Plot Vs Pinot Grij - PINOT WINS

Allen Knight · 01-05-2016, 03:16 PM

NBL Season 8
Week 1

Due FRIDAYFriday

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 16 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
You must check in
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls

@Plot @Pinot Grij

Pinot Grij · 01-05-2016, 05:41 PM

check

Plot · 01-07-2016, 12:01 AM

10

Pinot Grij · 01-07-2016, 06:53 PM

You talk guns but won’t do shit when I come with the pump, liar
I’m Michael Bay, you’ll see this Plot get lost in all of the gunfire
Oh, you mad? Too bad I don’t give a fuck how you feeling, fam
If you ain’t cool, I’ll spin these blades over your head like a ceiling fan
With triggers, he scared to squeeze like this bitch was huggin a distant cousin
This asshole's quiet on the can, like he’s nervous about taking a shit in public
You ain’t a real man – that’s an Avatar. I swear I hate bitches like you
When my Force Awakens it’ll smash your box office, plus the one you live inside too
Even if you got eleven homeys, it’s like New Year’s when I body your soldiers
My noisemaker blows, then it strikes twelve and your whole party is over

Plot · 01-09-2016, 02:57 AM

ext

Plot · 01-09-2016, 09:37 PM

You better find a religion man, up against Plot you'll get totally ruined,
Put the biscuit in ya mouth and bang, be one with god, like the holy communion.
So quit the text fights, think I'll be nice? like we're friends?
Heres a story for ya: Topical faggot tried to battle and got handled, the end.
Destroy you for kicks, don't belong in this league your just annoying with that shit,
Coz if Pinot key okay battle bars, he'll be exposed for the lying toy that he is.
And this pathetic cunts still a virgin? its sad how this dudes lifes so tragic,
If you ever saw Pin sticking it n a doll, he was just up to some voodoo magic.
Your styles that doo doo its drastic, but still this geek wants to spar?
Bury the knife deep in ya guts & bleah doubt like the sheep that you are.

Bash · 01-09-2016, 11:48 PM

Michael Bay
Shit in public

Vs

Voo doo magic

V-PG. Better concepts and the ties ins were really nice. Execution was better as well. I really was diggin the voo doo line from Plot. He needs more lines like that.

Schadenfreude · 01-10-2016, 02:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pinot Grij

Opener, Quiet can, box office

Although your concepts were original, they weren't quite harsh enough.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Plot

Opener, Story

Same problem yo opponent has, great concept mediocre wording & execution.

Decent battle, both had some pretty good ideas, but both dropped the dagger at the moment to kill. PINOT GRIJ edges, because he just needs to be harsher, while Plot has more awkward wording issues.

Denton · 01-10-2016, 06:15 PM

You talk guns but won’t do shit when I come with the pump, liar
I’m Michael Bay, you’ll see this Plot get lost in all of the gunfire

You ain’t a real man – that’s an Avatar. I swear I hate bitches like you
When my Force Awakens it’ll smash your box office, plus the one you live inside too
Even if you got eleven homeys, it’s like New Year’s when I body your soldiers
My noisemaker blows, then it strikes twelve and your whole party is over

bay line is great

vs

You better find a religion man, up against Plot you'll get totally ruined,
Put the biscuit in ya mouth and bang, be one with god, like the holy communion.

And this pathetic cunts still a virgin? its sad how this dudes lifes so tragic,
.If you ever saw Pin sticking it n a doll, he was just up to some voodoo magic.

except the last is a bit wordy but concept is good

PG was just more consistent, his bay line was nice.

vote-pg

Destroyer · 01-11-2016, 12:52 PM

I got Pinot here
opener and closer were dope
plot opener was good, Pinot key okay could have been something...

v/pinot

murda sho · 01-11-2016, 03:10 PM

Plot

Destroy you for kicks, don't belong in this league your just annoying with that shit,
Coz if Pinot key okay battle bars, he'll be exposed for the lying toy that he is.
And this pathetic cunts still a virgin? its sad how this dudes lifes so tragic,
If you ever saw Pin sticking it n a doll, he was just up to some voodoo magic.

