"What Gets You Revved Up To Write?" #LyricalExercise

[sral]

There was a thread by some guy on how I get revved up to write.

I entered one night and, very precisely, began penning advice generalising everything I did.

The steps I provided detailed the depths of my mind and effort behind such delicate writing.

First I assess who I'm vying and, unless they're inspiring, I'm tempted to try exemplifying their negative sides by shedding a light on their blemishes while, cleverly, I pen me a rhyme lending to my strengths as I type their eventual demise.

Second I try thinking of what I expect that they might bring:

Storytellers that write whimsical efforts invite wins!

A metaphor might trick the voter, if you ended it by flipping some seminal tie-in or setup the right twist.

Then there's your quite typical textcee who finds difficulty setting implied rhythm to their excessive line widths.

They cram plenty of rhymes in, and yet they don't quite fit.

It's remedied by filling each sentence I write with a precession of rhymes intricately set to divide his unexceptional hijinks from the effort they'll find which I'm already providing.

The benefits quite simply are one hell of a high-win percentage, the slight risk is when everyone tries this they'll end their entire schtick, bootlegging on my shit and forget what my style is.

A lesson in rhyme.

Fin.

[MMLP]

good key, pretty much true shit as well lol

[Pharaohs Army]

Originally Posted by sraL

First I assess who I'm vying and, unless they're inspiring, I'm tempted to try exemplifying their negative sides by shedding a light on their blemishes while, cleverly, I
pen me a rhyme lending to my strengths as I type their eventual demise.

lol. Pretty sick there^. Stick around, you've got a lot of potential.

[Mr. J]

this was pretty smooth for the most part...
especially when you get deeper & the flow starts
conducting a little symphony...eh Mozart?
after the second line it starts to go hard...
my issue began when I reached high win...
but I liked it when you continued on with slight risk
entire shtick felt like a forced slant but...
I liked everything before that....
this reminds me of the conversation you had with pharoah
about seeing the rhymes in advertisements on barrels
or chalkboards...I dont remember fully but you get the point
heres an *up* for ya brah..hopefully this shits enjoyed