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Old 04-09-2016, 03:29 AM   #1
Mr. J
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Jaded by mistakes, I look on in amazement.
the hatred inside eventually made its escape
the bruises, the scrapes, & look of the vacant
it took me places I never expected to be taken
breaking each mold...it quickly unfolds.
literally shaken as he gets hit with each blow
his spirit pushes him up if he physically wont
he physically cant, cause in that instant hes broke
the worlds laughingstock as he collapsed in shock
the onlookers dont help they start backing off
he bragged & fought but couldnt handle..nah...
his own friends shook their head, passed in awe
they vanished dawg...a world full of setbacks
remain calm & stay curled with this wet rag
the pain can only get worse hurled into jet lag
your face covers the grounds mural of disrespect...
fact of the matter is your stupidity defeated you
there is no pain that this battle could equal to
reflect on the matter of facts until it eats at you
but you wont grow...no matter the beatings...
the sweetest truth tastes bland on a tasteless tongue
& youre dimwitted to mature or try & change it up
perhaps thats why the rest of the world has hated us...
not us as people, but us as a nation you ungrateful fuck
I dont understand how you could stay stuck in a loop
walk so blindly, listen & not learn something of use
I dont know why I keep talking or keep fucking with you
its true...dont fight with ugly people...they got nothing to lose
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