Contenders Match: Infiltration 3-0 Vs Destroyer 2-1 - INF WINS

Allen Knight · 01-25-2016, 05:36 PM

NBL Season 8
Week 4

Due FRIDAYFriday

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 16 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
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@Infiltration @Destroyer

Destroyer · 01-25-2016, 08:39 PM

sup
12 should suffice

Saint · 01-25-2016, 08:58 PM

yeah 12

Saint · 01-26-2016, 10:08 PM

Edit, no pics?

Allen Knight · 01-29-2016, 05:52 PM

Inf sent 12 @Destroyer

Saint · 01-29-2016, 08:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destroyer

I live king style - bedroom filled w/ strippers and dancers
if this kid ball hard, it's just the early signs of testicular cancer

Quote:

Originally Posted by Allen Knight

..when his gf leaves'em des'll be in need of some answers..
she thought u ball hard.. until she found out it was only bc of testicular cancer.

that's a bad sell..

ur wack ass metastasized a bite from res n allen knight..
if ICU in laser site..
docs'll talk about the beam radiate w/ shots for spreading cancer lines.
cuz AK hired me to kill old man; plant C4 in ur home, fam
this contract have u walkin into hidden charges - similar to ya phone plans..
ya wife's mental sick. swishin jizz for coke & health benefits
for that white she'll strip then have her smile covered; that's a crest dental kit.
age made u smart in the game - hustle go hardd in the paint
u wake up to the 'grind, pops'....ur body alarm to take pills for arthritic pain.
&& this faggots all poised..
to count on Bags when votes r down. its y'all's battle song boysss
cuz when 'u fallen & cant get up' even ur life alert responds in Bagatron voice.
we're cut from a different cloth jude.. ur tomb i'll now unearth it
w/ my fists buryin ya face to leave a lasting impression like the shroud of turin.

Destroyer · 01-29-2016, 11:30 PM

who are you, beyond? another Allen knight alias? oh that's right, nobody cares...

it's no secret I sell phones - I'm nice w/ these hands too - wassup to Lars
u won't be mobile, but u will hear ringing when u get lit up in multiple bars
I fire the shottie & hear u cry for mommy
& call u 'inf in tile' after I lay it on the floor where I hide ur body
des deals in deadly steel that I'm known to deftly wield
when I cut u in half, I'll leave just a 'ration' like chyeahhh after every meal
ur girl? I'm with her every night, she told me u cant get it right...
and the way I smash brother, that bitch be calling me meta knight
u act all breezy and tough, cuz ur just like yeezy & stuff
cept when u talkin 'shit to wiz,' it's about toilet play, u sexual deviant fuck
it's gonna be scary tonight, watch his face ghost with terror and fright
& u seein fileting on the ground, but with fish scales nowhere in sight

Pinot Grij · 01-31-2016, 01:06 PM

Inf.

Opener had a lot going on - I appreciate the commitment to the concept, but it felt like there was too much for it to land solidly
Hidden charges is dope af.
Dental Kit is a bit of a stretch
Grind, Pops is cool wordplay-wise, just not sure how much it hurts as a diss
Bags line is better
Shroud of Turin is good.

Des.
Opener was clean, could've been worded a little better, but still nice.
Inf flip is good.
I don't get the Chyeah reference.
Smash Bro line is dope.
Yeezy line had dope rhyming - punchline was ok, but execution elevated it.
I like the wordplay in the closer.

Ok, so Hidden Charges is the LOTB for me. Inf also had a very impressive opener although I think you overthought it and maybe lacked some oomph because of it. Des was a little more subtle and straightforward which was good, but no real knock-out blows. Plus that Chyeah line - I'm not hip with.

Think I gotta go with Inf on this one but I was definitely feeling some of Des's lines.

CtrlF4 · 01-31-2016, 01:31 PM

Inf had

Phone line (never seen that flip on him)
Arthritic
Bagatron

Vs

Des had

Opener
Smash Bros
Cheayyh (almost)

V/inf...good battle

Schadenfreude · 01-31-2016, 01:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Infiltration

Opener, Hidden charges, pill alarm & life alert

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destroyer

Opener, infantile, ration

Overall INFILTRATION edged, Des killed the first 3 bars, but the last 3 were mediocre.

slech · 01-31-2016, 08:01 PM

that's a bad sell..

ur wack ass metastasized a bite from res n allen knight..
if ICU in laser site..
docs'll talk about the beam radiate w/ shots for spreading cancer lines.
--woo, nice personal--- $5
cuz AK hired me to kill old man; plant C4 in ur home, fam
this contract have u walkin into hidden charges - similar to ya phone plans..
--not bad--- $3
ya wife's mental sick. swishin jizz for coke & health benefits
for that white she'll strip then have her smile covered; that's a crest dental kit.
--not feeling much ---$2
age made u smart in the game - hustle go hardd in the paint
u wake up to the 'grind, pops'....ur body alarm to take pills for arthritic pain.
---mhm decent, wasnt feeling delivery - $2
&& this faggots all poised..
to count on Bags when votes r down. its y'all's battle song boysss
cuz when 'u fallen & cant get up' even ur life alert responds in Bagatron voice.
---lmfao bagatron, all right --- $3
we're cut from a different cloth jude.. ur tomb i'll now unearth it
w/ my fists buryin ya face to leave a lasting impression like the shroud of turim
-ok--$3

