Contender Match: Junto 2-0 vs Sn00p 2-0 - sn00p WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, May 14th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 12, maximum of 18
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@Junto @Sn00p

[Sn00p]

sup. 16?

[Junto]

cool wit me... good luck

[Sn00p]

seems like we gonna need the ext

[Sn00p]

@Junto. 16 sent.

[Junto]

Originally Posted by Sn00p

@Junto, now w/ ur explanation that line works a lot better. i kinda feel bad now cuz that might'a changed my voter after all. not that it mattered in the end, but still.

Originally Posted by Junto

don't beat yourself up over it partner... I'll see you soon enough

Time to handle that.

ay...

How long it take for u to make this level? your outlooks shitty & it's gray
I start again from scratch & I'm back to dope REAL quick - I'm like Strikta in that way
Got a shank for your spleen, plus this spade that'll have your bowels shoveled
I could always shoot. But my gameplan's attack ur center like he's in early foul trouble
Neighbor, Allen, Cashius --- that's a list of respected guys I'd wanna beat
I came here to battle peers... not crack a little fuckin clam off the side of one to eat
Weren't around in the hay day, but now you're a vet? that's a sorrow...
If you could go back in time you would die more deaths than Edge of Tomorrow
This guy daydreams bout himself really walkin thru the hood... all amped
Snoop, son... come to LA. You'll have bullets flyin at you, no Bruins football camp
New weekend new city. I hit the clubs, bring back some ass & smoke cool blunts
u prolly get a room & board. Then complain when ur parents still ask for the full month's
Closest thing u seen to filthy rich, so I won't get personal wit ya type. Silly bitch
Send my team to kill eem quick... & I 'll just be off to the side lookin past you like Jilti pic
Sure Snoop... you mighta made some moves in the text slump
but if they ask Who the future? ya can tell em its Jun.. now that I knock'd u into next month

[Allen Knight]

sn00p verse

this kid got ambition...

& i ain't hatin' if u wanna go for the champ
got the knife pointed at ya throat. shit, i really HOPE u advance
a hoe in his pants? jun's girl doesn't rly sleep w/ men
ususally she blames it on her period. & he's like 'aw, it's that time of the week again?!'
getting love only from prostitutes must've driven u insane. this square is truly lame
strip club big shot. seems u turned to greed to fill the empty space like aero's username

Originally Posted by Junto vs Orc

Look if it's beef I let the heat do the checkin - it's so easy wit weapons
Bring ya whole crew to see me... after some words I'll drop 'ichio' like a BB impression

^that's ironic. i mean idk if this kid reads news...
but the way u die here... seems like u're doing a BB impression this week too
& to be sure he dies in the dirt, i empty the mag when fighting this nerd
make the whole clip dissappear like no, i don't need help w/ microsoft word
orchids wp? i'm dough boy, make ur punk ass turn over & get snuffed for that nonsense
if you make anyone turn over, it's vets in their graves cuz u bite & butcher their concepts
this kinda stuff is the onset. u're the most delusional of all ur pals, u bitch
i mean thinking u can win this, u're just playing urself like Being John Malkovich
the abortion was shameful. at least get that little girl a nice casket
we've seen Jun nip'er in the Bud. let's just hope a Berry'll be there right after

[Sharp]

...

How long it take for u to make this level? your outlooks shitty & it's gray
I start again from scratch & I'm back to dope REAL quick - I'm like Strikta in that way
cool but not really directed at him
Got a shank for your spleen, plus this spade that'll have your bowels shoveled
I could always shoot. But my gameplan's attack ur center like he's in early foul trouble
nice
Neighbor, Allen, Cashius --- that's a list of respected guys I'd wanna beat
I came here to battle peers... not crack a little fuckin clam off the side of one to eat
ok
Weren't around in the hay day, but now you're a vet? that's a sorrow...
If you could go back in time you would die more deaths than Edge of Tomorrow
Alright
This guy daydreams bout himself really walkin thru the hood... all amped
Snoop, son... come to LA. You'll have bullets flyin at you, no Bruins football camp
eh
New weekend new city. I hit the clubs, bring back some ass & smoke cool blunts
u prolly get a room & board. Then complain when ur parents still ask for the full month's
nice
Closest thing u seen to filthy rich, so I won't get personal wit ya type. Silly bitch
Send my team to kill eem quick... & I 'll just be off to the side lookin past you like Jilti pic
cool
Sure Snoop... you mighta made some moves in the text slump
but if they ask Who the future? ya can tell em its Jun.. now that I knock'd u into next month
nice


Consistent verse but nothing too heavy. I liked the center, room and board and jilti lines




this kid got ambition...

