Tic Tac 4-4 vs Fraze 6-2 (Tic wins)

[Hush]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, July 2nd 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 12, maximum of 18
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Tic @fraze

[Tic]

If only the win by 2 votes was real.

Sup...

[fraze]

Check. Looks like you get a rematch.

[Tic]

I got 12 @fraze

[fraze]

Cool. I've been crazy busy this week. Might need ext, but I'll see what I can do.

[Tic]

Cool.

[fraze]

Rushing but at least I showed.


Tics into menagery... but he aint aviary proper dude,
He'll get with a bird...but only if you parrot with a cockatoo
Might be news to RB voters, but truth is tic is past his prime,
If you're thinking this Bruhs ill… you're on the wrong side of borderline….
you're screwed up... maybe leanin toward the wrong tac
But you'll never mask error after I lash and leave your eye black
im a caus tic pain...meltin bare flesh to the membrane, its game over,
your pen game is draggin’.... but im a Charr his heart with the flamethrower
You got Spaz tic in your loss last week.
You're near rot tic and it's showing.
I killed you way back in week nine.... and ever since then you've been decomposing
Bringing NCGs the shame of letting RB fags compete too
Tic you're straight up ass... I bet that nigga Dre would eat you...

[Tic]

Originally Posted by fraze

Im here to write, and find out from other writers what they think does and doesn't work.

Originally Posted by fraze

I would also like to request that @Dre not vote on my battles. No offense, and it has nothing to do with voting against me but I don't think you know enough about text battling to provide a meaningful critique.

Keep cryin, Baby. You can’t handle the truth, that’s an honest fact
How can you look to others for Feed when you’ve never left the amniotic sac
For real…faggot momma’s boy, anyone saying you’re a man’s a liar
Ya lines are so Infantile, every passing eye gets a sample of formula & pacifier
I see your personal struggles. Used to be cool now look what you have become
You have so many Character Issues, Diode should change your name to Latin1
I’m tired of writing. Hoped for a no show or something, Fraze
So I prayed to God Andesite crashes…right into your fuckin face
My relationship w/ ya girl is Growing, she’s finally startin to live right
I’ve had her Back Against the Wall so many times, you’d think I was chartin our kids height

Originally Posted by fraze

the text john mccain. claim maverick but to real niggas you’re not a rival,
this mark / cuban hasn’t been relevant since his team championed the NBA finals

You used to be good, but ya played style last week got you spanked, kapeesh?
Consider going back to Default. Cuz that was a collapse that could rival the banks in Greece

[Bash]

Char his heart

Vs

Opener, Latin 1, andesite, kids height

V/Tac. Some those wps in Frazes drop were a little bit of a stretch. All n all Tac takes this comfortably.

[Plot]

Fraze came with straight fire imo.
This is the shit I like to read in text. It's actually a refreshing verse.
Straight wordplay.
Sure we've seen it al before but its how it's presented.
That first line I read 3 times to get al the puns, great.
Bras ill is kinda played like 04ish but still seemed worded well,
it came off nicely from opener and if anything is my only gripe.

Tics closer was pretty good, but I have issues with most of his lines.
Being that I have to google the references, and Im not gonna, Im just
gonna take his owrd for it that andecite is a word, didnt get the latin1 thing.

I think Fraze should get this.

[Ace]

char

vs

first four lines and kids height

Fraze had good concepts but the brazil and mascara wordplays were stretchin it.. Tic's height line was the best i've seen in a while.. overall a better verse.. good stuff fellas


v Tic Tac

[Bust]

Fraze

Opener is creative af just felt like u overdid it
Don't nobody say this bruh's in real life, cool attempt on brazil tho
Mascara Eye lash was ok haven't been around long enuff to say eyelash is played but mascara def is..the way u tied it in tho I kinda liked it
Charr was nice
Neurotic works depending on pronunciation, ur wp'n the fuck out these lines lol
Closer made me laugh..

Tic

Opener was a nice personal
Didn't really like infantile that much
Had to google Latin1, turned out bar was pretty cool

Andesite is a cool wp just felt it coulda been referenced better, coulda been fire
Kids height was funny as hell,
Closer was ooook

Well, I thought graze came ok a lil too much wp per bar but still a decent read, n tic also had a pretty good verse n I just felt he was more personal n had better balance overall.. Again depending on preference is hue it goes down n got tic edging it..cook read guys

[Destroyer]

caus tic

vs

opener, Latin1, chart kids height (lotb)

I think tic got this pretty easily. I see what fraze was trying to do but that over kill on wordplay when most of them are probably played anyway just falls flat to me. I rather see a bar crafted to highlight one solid example of wordplay rather than fitting in as many into one line as you can.

v/tic

[ill nik-A]

Tic had the better verse IMO, I liked that charting our kids height was dope to me and lotb, frazes charr line was ok just not as hard hitting this week

Vote tac

[IAmRhetoric]

Tics into menagery... but he aint aviary proper dude,
He'll get with a bird...but only if you parrot with a cockatoo
you reached 2 hard and it fucked up the bar

Might be news to RB voters, but truth is tic is past his prime,
If you're thinking this Bruhs ill… you're on the wrong side of borderline….
okay

you're screwed up... maybe leanin toward the wrong tac
But you'll never mask error after I lash and leave your eye black
okay

im a caus tic pain...meltin bare flesh to the membrane, its game over,
your pen game is draggin’.... but im a Charr his heart with the flamethrower
okay i feel you

You got Spaz tic in your loss last week.
You're near rot tic and it's showing.
I killed you way back in week nine.... and ever since then you've been decomposing
good

Bringing NCGs the shame of letting RB fags compete too
Tic you're straight up ass... I bet that nigga Dre would eat you...
lmao

tic
Keep cryin, Baby. You can’t handle the truth, that’s an honest fact
How can you look to others for Feed when you’ve never left the amniotic sac
okay good opener

For real…faggot momma’s boy, anyone saying you’re a man’s a liar
Ya lines are so Infantile, every passing eye gets a sample of formula & pacifier
meh

I see your personal struggles. Used to be cool now look what you have become
You have so many Character Issues, Diode should change your name to Latin1
bars

I’m tired of writing. Hoped for a no show or something, Fraze
So I prayed to God Andesite crashes…right into your fuckin face
good

My relationship w/ ya girl is Growing, she’s finally startin to live right
I’ve had her Back Against the Wall so many times, you’d think I was chartin our kids height
pretty meh bro

v/ Fraze
Fraze came w/ some harder hitting bars and took the battle for me

[Hush]

Fraze was off here
He is wayyy better than this verse showed
Still had some good lines

Tic had a pretty solid verse here and got this