ribbit 0-0 vs Chyeahhh Guevara 0-4 - CHYEAHHH WINS

[Hush]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, July 2nd 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

@ribbit @Alpo the Alpha

[ribbit]

Here

[Chyeahhh!!!]

there

[Chyeahhh!!!]

pass gas on you, shoot at this square, off the glass on you
to be blunt, I'd have passed on you but Sharp said make ash of you
so much class on you, yah dead homie! bout to pour a flask on you
this here's a Don key, can't you tell....I'm about to make an ass of you
you're up against a Frogman that will Seal the deal with ease, coward
I'll mistake your girl for a towel head after she leaves the shower
I'm nice, I'll shoot at you and thank you for letting me, kind sir
show up with cans in hand, and trust the bud you smoke don't make you weiser
I've got the raddist of jargons, blam at your squadron
and take rib out quicker than Adam in the Garden
these days I'm striking with more precision
you bisexual
meaning you were butthurt before and after the supreme courts decision

[ribbit]

Fuckin dunce
Im covering all the bases even when I bunt get me chump
Cuz chyeahh getting the win this week a myth
He getting fucked bro and any contenders I'm leaving stitched
you know how I know u fake
Cuz I smoke and blaze you just a shimmer compared to my gloat and fame
So keep rising
Cuz after this battle I'll have u considering your retirement
And u puny fronting like your improving
All that forward thinking got you misinterpreting why ya life is in ruins
And one step closer got ya hurting dumb fuck
But Go ahead try and bluff telling everyone it was an expert u lost to



Fin

[Ronin]

It wask don key, make u weiser, take rib out
Vs
Nothing really. Not even something resembling a punch.

V/ baldo the beta

[Junto]

pass gas on you, shoot at this square, off the glass on you
to be blunt, I'd have passed on you but Sharp said make ash of you
not real complex... not bad though
so much class on you, yah dead homie! bout to pour a flask on you
this here's a Don key, can't you tell....I'm about to make an ass of you
pretty solid
you're up against a Frogman that will Seal the deal with ease, coward
I'll mistake your girl for a towel head after she leaves the shower
ehh ok
I'm nice, I'll shoot at you and thank you for letting me, kind sir
show up with cans in hand, and trust the bud you smoke don't make you weiser
bud-wiser been done too much for me
I've got the raddist of jargons, blam at your squadron
and take rib out quicker than Adam in the Garden
wording almost killed this but the idea nice
these days I'm striking with more precision
you bisexual
meaning you were butthurt before and after the supreme courts decision
howyoumean? didn't connect real well for me

vs.

Fuckin dunce
Im covering all the bases even when I bunt get me chump
ok... doesn't hit real hard though
Cuz chyeahh getting the win this week a myth
He getting fucked bro and any contenders I'm leaving stitched
not feelin that one
you know how I know u fake
Cuz I smoke and blaze you just a shimmer compared to my gloat and fame
gotta throw somethin harder man... this would be cooler for a snf match
So keep rising
Cuz after this battle I'll have u considering your retirement
too simple here
And u puny fronting like your improving
All that forward thinking got you misinterpreting why ya life is in ruins
aight, this is more towards having an angle...
And one step closer got ya hurting dumb fuck
But Go ahead try and bluff telling everyone it was an expert u lost to
?? I thought u might be goin for ABBA... but this doesn't rhyme anywhere homie

Chyeaa, you had a couple nice hits here. Don key was solid & rib was a dope concept.
work on your wording though my nigga... like that "so much class on you" shit...
I like throwin a extra rhyme or two in the opener. But what does that mean?
Then "raddist of jargons" & the punch wording took that rib concept down which was nice
Overall not bad... gave you some feed cuz I feel like most people just vote harsh on you.
ribbit, you gotta read shit around the league more. you can have your own style
but the punches just ain't there. you gotta get some nameplays, w/p, gun bars, or sum
Chyeaa got this one

V/ Chyeea

[Maximus]

Alpo got this easily with the donkey and adam garden lines, they were both solid but couldve been better with cleaner wording. Ribbit obviously is a noob and had nothing at all but don't give up @ribbit go to the archives and read how the greats did it, u got to incorporate metaphors, wordplays, nameplays, misdirections, personals etc, there have to be a concept from which u build upon to diss ur opponent, not just by rhyming words randomly. Keep battling.
V/alpo

[Sharp]

I don't even know where to start with ribbit's verse... are you the homie 2triple0 by any chance? yeah you could probably benefit from reading a few battles and looking for wordplay cause at its root text battling is based around wordplay more than flow

chyeahhh's bars were fairly basic but enjoyable. dug the opener and rib ones.

v/chyeahhh!!!

[Wanderer]

Well does this really require a breakdown? Chyeah obvs takes it with a proper text battle verse. Ribbit seems to have the wrong idea about what's expected at the moment but in time you never know..

Chyeah never had much to do at all but dudes verse was still pretty weak. The don key line was cool but I guess that's all I'd have as a quotable.

Anyway..

V/Chyeah

[sral]

Ribbit must have just threw up a quick key this week I'm guessing? I'm sure I've seen him come much harder.

Chyeahhh's verse sure seemed more swag and flow-esque here, to be truthful, but he still had enough to take this battle.

Towel head was cool, I actually liked the Budweiser line too, Don key and take rib out were good but I'm sure he'll have heard the name play a few times already by now.

One-sided battle here but Chinyeahhh took this one comfortably.