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Pharaohs Army · 08-23-2016, 03:52 AM

infinity

Pharaohs Army · 08-23-2016, 03:57 AM

0

Nobody · 08-24-2016, 01:23 AM

Well pluck my chicken this was gorgeous

Mr. J · 08-24-2016, 05:41 PM

The message here doesnt shine through until the end.
this was more like you merely talking in rhyme for the sake of rhyming.
not sure what the quoted portion above is supposed to portray.
maybe you just hit a level of hidden message intelligence that I cant fathom.
whatever the case is I thought there was a mixture of throw away & memorable lines

allow me to justify my unawareness and poor choices,
by letting me pretend the internet is longterm prisons and quizzes at my expense for your enjoyment.
let me interview myself for what i perceive to be employment.

^^^^
Ideas like that came together nicely then I dont know what the hell you were talking about
honestly I wasnt going to read this due to your most recent outburst of posting that seemed odd.
this honestly reminded me of a mixture of JESODIST & someone else on here that writes a bunch of mixed lines & flashy wording...
eh whatever...

you came prepared to do work even though focus was lacking
but you still were capable to pull something together that would make me read....so yea

08-23-2016, 03:52 AM	#1
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	random order (nothing new) infinity Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 11-02-2016 at 04:44 AM.

08-23-2016, 03:57 AM	#2
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	0 Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 11-02-2016 at 04:37 AM.

08-24-2016, 05:41 PM	#4
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	The message here doesnt shine through until the end. this was more like you merely talking in rhyme for the sake of rhyming. not sure what the quoted portion above is supposed to portray. maybe you just hit a level of hidden message intelligence that I cant fathom. whatever the case is I thought there was a mixture of throw away & memorable lines allow me to justify my unawareness and poor choices, by letting me pretend the internet is longterm prisons and quizzes at my expense for your enjoyment. let me interview myself for what i perceive to be employment. ^^^^ Ideas like that came together nicely then I dont know what the hell you were talking about honestly I wasnt going to read this due to your most recent outburst of posting that seemed odd. this honestly reminded me of a mixture of JESODIST & someone else on here that writes a bunch of mixed lines & flashy wording... eh whatever... you came prepared to do work even though focus was lacking but you still were capable to pull something together that would make me read....so yea __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

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08-24-2016, 01:23 AM	#3
Nobody Junior Member Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 5 Rep Power: 0	Well pluck my chicken this was gorgeous