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Old 04-08-2015, 07:29 PM   #1
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Been as hot as lava stone, Beer Belly monotone.
Reciting Kabbalah, kept the promise of Mufasa's throne.
This day is your reckoning, Disrespect anything.
Bear nuts detects the scent of Malcom X's wedding ring.
Siphoning oxygen, lots of things moccasin.
Wide swing karate chop the Chakras of the ostriches.
Tall as the hat on Abraham, kneading boobs with baby hands
I was in Hiroshima saving Asiatic pastry pans.
Can't leave the table without broccoli, I'm raps sovereignty.
Living through apocalyptic Pocahontas prophecy.
Double cup styrofoam, Smoking out of lion bone.
Im in Sri Lankan me and Willy Wonka with the xylophone.
They call me mr super mass appeal, Feasting on Happy Meals
I'll ruin your sabbatical with mathematic daffodils.
Enough force to kill a minotaur, Sell carcass at the Cricket store.
Homemade elixir, sip the syrup from the sycamore.
Wild boy eating cattle feed, snorting all the apple seed.
the master of the tabernacle Scrabble team.
Mortified by raps from Mordecai, Building up to fortify.
All hail and glorify The 4th Immortal Porcupine. (Das me)
This skin is just a uniform, always seen in human form.
I give illusion of the morning moon and unicorn.
Jerking off in the parking lot to pictures of an Argonaut.
Then holding up a holographic polka dot Wahhabi mosque.
White devil with the soul of Farrakhan, Running raps marathon.
Swingin wood harder than Barry Bonds' waving a hydrologic fairy wand.
Living better than an Huxtable, They say I'm comfortable.
Cause I find luxury and sustenance in Lunchables.
Following behind Gahndis robe, Welcome to the zombie show.
Cooking on salami stove, reading Egyptian scripture comet stones.
Balancing on my hovercraft, You sufferin succotash.
How you got muscle mass but love honey suckle bubble baths.
Im Tom Green humping an antelope, The poisons only antidote.
Floating on banana boats read me my Miranda rights as I'm ripping panda throats
Snipe you from my flight while you're at baggage claim, Trap your son in my rabbit cage.
A fucking savage, he ate the cabbage out Aladdin's cave.
I play the bottom corner like pocket lint, Murder with a socket wrench.
My clock is set, a pair of piranha jaws while I'm shooting off rocket ships
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Old 04-08-2015, 08:23 PM   #2
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Nice. That honey suckle shit smell glorious, brah.
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Old 04-08-2015, 10:31 PM   #3
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Lmao thanks & Im sure it does
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Old 04-09-2015, 07:06 PM   #4
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this was different, and fun. your rhyming style is pretty cool and unique. the vocab was very original too but the content was really strange, to a point that it came off as totally random shit. again the rhyming was good but the verse itself was just kinda weird. i did like this though because it was fresh and different. and nothing was predictable. so yeah, made for an entertaining read. would be cool to see u fully commit to a theme of some sort and see what you can come up with. stay posting round these parts broseph
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