed on dem.bricks graffiti writer reference is played. Bags mag reference dope current punch. Birds V is played also. That metal n wood reference idk i liked it man it was different had a little creativity to it. Closer played too. Damn idk why man but most of Creds references ive seen done before and they got quoted by Hab no hate. Bags mag and dart board was cool tho. Liked the kevin love and closer from blam. V/Blam i felt for what he had slightly more creative overall better attempts. Like i said my dude Cred had some old flips. |
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Creds off the head bar sealed the deal
Vote cred
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The Marathon
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I thought this was a pretty solid battle, I gotta give it to cred tho..
Each verse was on the same level, I jus liked cred's a lil more. |
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Blam: Harriet Tubman, blow fly girl
Cred: opened, bags mag, dartboard Blam came pretty nice here, best Tubman punch I've seen yet. Cred came slightly more consistent so takes it. Vote = Cred |
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This faggot's got tough skin but doesn't know we see his mom when we be clubbin'.
If I made it rain, that old bitch would be all over the money like Harriet Tubman. Nah seen too many of these last week an they were better then thjs When it's time for war, you get as quiet as a fucking mouse. I'll run up in ur crib and have that Lil Uzi blastin' everywhere like it's Hush's house. Lmfao cool If I spend a couple of minutes with your wifey, her toes might curl. I'll let off a few shots and have this pussy covered in maggots like the blow fly girl. Nice How the fuck did u get out of jail so fast? You've been locked up a hundred times. You're like Kevin Love in "Meet the Hoopers", just dropping a bunch of dimes. Didn't see it. Pretty sure I get the jist of this regardless. It's ok I've been the gun bar king, leave Cred in a box like some new kicks. U'd think I was trying to earn a merit badge when u see the fire come from 2 sticks. Ok U've been deemed a liar. Glocks wit drums; aim squeeze n fire U on the corner? get Sprayed on dem Bricks. I'm a graffiti writer Wording off...punch is ok Wait for 'em in his car, machete to his throat n drag bck I'll Off the Head in the Whip just like a @Bags mag Haha nomsayin. This was wild tho. n ur bitch dnt like fuckin cus I always Kill it wen I give her mine Dog I put that Birds V in the sky like it's about to be winter time LMAO fire U'll get beat wit da Grip while takin Shots. Wat'chu actin hard for? That Metal & Wood touch u at the same time jus like a Dartboard Eh ok This is premeditated murder. U better duck wen I flame dat gun My thoughts are Off the Wall.. Urs'll have to be scrapped off one Played Best battle I seen so far as far as competitiveness. Real tuff call for me honestly cuz both had an equal amount of punches landed an missed. I think I'm just gonna edge it to cred purely based on style preference. No loser in this battle tho. V cred |
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Cash __________________ RESPECT THE SHOOTER Cred is online now Add to Cred's Reputation Report Post Reply With Quote Multi-Quote This Message Quick reply to this message Old 04-28-2016, 10:05 AM #3 Blam Newton Member Join Date: Dec 2015 Posts: 44 Battle Record: 6-4 Rep Power: 3367256 Blam Newton has a brilliant futureBlam Newton has a brilliant futureBlam Newton has a brilliant futureBlam Newton has a brilliant futureBlam Newton has a brilliant futureBlam Newton has a brilliant futureBlam Newton has a brilliant futureBlam Newton has a brilliant futureBlam Newton has a brilliant futureBlam Newton has a brilliant futureBlam Newton has a brilliant future Default idk wtf all this is, I'm guessing some sort of intro..? This faggot's got tough skin but doesn't know we see his mom when we be clubbin'. If I made it rain, that old bitch would be all over the money like Harriet Tubman. this was overly used last week, decent flip at best When it's time for war, you get as quiet as a fucking mouse. I'll run up in ur crib and have that Lil Uzi blastin' everywhere like it's Hush's house. lol dope If I spend a couple of minutes with your wifey, her toes might curl. I'll let off a few shots and have this pussy covered in maggots like the blow fly girl. damn alright good shit How the fuck did u get out of jail so fast? You've been locked up a hundred times. You're like Kevin Love in "Meet the Hoopers", just dropping a bunch of dimes. lol ok I've been the gun bar king, leave Cred in a box like some new kicks. U'd think I was trying to earn a merit badge when u see the fire come from 2 sticks. hmm not bad but falls into the decent category for me, no tie ins Vs Default U've been deemed a liar. Glocks wit drums; aim squeeze n fire U on the corner? get Sprayed on dem Bricks. I'm a graffiti writer decent, could of been better with dif wording Wait for 'em in his car, machete to his throat n drag bck I'll Off the Head in the Whip just like a @Bags mag ha dope n ur bitch dnt like fuckin cus I always Kill it wen I give her mine Dog I put that Birds V in the sky like it's about to be winter time bra this was fire! U'll get beat wit da Grip while takin Shots. Wat'chu actin hard for? That Metal & Wood touch u at the same time jus like a Dartboard didnt like how u finished it with dartboard This is premeditated murder. U better duck wen I flame dat gun My thoughts are Off the Wall.. Urs'll have to be scrapped off one seen these too many times, decent flip at best damn this was a really good battle, both had bangers. But I think creds good ones were just that much better than blams. Vote Cred
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neckties
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This faggot's got tough skin but doesn't know we see his mom when we be clubbin'.
If I made it rain, that old bitch would be all over the money like Harriet Tubman. ^cool When it's time for war, you get as quiet as a fucking mouse. I'll run up in ur crib and have that Lil Uzi blastin' everywhere like it's Hush's house. ^yup If I spend a couple of minutes with your wifey, her toes might curl. I'll let off a few shots and have this pussy covered in maggots like the blow fly girl. ^ehh How the fuck did u get out of jail so fast? You've been locked up a hundred times. You're like Kevin Love in "Meet the Hoopers", just dropping a bunch of dimes. ^stretch but ok i guess I've been the gun bar king, leave Cred in a box like some new kicks. U'd think I was trying to earn a merit badge when u see the fire come from 2 sticks. ^dope Vs. U've been deemed a liar. Glocks wit drums; aim squeeze n fire U on the corner? get Sprayed on dem Bricks. I'm a graffiti writer ^eh Wait for 'em in his car, machete to his throat n drag bck I'll Off the Head in the Whip just like a @Bags mag ^nastyy n ur bitch dnt like fuckin cus I always Kill it wen I give her mine Dog I put that Birds V in the sky like it's about to be winter time ^sickk U'll get beat wit da Grip while takin Shots. Wat'chu actin hard for? That Metal & Wood touch u at the same time jus like a Dartboard ^kinda reminded me of ur clipboard punch last week, tho not as good. But still okish This is premeditated murder. U better duck wen I flame dat gun My thoughts are Off the Wall.. Urs'll have to be scrapped off one ^blah ok V/ cred |
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