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nok Su kow
Join Date: Jan 2013
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Fucking stud, look at all of Oregon squirting
Torture insurgents with one thrust through the porcelain curtain Keep em closed- every dream is gold in gorgeous cursive Pour your worth in, my fist fuck charm gets the corpse a'flirtin Bow tie bullet holes have this low tide shore a'bursting This idle tongue is sniper fun where I store inertia Board of tumbleweeds, do your chores while I explore Wars that buckle me, brain spores where I store the substance key We're just short of lovely spring. But that might dwarf a couple things Hit the club & pick a slut- go score a troubled queen This suicide king knife slash hair piece You've seen it all? Well I can't even see past an eye lash, barely I'm mad; therapy, witness a brilliant time lapse rarity Just a fucking hi-jack parody. Your mom sold Wise crack, parenting Used to drain grape vines, not like I miss the wine glass, terribly But this clarity sucks, pairing me up with flying monkey lost style Turn my back for a second & they're prying stuffing straw out Jaw down, teething on side walk edge With my legion of eye-pop friends, Fiending a cyclops death A sequence of life dawns fresh juniper fragrance Beware of lucifer patience. Scared of new inspiration All this fucking beauty is flagrant, my dignity is chained Nude in the basement, oh so cruel with basics Fork lifting fuck you's to fuse into face lifts To hold something so precious, you usually break it Answer hidden within land of snitches- this mutiny angel Acid author, adapt as water- so fluid's the angle And so brutal's the halo stitched to crown remnant Just fidget & lounge, pensive. The trick is to sound eminent My insides might be rough, but it's all liquid around edges And I'm lifting the cloud pressure Y'all can piece it together, I fiend to dislodge the puzzle What- y'all think I forgot my uncle? And the shit he taught me? See I have reason to chop the muscle Fuck you, your family & your awkward hustle Bet y'all counting down days til my jaw gets muzzled No rain dance but Wise doing the worm through the longest puddle
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"black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch" Last edited by Wise Wiggles; 02-14-2015 at 06:36 PM. |
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living
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 3,485
Battle Record: 33-18
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love u daddy
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SOBER
Join Date: Jan 2013
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Dopeness.
"This suicide king knife slash hair piece You've seen it all? Well I can't even see past an eye lash, barely" "Just a fucking hi-jack parody. Your mom sold Wise crack, parenting" "A sequence of life dawns fresh juniper fragrance" "To hold something so precious, you usually break it" Were all ridiculous. Schemes on schemes on schemes, with content.
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Arm the Homeless
Join Date: Jan 2013
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This was fucking gnarly. Basically every line was quotable. Some of them for the rhyming, some because of the schemes, but most of them because its so fucking raw. Nice.
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