& i ain't hatin' if u wanna go for the champ
got the knife pointed at ya throat. shit, i really HOPE u advance
nice
a hoe in his pants? jun's girl doesn't rly sleep w/ men
ususally she blames it on her period. & he's like 'aw, it's that time of the week again?!'
lol... Ok
getting love only from prostitutes must've driven u insane. this square is truly lame
strip club big shot. seems u turned to greed to fill the empty space like aero's username
cool wordplay but not too harsh


^that's ironic. i mean idk if this kid reads news...
but the way u die here... seems like u're doing a BB impression this week too
slick
& to be sure he dies in the dirt, i empty the mag when fighting this nerd
make the whole clip dissappear like no, i don't need help w/ microsoft word
If I ever end up on grindtime I'm using this lol. Liked it
orchids wp? i'm dough boy, make ur punk ass turn over & get snuffed for that nonsense
if you make anyone turn over, it's vets in their graves cuz u bite & butcher their concepts
not feeling
this kinda stuff is the onset. u're the most delusional of all ur pals, u bitch
i mean thinking u can win this, u're just playing urself like Being John Malkovich
Alright
the abortion was shameful. at least get that little girl a nice casket
we've seen Jun nip'er in the Bud. let's just hope a Berry'll be there right after
cool




I got center, room and board and jilti

V

Advance, bb, Microsoft


Cool battle. Close but I got sn00p on consistency and with harder hits but I could see it coming down to taste

V/sn00p

[Cred]

Foul trouble, bruins football camp, next.month

VS

Bb impression too, Microsoft word

Battle came down to the lines I quoted above n imo I feel jus cJunto came wit a bit more of a consistent verse. Snoop had lotb wit dat bb joint though. Shit was fiyahhh. But jun edges this one

[iSpaz]

How long it take for u to make this level? your outlooks shitty & it's gray
I start again from scratch & I'm back to dope REAL quick - I'm like Strikta in that way
// not bad
Got a shank for your spleen, plus this spade that'll have your bowels shoveled
I could always shoot. But my gameplan's attack ur center like he's in early foul trouble
// this works cool
Neighbor, Allen, Cashius --- that's a list of respected guys I'd wanna beat
I came here to battle peers... not crack a little fuckin clam off the side of one to eat
// piers, not bad
Weren't around in the hay day, but now you're a vet? that's a sorrow...
If you could go back in time you would die more deaths than Edge of Tomorrow
// ok
This guy daydreams bout himself really walkin thru the hood... all amped
Snoop, son... come to LA. You'll have bullets flyin at you, no Bruins football camp
// this was cool, not a fan of bars that state, no "this" at the end
New weekend new city. I hit the clubs, bring back some ass & smoke cool blunts
u prolly get a room & board. Then complain when ur parents still ask for the full month's
// lol
Closest thing u seen to filthy rich, so I won't get personal wit ya type. Silly bitch
Send my team to kill eem quick... & I 'll just be off to the side lookin past you like Jilti pic
// i liked it
Sure Snoop... you mighta made some moves in the text slump
but if they ask Who the future? ya can tell em its Jun.. now that I knock'd u into next month
// alright


