Flo
Opener wasn't strong enough to kick this off tough. It looked stretched, and the Blomus connection seemed pointless, considering to say your opponent was 'jarred', isn't really too damaging. I really liked the next bar. It was worded well and executed nicely. Next bar was ok. Internals were decent, and the nameplay was alright. Wasn't keen on the next bar. Unless your name is ILL, then it doesn't work. Closer was ok. Wasn't really a tough hit but then again, it wasn't horrible.
Queen
Opener was terrible. Didn't rhyme, and the back-rhyme threw off the flow massively. Next bar was even worse. Fuck the fact you misspelled 'watt', it's the fact you compared yourself to 10 watts. Dull as fuck and not bright in the slightest. Says it all.
And shot & twat isn't even a near rhyme. I don't care if you speak Ewok or some off the chart Amazon dialect... it didn't rhyme one iota. Not good.
Toast, ghost, face, place??? You might aswell of told him he looks like a rat in a hat and you're a cat with a bat about to slap him and laugh. Terrible closer. You should be ashamed of yourself. Remove your fingers so you can't subject us to this torture again. Do it now!!
Extremely one sided.
MVGT Flo
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