Actually, tbh I was joking, and I joined in on the fun. I'm sure you would love feedback as you deserve it. STFU dex. You did a lot of stop and go, which is dull boy esque, but only something dull boy really mastered. and me, of course. cause i'm the best. I have moments on this site where, I'm big baby, then fig baby and now bug baby, but, I know writing, and although I haphazardly joke around and may purposely make myself seem like I suck. I'm actually awesome. This was really good. A lot of like, off kilter references and connections made on a tangent, but they were a bit muddled. I liked it. But then I saw that maybe you may have wrote it quite fast? I don't know. You are pretty good off the top, and it takes this weird connection of writing where you step it up literally just a tad to put out your top tier work. This here was cool. Could do less with the mimicry of DB, but had flashes of certain in and out. Message was kinda cool. Don't know if it was satirical or not in the grandest fashion, but if it was, cool, if it wasn't - cool too. Keep it up. :) @
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