Pinot

You talk guns but won’t do shit when I come with the pump, liar
I’m Michael Bay, you’ll see this Plot get lost in all of the gunfire

With triggers, he scared to squeeze like this bitch was huggin a distant cousin
This asshole's quiet on the can, like he’s nervous about taking a shit in public
You ain’t a real man – that’s an Avatar. I swear I hate bitches like you
When my Force Awakens it’ll smash your box office, plus the one you live inside too
Even if you got eleven homeys, it’s like New Year’s when I body your soldiers
My noisemaker blows, then it strikes twelve and your whole party is over

v/ Pinot... Pinot came pretty decent here he did enough to win, Plot isn't wack but just got outbarred here I can see him elevate more with more battles.. good shit Pinot ima see you soon and take your fuckin head off

Saint · 01-11-2016, 05:52 PM

Pinot got the edge.

A few more solid lines, but plot I thought had lotb w/ that voodoo shit...
Opener mice flip, seen concept tho..
not bad, somewhat close match...
altho some bland lines too

but pinot had more, opener, smash box, closer all ok..
Vote pinot

Cred · 01-11-2016, 06:04 PM

Michael bay, quiet on the can, strikes 12

Vs

Voodoo

Decent battle here. I fucked wit pinots versse here. I never read ur shit before but i fucks wit it. Clear winner imo here.

Vote - pinot

El Muffin · 01-11-2016, 06:11 PM

Micheal bay was cool
Next 4 are played. The latter one was flipped OK tho
Force was OK
Closer I liked .

Plot

Open is cool
Pinnochio reach
Topical OK
Voodoo nice
Closer ass

Close battle . I think pino misses were less Agregious Celt that played ceiling fan shit

V/pinoj

ill nik-A · 01-11-2016, 06:38 PM

Pinot was pretty solid minus ender

Plot voodo was good but need to see more consistency

V PG

slech · 01-11-2016, 07:47 PM

You better find a religion man, up against Plot you'll get totally ruined,
Put the biscuit in ya mouth and bang, be one with god, like the holy communion.
-cool flip--
So quit the text fights, think I'll be nice? like we're friends?
Heres a story for ya: Topical faggot tried to battle and got handled, the end.
-didnt like this--
Destroy you for kicks, don't belong in this league your just annoying with that shit,
Coz if Pinot key okay battle bars, he'll be exposed for the lying toy that he is.
-meh---
And this pathetic cunts still a virgin? its sad how this dudes lifes so tragic,
If you ever saw Pin sticking it n a doll, he was just up to some voodoo magic.
-ok cool-
Your styles that doo doo its drastic, but still this geek wants to spar?
Bury the knife deep in ya guts & bleah doubt like the sheep that you are.
-nope

vs

You talk guns but won’t do shit when I come with the pump, liar
I’m Michael Bay, you’ll see this Plot get lost in all of the gunfire
-cool--
Oh, you mad? Too bad I don’t give a fuck how you feeling, fam
If you ain’t cool, I’ll spin these blades over your head like a ceiling fan
-decent flip--
With triggers, he scared to squeeze like this bitch was huggin a distant cousin
This asshole's quiet on the can, like he’s nervous about taking a shit in public
-lol-
You ain’t a real man – that’s an Avatar. I swear I hate bitches like you
When my Force Awakens it’ll smash your box office, plus the one you live inside too
-alright-
Even if you got eleven homeys, it’s like New Year’s when I body your soldiers
My noisemaker blows, then it strikes twelve and your whole party is over
-not bad-

One was a more complex and creative bars. The other wasn't bad but a couple of the concepts are kinda played. mvgt pin

01-05-2016, 03:16 PM	#1
Allen Knight Foreva us, neva them. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,176 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899401	Plot Vs Pinot Grij - PINOT WINS NBL Season 8 Week 1 Due FRIDAYFriday Minimum - 10 lines Max - 16 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @Plot @Pinot Grij __________________ C.O.B The Bad Guys.

