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Old 04-28-2019, 01:28 AM   #12
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Originally Posted by Cred View Post
The way I squeeze the foe..
u sound excited

Rounds thru the air like pizza dough. Bitch I keep a fully w/ a clip
Dis that Grim Reaper flow. Last thing JB seen was a Black hoodie n a Stick
that was slick
4 niggas 5 automatics that’ll clap it so we keep them tools tucked
Catchem in traffic letem have it. arms hangin out windows like a school bus
ok i guess
Drive by’s @ high speed! Jabari lackin n it’s a road block
Middle of the street. All u see is a 100 pipes thru the glass like a smoke shop
set up was actually dumb af, but the punchlines was fire, im conflicted.
Rifle n scope, shoot em right off the boat.. Then I untuck that mac
Gun to his back n shoot til he got more Bucks under water than Krusty Krab
good flip and wording, sponge bob reference ok sure
Chasin em wit a chopper like he jumpin borders. 6 shot make em drop dead
This shit like a Trump supporter. That MAGA leave ur whole fuckin top red
i had the same wordplay but couldnt get the wording good enough to use, this was slick, dope
More beams than a museum @ night. I’m shovin JB up in a box
Red n green dots EVERYWHERE.. in his casket lookin like he got the Skittles Pox
the concept and flip and punch all that shit was good but think about it, dudes dead in a casket and ur still aiming beams at him? bro maybe im high or maybe ur dumb honestly i just don't wanna get shot cause nothing more deadly than a dummy with the auto tucked.. all love bro
Got the Glock blastin. Slugs insert his whip, not past em
On my City worker shit.. got a pole so biggg in the street it cud stop traffic
that's fire


GUN BAR KING, I run this shit!
the gun bars were hit or miss but ok


See me sweat? No! My shooters camp out til u get ya teepee wet
Cus u’ll never see me stress. Got niggas who ‘ll let it Ring for the Low.. Metro PCS
good wording, never seen the flip ring for the low, that shit is cold
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Originally Posted by Jabari Black View Post
We got Jabari Black vs Cred...aka TakeEm2School
now i see why his arms were hanging out the window like a school bus, ok good stuff

You leaving a casualty! A headshot’ll fuck up ya faculties/
Or gun to ya chest! You’ll see the ‘4 chamber to ya heart’ like Human Anatomy/
simple but wording was good
Geechi Gotti said that Caitlin Jenner shit...and you bit the whole line/
Fucking fraud...you keep more ‘gaudy shit in ya mouth’ than Nelly in ‘05/
talk that shit
Got beef? We’ll spray the whole house to settle it bitch. Ya child near? Let em get hit/
The Code word was Scooby Doo...My dawgs even got the ‘meddlin kids’/
flames

U talked mad shit - i ain’t like ya speech. That stealing bars shit don’t fly with me/
You ain’t Jesus Christ but you’ll die like him...after I raise a beam beside a thief/
fire
It’s obscene how we play! Let it steam when the nina gets sprayed/
Or I’ll swing the switchblade...You’ll see the kid cutting School like senior skip day/
solid name flip and punch
GBB? Ya whole clique soft. Hush can’t save you when the clip drawn/
I’m from Atlanta bitch...nigga you know what happens to Vick’s Dawgs/
fucking fire
I let the heater blam at you/
Sit you down with the 5 under ya chin like the thinking man statue
first reaction was fire, second reaction was how has no 1 thought of that, no pun intended, dope
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K clip - I press it in. One fuckin word and ya head’ll spin/
Think eve in the garden...if I hear this snake talkin, I got ‘led to sin’/
not bad

over all: interesting battle. both had some creative lines. i think jabari was more consistent and had better wording. all around easy to flow with. cred was damn creative. almost as good as the orc battle wit dynamicz, probably second best battle. and that's not to take anything from either of you guys.

best lines were cred's opener and pipes through the glass (just the punch not the set up for fuck sake) and jabari had the thinking man line and his jesus rebuttal.

tough call. would have liked to see more personal angles and not just gun bars, but since u both took that angle it was a good match match up.


v/ JB

Last edited by josh s; 04-28-2019 at 01:33 AM. Reason: after re-reading, concluded that creds verse actually sounds good out loud good shit
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