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Old 03-25-2015, 02:30 PM   #1
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nothing comes easy, put in this world to fight
i know my reps on the line, doin' curls with life
i aint never seen a king, without kingdom scars
your nobody, until somebody thinks you are
s'why i always plan shit, executed the plot
buried, so nobody knows, only you and ur god
you cant trust anybody, i dont play with teams
keep your secrets, take'm to the grave, my G
they say loose lips sink ships, and thats a fact
my boats been afloat 33 yrs, im a classic act
the shit i know could bury folks, deep in hell
important information, i aint felt the need to tell
last of a dying breed, we all know where we at
populations getting thin, its aerobics for rats
world took a twist for the worst here lately
the realness is dying, with every birth of a baby
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Old 03-25-2015, 08:38 PM   #2
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The first line was clever I liked that, this was short but didn't need to be long, it worked perfect. Nice little written here Genocide. Rhymes were basic but that's okay
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Old 03-25-2015, 11:22 PM   #3
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the return to the written word. this was vintage.

nothing terribly heavy in terms of content - but this was a personal commentary from your own perspective and nothing less. you got a bit broader at times, discussing the population at large towards the end but the majority of this is like your ode to the struggle you face. but not as a victim. as one who overcomes, biting the bullet and striking back with twice the force. its more of an aural impression than one of singular quotation.

good to see this.

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