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Foreva us, neva them.
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![]() NBL Season 8 Week 3 Due FRIDAYFriday Minimum - 10 lines Max - 16 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @Bash @Destroyer dock -2 votes for not voting
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Barrin' Out
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Hi Des, hopefully 10 is good
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Bags will be avenged
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10 is fine
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Foreva us, neva them.
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bash sent 10 @Destroyer
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Bags will be avenged
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I'm on a winner's quest, & I don't give a fuck if this kid is next
not only do u not have a prayer, they've yet to discover the scrolls of your religious texts u talk tough and shit, but des has never heard of ya the verdict? ur in for Avery bad time like this was making a murderer I'll keep u dripping with fuel, and leave u riddled with wounds I'll hold Al-Bashir like I was the ICC, while singing 'stuck in the middle with u' I live king style - bedroom filled w/ strippers and dancers if this kid ball hard, it's just the early signs of testicular cancer this lame's goofy... he acts like he's gonna shoot me then shows up w/no mags like finnick in the third hunger games movie |
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Barrin' Out
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his chick said his sex soft..she ready to leave this dude
its ironic she calls destroyer pussy..when thats something he'll never do u've been here a decade..n we just hope that u stop, queer i dont need to embarrass u..ur in ur 40s still pushin for top tier all ur known for is swayin..try me n i'll leave ya face purple u act like a bigger bitch than deandre jordans state farm commercial this lead'll have u screamin like a pop star, mister when these arms raise u'll get to steppin like Michael Jackson in thriller ya bitch can get fucked all over the house..she tired of ya gimmicks, sir i'll slam that pussy on the table..now thats a bubba ray and Devon finisher
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Des
Opener was a bit of a stretch Been waiting for a dope Making a Murderer flip and you delivered. Hot fire. Next is ehh Testicular cancer is lmao Never seen hunger games Bash Opener is a bit awkward of a flip Top tier shit is played DJ line was ok Thriller line is cool but not that ether - nice flip tho Finisher is decent, but it's the second "pussy" flip of the verse, so loses points Bash was off a little bit. Des had a couple snoozers, but the two LOTB came from him - Making a Murderer and testicular cancer. Flames. Vote -- Destroyer
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Des, we both had making a murderer lines but with totally different takes, I liked urs, also the testicular cancer was fire, rest was ok just hated ur opener
Bash, besides the deandre Jordan which was simple but effective I didn't like anything else honestly I got Des
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Avery line was cool, testicle shit was for humor
vs Deandre jordan This battle was lighttt. Expected better from both. Des had two ok punches. Bash came pretty unoriginal here. Thriller shit played n ur closer. Vote destroyer |
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HE / HIM / FRAC
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Des
Opener was light but nice Avery/A very doesn't work for me Cancer was okay Al Bashir was a cool idea but kind of all over the place Not really feeling the closer Bash First 2 are misses, been done on him before Jordan was funny Thriller was okay but light Closer was creative but it's still a pussy flip Both were a little off but des was sliiiiightly more effective V/des in a close one |
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NJ Devil
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Yeah I got Des here that opener was dope to me. Nothing else really jumped At me but I may have missed a few references
Bash struggled with wording which I remember him being good At in the Past. Concepts were eh but execution was really iffy |
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Have des here.. making a murderer, ball hard (seen it tho) took it..
rest did the job.. Bash, wording tripped u up here. deandre and closer were ehh passable/ok. didnt like the thriller reference.. felt like u didnt take time to fully execute... vote des |
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avery
ball hard closer vs deandre des, solid verse not many complaints here, cept opener seemed fillerish, but even when ur lines dont hit for me i can appreciate the smooth flow u have. bash, ur kinda suffered from either lines being done on Des before, and just not very harsh wording. Not too bad though good battle all v/Des |
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