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Old 06-07-2020, 10:52 AM   #15
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This was a weird one to vote on. I generally think story-telling/gimmick verses don’t work, unless they’re REALLY on point. So, although the first four lines of Aero’s verse were funny (and I kinda can’t believe he even attempted it), I didn’t think it very hard. But, the rest of his verse kept that comedic edge and moved into traditional punchline territory.. and was pretty solid.

Zelph had the more traditional verse. It was pretty good. But, I didn’t think any of the punches particularly stood out.

All in all, I think Aero edged it with his humor. He wins.
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