01-05-2016, 05:41 PM	#2
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	check __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

01-07-2016, 06:53 PM	#4
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	You talk guns but won’t do shit when I come with the pump, liar I’m Michael Bay, you’ll see this Plot get lost in all of the gunfire Oh, you mad? Too bad I don’t give a fuck how you feeling, fam If you ain’t cool, I’ll spin these blades over your head like a ceiling fan With triggers, he scared to squeeze like this bitch was huggin a distant cousin This asshole's quiet on the can, like he’s nervous about taking a shit in public You ain’t a real man – that’s an Avatar. I swear I hate bitches like you When my Force Awakens it’ll smash your box office, plus the one you live inside too Even if you got eleven homeys, it’s like New Year’s when I body your soldiers My noisemaker blows, then it strikes twelve and your whole party is over __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M. Last edited by Pinot Grij; 01-07-2016 at 06:59 PM.

01-09-2016, 11:48 PM	#7
Bash Barrin' Out Join Date: Nov 2014 Posts: 577 Battle Record: 16-15 Champed - Fight Night 5 Rep Power: 13649171	Michael Bay Shit in public Vs Voo doo magic V-PG. Better concepts and the ties ins were really nice. Execution was better as well. I really was diggin the voo doo line from Plot. He needs more lines like that. __________________ "You thinkin what im thinkin?" - Danson "Aim for the bushes?" -Highsmith

01-11-2016, 03:10 PM	#11
murda sho Shonami Surf Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,069 Battle Record: 24-16 Champed - Bad Blood II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV - 1-2 Punch League - Shadow Boxing Rep Power: 42758482	Plot Destroy you for kicks, don't belong in this league your just annoying with that shit, Coz if Pinot key okay battle bars, he'll be exposed for the lying toy that he is. And this pathetic cunts still a virgin? its sad how this dudes lifes so tragic, If you ever saw Pin sticking it n a doll, he was just up to some voodoo magic. Pinot You talk guns but won’t do shit when I come with the pump, liar I’m Michael Bay, you’ll see this Plot get lost in all of the gunfire With triggers, he scared to squeeze like this bitch was huggin a distant cousin This asshole's quiet on the can, like he’s nervous about taking a shit in public You ain’t a real man – that’s an Avatar. I swear I hate bitches like you When my Force Awakens it’ll smash your box office, plus the one you live inside too Even if you got eleven homeys, it’s like New Year’s when I body your soldiers My noisemaker blows, then it strikes twelve and your whole party is over v/ Pinot... Pinot came pretty decent here he did enough to win, Plot isn't wack but just got outbarred here I can see him elevate more with more battles.. good shit Pinot ima see you soon and take your fuckin head off __________________ "aim impeccable if I miss somebody I aint seen em in a while"

01-07-2016, 12:01 AM	#3
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,374 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309744	10

01-09-2016, 02:57 AM	#5
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,374 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309744	ext

01-09-2016, 09:37 PM	#6
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,374 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309744	You better find a religion man, up against Plot you'll get totally ruined, Put the biscuit in ya mouth and bang, be one with god, like the holy communion. So quit the text fights, think I'll be nice? like we're friends? Heres a story for ya: Topical faggot tried to battle and got handled, the end. Destroy you for kicks, don't belong in this league your just annoying with that shit, Coz if Pinot key okay battle bars, he'll be exposed for the lying toy that he is. And this pathetic cunts still a virgin? its sad how this dudes lifes so tragic, If you ever saw Pin sticking it n a doll, he was just up to some voodoo magic. Your styles that doo doo its drastic, but still this geek wants to spar? Bury the knife deep in ya guts & bleah doubt like the sheep that you are.

