[Blue Bayou]

Leave or your ass is grass, I knew it was either flight or attack
A burrito & an hour later with no TP I guess she was right about that
smfh
I started texting death threats, flesh wounds from the heat in my hand
She's reading thinking it's spam, yea bitch I'm taking meat from the can
haha, pretty clever tbh. set up was great. dig it but not very hard hitting
Zelph snatched her phone, she took a drink, knew it'd be a long night
Started choking & smirked "It's my throat, I guess it went down the wrong pipe"
haha fire. great wit bar
I screamed "Zelph, Bayou ghosted you in Miami!" dude was just terrified
Faaaaam, that Blue catfish is the biggest in America & Google will verify
lol great personal worded very well. good hit
Clown, dates see ya lip & associate words but it doesn't suggest malice
Shit like "I'm torn, I gotta split.. ahh fuck it what's up with the cleft palate"
gooone. delivery made this great. another good followup personal and fresh angle on an often done concept
His bitch laughed off this cop's proposal, he's like "she's playing, it can't be"
Guess he knows what it's like going down on a knee & someone saying they cant breathe
lol again. good current event punch setup well with good comedic payoff


vs.


Whole life is a lie. We haven’t heard the truth from bro in a while
Aero? Aero? Aero? Is code for how his people say hello wen they smile
lol good fresh nameplay , liked this
Blast em in the teeth as I catch em in his sleep - but the tools vary
Too scary.. I’ll even leave a nickel under his pillow like the tooth fairy
cool gun bar
Im doing drastic damage. Wen I aim at ur lil world how will this cappin’ manage
Either a swole dude brings ur Planeteers or the 5 rings on ur kids like Captain Planet
creative but i didnt like the 'bring ur Planeteers or" part of the punch
Of course sticks will blam, but I’ll do more than just bring the cans..
Hell, I’ve been bullying Austin his whole career like Vince McMahon
solid straightforward nameplay. good not great
Ur whole fam is crazy. A pop to the dome’ll leave em’ dead & buried
Try to run & pole will separate ur sis’ head frm her body like Hereditary
great flick. tie in couldve been better then 'ur whole fam is crazy' but this was a cool gun bar
Always been a scammer. Wen things get tense ur known to run n scamper
Whack-a-mole; no matter what hole he crawls out of he’s gettin popped by a hammer
decentlty creative generic gun bar but they're over done at this point...i did a wack a mole concept in the past too so for me personally this one wasnt as fresh


Yeah this is a nice contrast of styles and i can see people being on compeltely different sides of this one. Aero's opener was his classic cornball cheese that aired to far on the corny side to hit, but the last 4 bars were all dope. Zelph had the funny nameplay opener, and was solid throughout with "prettyb good" gunbar concepts throughout

This will be style preference to the reader for sure....and aeros witty wording & comedic verse was more enjoyable to me ... can def see this going either way depending on what ppl are looking for


Vote - Aero