& i ain't hatin' if u wanna go for the champ
got the knife pointed at ya throat. shit, i really HOPE u advance
// dope
a hoe in his pants? jun's girl doesn't rly sleep w/ men
ususally she blames it on her period. & he's like 'aw, it's that time of the week again?!'
\\ kinda funny
getting love only from prostitutes must've driven u insane. this square is truly lame
strip club big shot. seems u turned to greed to fill the empty space like aero's username
\\ not bad
^that's ironic. i mean idk if this kid reads news...
but the way u die here... seems like u're doing a BB impression this week too
// yoo
& to be sure he dies in the dirt, i empty the mag when fighting this nerd
make the whole clip dissappear like no, i don't need help w/ microsoft word
\\ not bad
orchids wp? i'm dough boy, make ur punk ass turn over & get snuffed for that nonsense
if you make anyone turn over, it's vets in their graves cuz u bite & butcher their concepts
// fell flat for me
this kinda stuff is the onset. u're the most delusional of all ur pals, u bitch
i mean thinking u can win this, u're just playing urself like Being John Malkovich
// ok
the abortion was shameful. at least get that little girl a nice casket
we've seen Jun nip'er in the Bud. let's just hope a Berry'll be there right after
\\ not bad


shit i liked both verses, def cool battle. i think a couple of snoops lines hit harder for me though

v/snoop

[Wanderer]

Attack ur center, peers, full months

Vs

Microsoft word , butchered concepts, john malkovich

Difficult one, I think it was pretty even, both had some stuff that was like blah cos wording was off or I just wasn't feeling. Cos I thought Microsoft word was LOTB (wasn't that difficult but I just really dug it) going with snoop

V/Snoop

[Destroyer]

this was a decent battle, but I think snoop took it pretty handily. I liked jun's opener, but it was more of a punch directed towards strikta and so it didn't really hit hard though it was humorous. jilti pic was funny too, but again, not really directed at snoop. the ones that were we're just light jabs. pier/peer?
anyway, snoop had the hope you advance bar which was dope, Microsoft word, closer and malkovich were more than enough to take it

v/snoop

[Tic]

Junto had attack your center and end of the month. Other than that, the jilti pic was an almost. Actually clams was decent too. Wasn't really feeling much else which is odd from you.

Snoop had the opener, BB and Microsoft word. Playing yourself was an almost. Solid overall verse. That word line was dope and the bb was slick. Cool battle.

Snoop

[jilti]

Here are what i felt were the standout lines from each competitor..


Got a shank for your spleen, plus this spade that'll have your bowels shoveled
I could always shoot. But my gameplan's attack ur center like he's in early foul trouble
dope
This guy daydreams bout himself really walkin thru the hood... all amped
Snoop, son... come to LA. You'll have bullets flyin at you, no Bruins football camp
dope
New weekend new city. I hit the clubs, bring back some ass & smoke cool blunts
u prolly get a room & board. Then complain when ur parents still ask for the full month's
lotb

vs.

& i ain't hatin' if u wanna go for the champ
got the knife pointed at ya throat. shit, i really HOPE u advance
nice
getting love only from prostitutes must've driven u insane. this square is truly lame
strip club big shot. seems u turned to greed to fill the empty space like aero's username
really slick, and current event
^that's ironic. i mean idk if this kid reads news...
but the way u die here... seems like u're doing a BB impression this week too
whew, clean
& to be sure he dies in the dirt, i empty the mag when fighting this nerd
make the whole clip dissappear like no, i don't need help w/ microsoft word
cool


got Jun w/ lotb but snoop w/ the 4-3 edge.
Dope battle..

Vote-Snoop

[Razah]

Junto had an okay verse. Like, all the bars were okay, nothing was like, Ahhh that was cool, or whatever.

This is what I liked from Snoop:
^that's ironic. i mean idk if this kid reads news...
but the way u die here... seems like u're doing a BB impression this week too

& to be sure he dies in the dirt, i empty the mag when fighting this nerd
make the whole clip dissappear like no, i don't need help w/ microsoft word

The BB line was kinda bogus, but.. it was a good bar. I dunno why the Microsoft Word line made me laugh. I can actually hear that being said, so that stood out to me.

I dunno, I'm noticing cats having kinda wordy bars with good concepts, but wordy for the sake of making the punch work. I'ma have to go with Snoop

vSnoop