01-10-2016, 06:15 PM	#9
Denton Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2015 Posts: 25 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 0	You talk guns but won’t do shit when I come with the pump, liar I’m Michael Bay, you’ll see this Plot get lost in all of the gunfire You ain’t a real man – that’s an Avatar. I swear I hate bitches like you When my Force Awakens it’ll smash your box office, plus the one you live inside too Even if you got eleven homeys, it’s like New Year’s when I body your soldiers My noisemaker blows, then it strikes twelve and your whole party is over bay line is great vs You better find a religion man, up against Plot you'll get totally ruined, Put the biscuit in ya mouth and bang, be one with god, like the holy communion. And this pathetic cunts still a virgin? its sad how this dudes lifes so tragic, .If you ever saw Pin sticking it n a doll, he was just up to some voodoo magic. except the last is a bit wordy but concept is good PG was just more consistent, his bay line was nice. vote-pg

01-11-2016, 05:52 PM	#12
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,251 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535868	Pinot got the edge. A few more solid lines, but plot I thought had lotb w/ that voodoo shit... Opener mice flip, seen concept tho.. not bad, somewhat close match... altho some bland lines too but pinot had more, opener, smash box, closer all ok.. Vote pinot

01-11-2016, 06:04 PM	#13
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899383	Michael bay, quiet on the can, strikes 12 Vs Voodoo Decent battle here. I fucked wit pinots versse here. I never read ur shit before but i fucks wit it. Clear winner imo here. Vote - pinot

01-11-2016, 06:11 PM	#14
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	Micheal bay was cool Next 4 are played. The latter one was flipped OK tho Force was OK Closer I liked . Plot Open is cool Pinnochio reach Topical OK Voodoo nice Closer ass Close battle . I think pino misses were less Agregious Celt that played ceiling fan shit V/pinoj __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

01-11-2016, 06:38 PM	#15
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,420 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164519	Pinot was pretty solid minus ender Plot voodo was good but need to see more consistency V PG __________________ Grumpy old man.

01-11-2016, 07:47 PM	#16
slech > Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 150 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 3807832	You better find a religion man, up against Plot you'll get totally ruined, Put the biscuit in ya mouth and bang, be one with god, like the holy communion. -cool flip-- So quit the text fights, think I'll be nice? like we're friends? Heres a story for ya: Topical faggot tried to battle and got handled, the end. -didnt like this-- Destroy you for kicks, don't belong in this league your just annoying with that shit, Coz if Pinot key okay battle bars, he'll be exposed for the lying toy that he is. -meh--- And this pathetic cunts still a virgin? its sad how this dudes lifes so tragic, If you ever saw Pin sticking it n a doll, he was just up to some voodoo magic. -ok cool- Your styles that doo doo its drastic, but still this geek wants to spar? Bury the knife deep in ya guts & bleah doubt like the sheep that you are. -nope vs You talk guns but won’t do shit when I come with the pump, liar I’m Michael Bay, you’ll see this Plot get lost in all of the gunfire -cool-- Oh, you mad? Too bad I don’t give a fuck how you feeling, fam If you ain’t cool, I’ll spin these blades over your head like a ceiling fan -decent flip-- With triggers, he scared to squeeze like this bitch was huggin a distant cousin This asshole's quiet on the can, like he’s nervous about taking a shit in public -lol- You ain’t a real man – that’s an Avatar. I swear I hate bitches like you When my Force Awakens it’ll smash your box office, plus the one you live inside too -alright- Even if you got eleven homeys, it’s like New Year’s when I body your soldiers My noisemaker blows, then it strikes twelve and your whole party is over -not bad- One was a more complex and creative bars. The other wasn't bad but a couple of the concepts are kinda played. mvgt pin

Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Email this Page
Display Modes
Linear Mode Switch to Hybrid Mode Switch to Threaded Mode