WK11: NYCSPITZ (6-4) vs. Mr. J (5-5) [Mr. J wins by NS.]

King Ra. · 12-28-2014, 10:05 PM

AOWL Season IV, Week 11

OFFICIAL RULES:

Verses are due Saturday, January 4th, 11:59p.m. PCT/2:59a.m. EST/7:59a.m. UK. There are NO extensions.

Verses MUST be a minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 16 lines.

Votes are due Tuesday, January 6th, 11:00p.m. PCT/8p.m. EST/4a.m. UK. Failure to vote will result in automatic sign out for the next week.

TOPIC: Click here.

Good luck. @NYCSPITZ @Mr. J

Mr. J · 12-29-2014, 06:49 PM

I lol'd at the 6th being a Monday

Mr. J · 01-03-2015, 07:22 PM

Dreams are often most profound when they seem the most crazy. - Sigmund Freud.

That's why I dream of snakes in a pit waiting til' I slip
the way that I've seen the hate in this shit has been making me sick
did I get hit with some poison? have I been cursed for enjoyment
I hung a dream catcher over my bed so I could get rid of the annoyance
cross my heart & say a prayer, get a reply from something that's not there
I'm scared...which is out of character but I'm frozen in my chair...
silence, then laughter fills the room in a way that seems luminescent
I'm confused, I'm threatened, I'm a loose cannon holding dooms impressions
I unload and shoot..it's precious, glorious but I feel a bit misguided..
why am I so violent when my own ideas always seem to get slighted?
why are these ho's so excited...that's how you get your ex sighted
the whole scene has altered and I assume that it's an alcoholics problem
I'm sippin', I'm sobbin', I'm alone when walking in the literary department
I smash a desk, a rip a few pages out of a book with dust on it..
this type of inspiration seems rare, and these feelings don't come often...
that's when the alarm went off...and all these actions become conscious

12-28-2014, 10:05 PM	#1
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	WK11: NYCSPITZ (6-4) vs. Mr. J (5-5) [Mr. J wins by NS.] AOWL Season IV, Week 11 OFFICIAL RULES: Verses are due Saturday, January 4th, 11:59p.m. PCT/2:59a.m. EST/7:59a.m. UK. There are NO extensions. Verses MUST be a minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 16 lines. Votes are due Tuesday, January 6th, 11:00p.m. PCT/8p.m. EST/4a.m. UK. Failure to vote will result in automatic sign out for the next week. TOPIC: Click here. Good luck. @NYCSPITZ @Mr. J __________________ Vetwork, bitches.

12-29-2014, 06:49 PM	#2
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	I lol'd at the 6th being a Monday __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

01-03-2015, 07:22 PM	#3
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Dreams are often most profound when they seem the most crazy. - Sigmund Freud. That's why I dream of snakes in a pit waiting til' I slip the way that I've seen the hate in this shit has been making me sick did I get hit with some poison? have I been cursed for enjoyment I hung a dream catcher over my bed so I could get rid of the annoyance cross my heart & say a prayer, get a reply from something that's not there I'm scared...which is out of character but I'm frozen in my chair... silence, then laughter fills the room in a way that seems luminescent I'm confused, I'm threatened, I'm a loose cannon holding dooms impressions I unload and shoot..it's precious, glorious but I feel a bit misguided.. why am I so violent when my own ideas always seem to get slighted? why are these ho's so excited...that's how you get your ex sighted the whole scene has altered and I assume that it's an alcoholics problem I'm sippin', I'm sobbin', I'm alone when walking in the literary department I smash a desk, a rip a few pages out of a book with dust on it.. this type of inspiration seems rare, and these feelings don't come often... that's when the alarm went off...and all these actions become conscious __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

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