inf - 18$
----------------------------------------------------------------------
it's no secret I sell phones - I'm nice w/ these hands too - wassup to Lars
u won't be mobile, but u will hear ringing when u get lit up in multiple bars
---lol ok nice---$4
I fire the shottie & hear u cry for mommy
& call u 'inf in tile' after I lay it on the floor where I hide ur body
---damn, set up could have been better. cool tho--- $3
des deals in deadly steel that I'm known to deftly wield
when I cut u in half, I'll leave just a 'ration' like chyeahhh after every meal
---eh not bad but not the best --$2
ur girl? I'm with her every night, she told me u cant get it right...
and the way I smash brother, that bitch be calling me meta knight
--nah, decent but soft --- $2
u act all breezy and tough, cuz ur just like yeezy & stuff
cept when u talkin 'shit to wiz,' it's about toilet play, u sexual deviant fuck
--nope, dont like this --$1
it's gonna be scary tonight, watch his face ghost with terror and fright
& u seein fileting on the ground, but with fish scales nowhere in sight
--eh not bad -- $2

des - $14

over all giving this to inf, edging this battle with a nicer personal approach. I thought des was cool but had some reaches tbh and some misses that made him fall short.

01-25-2016, 05:36 PM	#1
Allen Knight Foreva us, neva them. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,176 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899401	Contenders Match: Infiltration 3-0 Vs Destroyer 2-1 - INF WINS NBL Season 8 Week 4 Due FRIDAYFriday Minimum - 10 lines Max - 16 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @Infiltration @Destroyer __________________ C.O.B The Bad Guys. Last edited by Allen Knight; 01-25-2016 at 05:39 PM.

01-29-2016, 05:52 PM	#5
Allen Knight Foreva us, neva them. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,176 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899401	Inf sent 12 @Destroyer __________________ C.O.B The Bad Guys.

01-31-2016, 01:06 PM	#8
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Inf. Opener had a lot going on - I appreciate the commitment to the concept, but it felt like there was too much for it to land solidly Hidden charges is dope af. Dental Kit is a bit of a stretch Grind, Pops is cool wordplay-wise, just not sure how much it hurts as a diss Bags line is better Shroud of Turin is good. Des. Opener was clean, could've been worded a little better, but still nice. Inf flip is good. I don't get the Chyeah reference. Smash Bro line is dope. Yeezy line had dope rhyming - punchline was ok, but execution elevated it. I like the wordplay in the closer. Ok, so Hidden Charges is the LOTB for me. Inf also had a very impressive opener although I think you overthought it and maybe lacked some oomph because of it. Des was a little more subtle and straightforward which was good, but no real knock-out blows. Plus that Chyeah line - I'm not hip with. Think I gotta go with Inf on this one but I was definitely feeling some of Des's lines. __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

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01-25-2016, 08:58 PM	#3
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,251 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535868	yeah 12

01-26-2016, 10:08 PM	#4
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,251 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535868	Edit, no pics?

01-31-2016, 01:31 PM	#9
CtrlF4 ....Hakuna Matata.... Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 770 Battle Record: 11-11 Rep Power: 3351062	Inf had Phone line (never seen that flip on him) Arthritic Bagatron Vs Des had Opener Smash Bros Cheayyh (almost) V/inf...good battle

01-31-2016, 08:01 PM	#11
slech > Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 150 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 3807832	that's a bad sell.. ur wack ass metastasized a bite from res n allen knight.. if ICU in laser site.. docs'll talk about the beam radiate w/ shots for spreading cancer lines. --woo, nice personal--- $5 cuz AK hired me to kill old man; plant C4 in ur home, fam this contract have u walkin into hidden charges - similar to ya phone plans.. --not bad--- $3 ya wife's mental sick. swishin jizz for coke & health benefits for that white she'll strip then have her smile covered; that's a crest dental kit. --not feeling much ---$2 age made u smart in the game - hustle go hardd in the paint u wake up to the 'grind, pops'....ur body alarm to take pills for arthritic pain. ---mhm decent, wasnt feeling delivery - $2 && this faggots all poised.. to count on Bags when votes r down. its y'all's battle song boysss cuz when 'u fallen & cant get up' even ur life alert responds in Bagatron voice. ---lmfao bagatron, all right --- $3 we're cut from a different cloth jude.. ur tomb i'll now unearth it w/ my fists buryin ya face to leave a lasting impression like the shroud of turim -ok--$3 inf - 18$ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- it's no secret I sell phones - I'm nice w/ these hands too - wassup to Lars u won't be mobile, but u will hear ringing when u get lit up in multiple bars ---lol ok nice---$4 I fire the shottie & hear u cry for mommy & call u 'inf in tile' after I lay it on the floor where I hide ur body ---damn, set up could have been better. cool tho--- $3 des deals in deadly steel that I'm known to deftly wield when I cut u in half, I'll leave just a 'ration' like chyeahhh after every meal ---eh not bad but not the best --$2 ur girl? I'm with her every night, she told me u cant get it right... and the way I smash brother, that bitch be calling me meta knight --nah, decent but soft --- $2 u act all breezy and tough, cuz ur just like yeezy & stuff cept when u talkin 'shit to wiz,' it's about toilet play, u sexual deviant fuck --nope, dont like this --$1 it's gonna be scary tonight, watch his face ghost with terror and fright & u seein fileting on the ground, but with fish scales nowhere in sight --eh not bad -- $2 des - $14 over all giving this to inf, edging this battle with a nicer personal approach. I thought des was cool but had some reaches tbh and some misses that made him fall short.